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Vaizard
14 years ago

it's the quality of the scan that is crap some you shouldn't blame the guy i have the MAG of Tenma and i must say it's crap (quality) there are to many colors that were ereased many gray tones disapered from it don't know who did the scan but it's crap

Zathael
14 years ago

Sorry to see you didn't like it Oliver. I will admit the scans are horrendous, but I thought the story was actually quite funny and entertaining, and I liked the tentacle fetish since it was part of the humor. As for the faces being drawn in a "distasteful" way, I am seriously hoping you were just reacting to the scans, because I thought the character drawings were very good, just poorly scanned.

hellbert
hellbert
14 years ago
Reply to  Zathael

Hope dies last.

Spica
Spica
14 years ago

Sure the brunette was kind of bland, but the red-head was cute and her cum face on page 23 was to die for.

Spica
Spica
14 years ago

Sure the scan is terrible, but what's not to like? Only the prologue and already we've got tentacles and a devil king with two dicks. What's more, the little bird is actually Sarah from Witchcraft. She gets some action of a more normal sort in the next chapter.

skyboy
skyboy
14 years ago

The scan is really bad. Orz.

Roflcaptar
Roflcaptar
14 years ago

Nope. Can’t see anything wrong with it.
Too godly for you I guess?

Mister Guest
Mister Guest
14 years ago

I kinda agree with Oliver. While the story wasn’t “The Worst Ever” is was still pretty bad for a Yamatogawa release. I guess after Witchcraft & Tayu Tayu, this seems like a step back.

Just saying.

that guy
that guy
14 years ago

i dont get whats ur problem admin.
you always want interesting scenarios. its just to prologue and this is turning out to be one of yamatogawa's most imaginative work yet. its much more interesting than his last one, um the one with the guy and the girl living in an apartment and even the tayu tayu one

i mean aside from the crappy scan this one is awesome
cant wait to see more from this

that guy
that guy
14 years ago

you know this one is a lot like shining musme
like with the demon thing taking advantage of the girls in all kinds of ways.
and you seem to be a big fan of that
and if i remember correctly shining musume had tentacles in it (that pedo bear thinggy)
so i dono

i guess we each have different tastes,
so i will stop with the harasser

Vaizard
14 years ago
Reply to  that guy

not every one has the same tastes you know. i personaly prefer happy normal sex to tentacles of course i do have fetishes about other stuff ^^

hellbert
hellbert
14 years ago

I don't know what is it that chapter lacks, but it lacks something… Apart from drawings, it doesn't feel like Yamatogawa:(
I mean, sure, if you just go "fap, fap, fap, fap, …" than you don't care. And its good for you, in that case being simpleton is a blessing.

Vaizard
14 years ago
Reply to  hellbert

usualy you would notice that in most artist but yamatogawa is an artist that uses GRAY TONES very much so the art look diferent some small line are completely erased and it is to much white, just wait hellbert i'm sure there will be a new scan ^^

Vaizard
14 years ago

the real problem are the scans all TENMA book from that chap are like that the images size are about 2000×3000 and most gray tones are dead the guy has a good scaner but really awfull skills i wish i had books to scan but i have to see that the guy wasted is money debiding the book and scanning for us oh well

Outsider
Outsider
14 years ago

Yeah, same reaction for me.
I saw it yesterday and gosh, how I was disappointed.
There is nothing interesting in the story, and the drawing are far from its best times.

I hope next chapters will be better. : (

Mavvy
Mavvy
14 years ago

Yamatogawa made an interesting turn. Maybe I should have read Oliver's comment after I read it but still tentacles aren't my thing either and the 3 heroines seem to lack any differences between them imo. Get nailed, try to suck his balls dry, endurance test ("even though they each try it their own way"). Hopefully turns out better in the following chapters.

Dynasty
Dynasty
14 years ago

i think that since his earlier stuff, witchcraft, aqua bless, tayu tayu were so good, it makes his average work seem even worse, not a big fan of tentacles but i read it anyway cuz its yamatogawa, like to see how this story develops

MasterPimp
MasterPimp
14 years ago

Downloading because it is YTamatogawa, but looking forward to reading it to see why you guys are commenting like this :)

lkaze
lkaze
14 years ago

hey,it seem like after the prologue , the whole storyline changed. Maybe it will be a gem?