Uncensored version of Little Sister’s Wonderful Surprise Visit [English - strong rewrite suspicion], by Hiroshi Itaba 
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2 December 2009
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Sister seduces brother, happy sex follows, good uncensored drawings, period ?
Nope, there is more to tell. |
By Hiroshi Itaba, I also share Nettai Ya 1-3 [English, partly uncensored] and No-Make Girl [English]
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As I already wrote, warning, there is a very strong probability this is actually a rewrite. The picture orientation is wrong, and the font choice is awkward. And yet, the dialogues are much less “off” than in other rewrites I’ve seen, this is why I’m still hesitating.
If you know for sure that this is a rewrite, please share the info, so that I may know if I can keep it, or not, on my personal collections
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on December 2nd, 2009 at 2:49 am
Yep, I can confirm that this is a rewrite. Sad too, from such a great artist.
None the less, thanks for the share, Oliver.
on December 2nd, 2009 at 2:54 am
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on December 2nd, 2009 at 3:49 am
Well, at least they were up front about it being a rewrite, which makes it closer to being okay in my book. It really bothers me that most rewrites don’t mention that they are rewrites.
on December 2nd, 2009 at 4:26 am
Looking at those pictures lead me to believe that this is the fourth chapter of nettai ya but I can’t be sure.
on December 2nd, 2009 at 4:29 am
At least it wasn’t an ‘Olddog51′ rewrite.
God, his rewrites made me nauseous.
on December 2nd, 2009 at 5:12 am
there’s NO way that’s not a rewrite. The lines are so gay it can’t come from anyone BUT that one guy who does nothing but edit these things.
on December 2nd, 2009 at 5:14 am
edit : Can’t believe i missed the smack in the face “THIS IS A REWRITE”
on December 2nd, 2009 at 10:26 am
Thanks for the confirmation, Setebos, I feel angry at seeing the “this is a rewrite” message had been removed from my version :mad:
on December 2nd, 2009 at 11:21 am
So will there be a chance that a proper translation of this hentai be shared here ?
on December 2nd, 2009 at 11:32 am
Many thanx Oliver.
on December 2nd, 2009 at 5:49 pm
Hm, Oliver, there is a one pathetic thing, what makes annoyed a litle. When I was unpacking .zip file, I got a message, that “The archive name couldn’t be more then 260 characters”. And it isn’t the first time I got such thing. (P.S. Deliting half of the .zip name can fix it, but…)
on December 3rd, 2009 at 12:02 am
this raises an interesting question. Should one rewrite the script, to spice the scenario up, for the benefit of the reader?
as you said on another post, scenarios rarely divert from the regular incest/lame formula (there are exceptions of course)
on December 3rd, 2009 at 1:41 am
Yeah, definite rewrite.
A) I don’t think they have “Prom” in Japan.
B) Japanese authors are MUCH better at writing.
on December 3rd, 2009 at 2:07 am
If someone sends me the raw, I know someone that is a Itaba Hiroshi fan and would have this properly translated.
on December 3rd, 2009 at 5:04 am
RAW: Starts at page 131
http://hotfile.com/dl/19362270/4082869/Boku_dake_no_Kuchibiru_(UPPED_BY_SPORNAX).rar.html
on December 3rd, 2009 at 6:02 am
@lamaig
“I got a message, that “The archive name couldn’t be more then 260 characters”.”
This can happen with long named files (albeit having less than those 260 characters), if you put them to deep into your folder structure. Depending on OS and unzip-program it might consider the whole path to this file as part of it’s name, e.g.
C:\documents_and_settings\accountname\my_files\pictures\Pron\more_Pron\new_folder\Hentai\hot-file-but-sadly-with-an-awfully_elongated-name-from-hentairules:zip
moving the file “higher up” this path and shortening it’s name might help.
OTOH, @Oliver, the principle of parsimony does apply to file names, too ;-p
on December 3rd, 2009 at 9:14 am
(Quoting Oliver) “I feel angry at seeing the “this is a rewrite” message had been removed from my version”
Wow. So despite that the guy had the common courtesy to explain that it was a rewrite, someone else went and edited that out?
I try not to say this (even though this is the internet), but what a douche.
on December 3rd, 2009 at 2:56 pm
Thank you, spornax. I believe you’ll be seeing a proper translation soon enough.;-)
on December 3rd, 2009 at 3:43 pm
Great, so, finally, some good will have come out of that mess
on December 15th, 2009 at 6:24 am
it says i need a pass word yto unzip sorry im new to all this stuff.can anyone give me a hand
on December 16th, 2009 at 8:21 pm
i found some works of ITABA HIROSHI but untranslated tho here is the site http://hentaidesu.com/2009/12/itaba-hiroshi-shirujyou.html and its really interesting if could someone can translate it… it would be nice
on July 10th, 2010 at 12:07 am
Actually, if you search this around, the name for this is Little Sister Divorcee