Tachibana San’s Circumstances With A Man [English, 158 pictures], by MTSP 
(113 votes, average: 3.12 out of 5)
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6 February 2012
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Hooo, these wonderful, delicious, sweet curves ! This happy sex with soon love ! These sweet shades, perfectly outlining the body curves ! … |
You see, the rest is a fucken half-mindbreak story, with a fucked up ending.
Mind you : this did NOT end up in netorare, since netorare implies the male hero is having his feelings crushed, okay ? But instead, it ended in a half-baked lame-ass poor tasteless ending.
Let’s make a comparison, let’s imagine : when, after lots of ceremony, you’re served Dom Perignon, you expect it to taste better than sour orange juice, right ? The ending was sour like that, and we weren’t served what was promised. We weren’t served poison either, just sour juice that lost all flavour and is a little sickening.
Meh 
This was done was by Touma and Raikoh from Doujin-Moe.
By MTSP, with equally good drawings but with a better scenario and happier sex, I’m also sharing a Macross hentai doujin 
On the opposite, behind the doujin circle MTSP there is the artist Jin, from whom I’m sharing Educating A New Wife, a straight facepalm material. And then, rather on the half-assed side of things, there’s also a 6-works pack.
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on February 6th, 2012 at 4:33 am
Yeah 56 and on killed it for me im not sure to give it a 5 star or a 1 star. I like the art the the first half but the rest makes me want to……gahhhhhhh
on February 6th, 2012 at 4:35 am
Yo i love your description…This is why i love your site compare to others. Good to get some warning before i read lol. I'm having a hard time dealing with ntr or mindbreak etc altho i can deal with those a lot better then before hehe
on February 6th, 2012 at 4:35 am
sorry, you might hate me for it, it's only my opinion, so please don't bother reading this.
For me it's NTR, something is definitely being stolen from the MC, his fuck buddies (so to speak),
even though he didn't "claim" them, it's all about the feeling of losing someone precious.
For me, Netorare is all about the feeling of loss and the depression to not being able to do anything about it.
Do not reply to this, i know this might be wrong, but i can at least live with that explanation.
on February 6th, 2012 at 4:39 am
It will turn into NTR once he watches tht DVD tht he got from the store. But yea this was a pretty fucked up story since they always got pregnant at the end……
on February 6th, 2012 at 4:43 am
Did they get pregnant at the end? im not sure and i dont want to go back and look at it. It will just remind me of that feeling that i hate.
on February 6th, 2012 at 4:44 am
It is a serious waste of art….it gives a very bad taste after that page…..
on February 6th, 2012 at 4:49 am
Can anyone recommand a good H-manga that can help me get this nasty taste out of my mouth and forget about this?
on February 6th, 2012 at 4:50 am
The story highly hinted that they all did…. The second chapter is a fucking huge boner killer. Too bad I had read this shit before Oliver come and warn everybody. Now I need to try and overdose myself with some brain cells killer and hope I will forget all of this stuff tomorrow.
on February 6th, 2012 at 4:51 am
Damn ya i just skim through it cause i don't wanna read it but damn just a waste of good art. Art style really fits me but i hate the story lol
on February 6th, 2012 at 4:55 am
NTR with good art style like Nagare Ippon alway leave a bad taste in my mouth. Especially when the author go out of their way to establish the background for the relationship between the hero and heroine e.g. REC.
BTW there is a author notes at the end of the 2nd chapter. I wonder what is he talking about. I am really interested in knowing what authors think when day create such soul crushing story.
on February 6th, 2012 at 5:02 am
they did get pregnant cuz the MC was like they won the lottery or something, meaning the female characters found out tht they were pregnant
on February 6th, 2012 at 5:02 am
me too i skimmed it too much words in between
on February 6th, 2012 at 5:07 am
To be honest tho, I feel that the MC will go emo even when the guys that did that got arrested and shit.
on February 6th, 2012 at 5:17 am
…..the ending RUINED EVERYTHING!!!!
I love the guys artstyle…..but the ending tarnished such talent.
Thanks for the share anyway ^_^………T.T
on February 6th, 2012 at 5:24 am
At least he will find out what sluts they are before he waste his life on them.
on February 6th, 2012 at 5:31 am
Am I the only one in the west coast US unable to use Turbobit and Letitbit? I mean, I just ended up D/ling this from depositfiles, but I feel like this might be my provider and not the actual file sharing websites.
on February 6th, 2012 at 5:38 am
For me the problem was in three parts. The first was the weakness of the ending. We're just told that they got arrested and some hints about pregnancy. We don't see the arrest, any kind of vengeance or any conclusion at all. The second was the lack of a detailed reaction from the girls and mother at the end. Maybe it had to be done to leave the pregnancy thing at implications but it seemed to be cut off. Lastly the lack of anything with the waitress. She just apparently casually drugs people. Not bringing her into the sex (with the family or the boy) felt wasted.
In its defense the first two problems can be at least somewhat fixed if there's a third part. I will say that the NTR itself did make me bitter, but NTR always does that and it doesn't mean that it's weak so much as not my type (If you're wondering, I read it to continue from the first story and for the art).
Also, this isn't the fault of the writer or the scanner but on my computer the text was slightly too small to read, especially as the sex started and there was a ton of dialog. Having to manually increase the size of every single page gets irritating and soured me more.
on February 6th, 2012 at 5:39 am
Maybe the Boin Boin Teacher/Onsen series?
on February 6th, 2012 at 6:03 am
u can read some of oliver's post from yesterday if you haven't already
on February 6th, 2012 at 6:09 am
Thank you for that recommendation *even though it wasn't me who asked*.
on February 6th, 2012 at 6:20 am
Thanks Oliver, and to all the posters here… I know when I've been warned… and I have since moved on…
on February 6th, 2012 at 6:58 am
Look on the bright side, guys that posted here will probably never treat a like girl like that in real life. I know I won't
on February 6th, 2012 at 7:24 am
Ya, thanks from me too. Hate this mind break, gut wrenching type shit. So im avoiding this one like a plague.
on February 6th, 2012 at 7:40 am
well thanks for the share as always
on February 6th, 2012 at 7:47 am
I regret not listening to Oliver's warning and read through the whole thing. This literally made me feel like vomiting. For me, straight up NTR is one thing. I mean even though the feelings of the main male character would be utterly crushed, at least he knows what kind of woman/women he was dealing with and can move on to find someone better. This kind of open ended NTR is definitely the worst kind of NTR that exists. The MC has no idea that this has happened and will soon find out about it in the worst possible fashion. As the women of this genre goes, they will probably leave him for the bastards that drugged them. The possibility of imagining a happy ending is almost non-existent and leaves an even worse aftertaste since the mangaka took the time and effort to establish a tragic yet heart warming back story, only to have it completely destroyed in the matter of a single night. Maybe some will like this kind of material, but to me, this is the absolute WORST way to end even a NTR manga.
I'm still trying to wash away the aftertaste of this manga and have learned my lesson to read the description before actually reading the manga.
on February 6th, 2012 at 7:52 am
Meh normally I don't have any problem with NTR. I do get angry after reading them, but normally the horrible aftertaste gone after a few minutes. But not this. This is quite heavy even for MTSP's NTR standards. Also not a good idea to read this if you're on high caffeine consumption. I need to detox my system for a few days lol. Anyway thanks for the share. I was hoping this to be a normal/vanilla work from MTSP (when it first came out) but I was proved wrong.
on February 6th, 2012 at 7:56 am
I wish the author have a better ending than this.
on February 6th, 2012 at 8:00 am
Maybe watching some cats videos/pictures might help. I usually read some Yuri mangas to get my feel good factor back into my system.
on February 6th, 2012 at 8:05 am
but from the dialogue it sounded like they were going to abort it, as in look for a safe place
on February 6th, 2012 at 8:11 am
so is this NTR?
whatever i like it !
on February 6th, 2012 at 8:17 am
Reading just Vanilla Stories all day would be boring to me. It's just a fantasy anyways, so NTR or bad endings don't bother me.
Then again, that's maybe why i'm in LWB :P
on February 6th, 2012 at 9:36 am
Hate NTR.
So much.
It's even worse when the art is amazing like this, WHO BECOMES AROUSED BY THIS
on February 6th, 2012 at 10:06 am
I really hate NTR!
When i read a Hentai Manga i want to feel excited or almost satisfied with the lecture, but with the NTR stories I feel like an idiot because the females characters just want a cock, meanwhile the male protagonist feel like a shit.
In a Hentai manga you allways want to be the hero, but in NTR the male character it´s just a poor bastard.
on February 6th, 2012 at 10:08 am
The NTR stories are the story of my life…
Yes I know… Im a forever alone TTwTT
on February 6th, 2012 at 10:42 am
this manga is NTR
but i think in the last page explain about three of them trying to hide something….i guess that thing is AV they make with that bastard…and MC found it..
damn great artist with bad ending…
on February 6th, 2012 at 10:47 am
look on the bright side…they only did it once…not like nagare ippon ….
still NTR really fucked up…i don.t understand why japanese like that stuff
on February 6th, 2012 at 12:10 pm
This isn't as bad as othe NTR i seen cause at least they were free in the end and the guys that rape them got arrested. I think What made most of us rage was how good the back bone of the story was at the beining. It was romantic and a lil funny for a hentaia nd we all enjoyed but got slammed by the rape. But again like is said at least they were free and went back to him unlike a lot of the other NTR i read where they stay a sex slave.
on February 6th, 2012 at 12:27 pm
OMFG this is exactly what I like in hentai manga. Manga about cheating and treason is the best. Second ch. is masterpiece. Who doesn’t know The most of arts of this actor is about cheating.
on February 6th, 2012 at 1:33 pm
I have so many mixed feelings about this manga. It starts out with a very happy harem almost wincest kind of story kind of like mozaiku x sanshimai that works so well and then takes a strange turn to NTR. I don't mind NTR when I have no attachment to the hero and heroines of the story but this manga was so disenchanting, you simply do not put the two in the same story because it makes the audience feel stupid and the characters worthless.
on February 6th, 2012 at 2:15 pm
At the start i thought : "One of the best stories i have read the last weeks". But the second half was a bit messed up in my opinion. It explains why all of them have feelings for the guy and then the story just changes into "mindbreak". Too bad that this story was wasted at the end. The start would be a 5 Star Story but with the end i couldn´t give it only 1 Star. Hardly wasted talent if you ask me :/
on February 6th, 2012 at 2:21 pm
Until page 56? That's like 100 pages left…
on February 6th, 2012 at 3:02 pm
sorry guys…..maybe you haye this manga….
but I really love this hehehe…..
the art of MTSP is always the best for me….the amazing art makes up for the story….
so…..i hope there will be more of MTSP works….
on February 6th, 2012 at 3:52 pm
The real NTR starts in my opinion at page 153 last panel "the things we did and the things we said in that place", that means in the next extra which is planed for this summer. I think her phrase implice the typical NTR like complaining about Yuus dick and how great the dicks and the sex with this dudes is. And probably Yuu will see this video (they filmed that for sure too). And in the case in the mansion really happend the typical NTR stuff, then I think they deserved to get pregnant by this dudes (and perhaps the abortion fails/ can't be done and they get unfertile/ bear the children) and Yuu leaves them alone, goes back to his old house (when his gramps dies it would be his own) become a fine man with a good job (and when hes still growing now perhaps he gets a fine dick too and a great technique, which beats the ones of the douchbags), he finds a fine woman as girlfriend and wife, founds a happy and lovely family with a lots of kids. And the Tachibanas have to see this all (they are neighbors) and will regret the night where they did this stuff on their own (the possible extra chapter) bitterly.
on February 6th, 2012 at 4:01 pm
I seriously need to read description from now on, the last mind break part, was endurable, to say the least but not my type of ending. Damn, why do I not do what I'm supposed to. The art was too good, to really mind the description.LOL
on February 6th, 2012 at 4:11 pm
After reading the comments, now I can't make up my mind if I should download this one. Hahaha
on February 6th, 2012 at 4:55 pm
God damn . . .. i didn't thought the after effect was this bad!!
This one give worse after effect than Nagare Ippon works . . . damn
on February 6th, 2012 at 5:12 pm
give it a try….It is one of the most beautiful art….the girls are wonderfull…
on February 6th, 2012 at 5:31 pm
from what little japanese that i could understand, it seems like he plans on writing a threesome but when ideas for the chapter were to include MILF, sis, big boobs and massage therapists… well…. this is the story u get..
However he feels that the transition may not be done as well as he has hoped as he feels there might be many missing links. Oh… and initially he planned on drawing a 20pg story on what they did in the manor but as he had a tight schedule, he dropped the idea.
He writes that he wants to go into gaming industry (im guessing visual novels) but he won't drop the idea of leaving the H-manga industry and hopes to create more interesting scenario.
I didn't translate everything.. juz stuff that i can understand and stuff that i think are relevant to ur curiosity. In case u can't understand a shit tt im saying.. sorry.. im not a native speaker of English.
on February 6th, 2012 at 6:28 pm
just stop at page 56 like it's recommended or just download the fisrt part from doujin-moe
on February 6th, 2012 at 8:07 pm
I think you should warn about PREGNANT!
If they didn't pregnant may be MC will forgive them.
I'm a fan of this artist but I hate bad ending with girl get pregnant. Damn
Thank you Oliver.
on February 6th, 2012 at 8:38 pm
it's one thing to read something bad turns to worst but it's definitely sux when it feels like they've built a sweet vanilla cake in front of you then smash it as they add the cherry on top. XD
on February 6th, 2012 at 9:04 pm
i really …. really hate this story(very shameful)
i don't understand why all of people (men) like NTR
always NTR again
the winner(hero) always woman and bad guy
the loser always good guy
men today have no pride, self-esteem and shame(very loser)
no download …. no read …. no…no…no….no(sorry)
on February 6th, 2012 at 9:28 pm
Because the first half is very heart warming that make the second half does TERRIBLE TERRIBLE damage to the reader.
Even they abort the pregnant, the MC still know about them trough the video. So, this is completely a NTR.
And because the first half draw you into the character so much, you will feel a very strong emotion from the turning point of the story.
Normally I can bear a NTR thing to some point . But this manga is a REAL mind blower.
So, if you not a hardcore type of NTR, you should avoid it at all cost. No matter how good the art it is.
on February 6th, 2012 at 9:47 pm
Normally I just lurk around without commenting, and normally when you say NTR and mindbreak be warned, I ignore it and read anyways, cause lets face it, they most of the time have amazing art >>. This………this was just bad. I really hope that the mangka decides to atleast come back to this and fix it. But since I'm posting for the first time, might as well say keep up the good work with the post
on February 6th, 2012 at 9:54 pm
THE ONE TIME THAT I DONT READ OLIVERS DESCRIPTION!!! Fuck, Man. With the set up, I was expecting that stupid fucking kid to come stumbling in and get the shit beat out of him to save the women, not this Neto shit…
Shit like that makes me feel like I lost a sliver of my soul…
on February 6th, 2012 at 10:10 pm
Hmmm, for my part, considering Oliver's warning, I'm left with a pretty good impression, only slightly subdued by what comes after the… good part? What I mean to say is that, after reading the warning and getting the hints of what was about to happen ("OH WE'RE SO GOING TO DO THEM !!"), I just skipped through everything in 10secs or so (probably more like 5), and read the last 2 pages or so to see the conclusion… No harm done, it deserves a 4 at least !
on February 6th, 2012 at 10:20 pm
Gotta admire that the story is somewhat original and much more complex than the usual NTR storyline. I mean what can the MC do when he finds out? and then the pranacies complicate things. And of course, the girls went back to him, but their feelings may have changed. And the MC cant just get up and leave because he does feel inddepted to the family for taking him in. Sometimes, I wished I had "read" the untranslated version.
Thanks for the warning, but the art was just too tempting.
on February 6th, 2012 at 10:47 pm
Thank you Oliver for another great post. I've been following your website since its birth. At first when you uploaded things such as these (e.g. Educating a New Wife), I was utterly disgusted and felt sick for days after fapping to such material.
But now…now I'm happy to say that I too have turned into a monster. It has become a habit of me to seek out sick works such as this one. Your hentai has made be less human yet much stronger. Thank you Oliver. Thank you.
P.S. I'm vanilla-phile at heart so I'm glad you keep it mostly clean! ^^
on February 6th, 2012 at 10:48 pm
Yes, you build endurance eventually >:)
on February 6th, 2012 at 10:49 pm
I agree with you competely. This leaves the same bad taste in my mouth as does NTR.
on February 6th, 2012 at 10:56 pm
If I ever find the time and talent to continue the story, I will continue it just as you have suggested.
on February 6th, 2012 at 10:57 pm
Download it. The art is beautiful. Just be prepared after page 56. Don't read it if you have a weak heart…as I once did.
on February 6th, 2012 at 11:04 pm
Perhaps somebody can translate from his blog http://karen.saiin.net/~mitosupa/ this entry 2012年02月04日（土）22:56 particularly the stuff to the Tachibanas
on February 6th, 2012 at 11:11 pm
i think they are not pregnat , they discuss where to hide the movie ^^
on February 6th, 2012 at 11:14 pm
and that's why I love hentairules.net Oliver's nice enough to go out of his way to write down his own opinions and feelings about his shares and to give out warnings like these
thanks Oliver
on February 6th, 2012 at 11:31 pm
GOD I should read the whole text, now is was shocked at the end, and now i got some bad tast in my mouth. I rly didn't like such storys .__.
:D:D
on February 6th, 2012 at 11:49 pm
Sadly I kinda took the opposite approach, I wanted to see how bad it really got, so I scrolled ahead and read it and now I have that same nasty taste…that said, I just deleted after page 56 and kept the first half, that much at least was worth it. Thankfully I just went to the last two pages or so and read him waking up and all that, but even that much is to much.
Seriously, I hate it when there is a nice build up, even with a harem (It CAN be done, no matter what people think) for a good romance and then 'BAM' Whores…Goddessess I hate that, I'm a hopeless romantic at heart, so that kinda thing actually hurts, almost physically hurts…There was one set done to Sekeirei (SP) that kinda turned this way to, made absolutely no sense when you look at the story, it was just an excuse to write such a scene, which was strange for that artist as he usually doesent go that way…unless it starts like that from the begining, I think it was one of the Angel Strokes.
on February 7th, 2012 at 12:07 am
Worse still, I'm a masage therapist, so seeing crap like that REALLY gets me angry…the level of trust my clients put in me is something I really cherrish, so when I see this…oh man…
on February 7th, 2012 at 12:40 am
I can understand some of you guys complaints, but as a fan of NTR, this is quite possibly my favorite of all time. The art, the story, everything about this was amazing. I've always liked MTSP, but this is truly phenomenal.
I wish more H-mangaka put this much into their NTR stories. The first part of vanilla made the second part of NTR, so much better. I hope this encourages a lot more h-mangaka to do more elaborate NTR stories because there really is too few of them.
on February 7th, 2012 at 12:41 am
It hurts! It hurts! Someone make the pain go away :'(
on February 7th, 2012 at 1:07 am
The ending's lack-luster, but at least they didn't continue the relationship with the guys. It clearly says at the end that: "They apparently got caught".
on February 7th, 2012 at 1:08 am
No time to read thru all 71 comments. So if i'm repeating, what another has said, Sorry about that. Here is the scoop on both of these doujins.
Tachibana San’s Circumstances With A Man – translated by: Fated Circle
Tachibana San’s Circumstances With A Man 2 – translated by Touma
on February 7th, 2012 at 1:54 am
Interesting to those who find NTR stimulating. it's porn/fantasy and I get that but really, what's the draw? I'm guessing you're putting yourself as the guy(s) doing the stealing and not the one taking the loss, though even at that I find a bit distrubing. Personally I hate the stuff and I know people (both men and women) that have been cheated on or left for another and the after effects. Not something I would wish on anyone… Again, personal bias as I can't look past real life since I have close friends effected, but it but what is the draw to those of you who like this kind of stuff?
on February 7th, 2012 at 2:03 am
NTR, mind break piece of junk.
advice for the readers this is a fucking NTR, WORTHLESS hentai, heroines are sluts in heat, and the MC is a useless brat, if have any little bit of taste for hentais don't lose your time with this.
on February 7th, 2012 at 2:38 am
Even though you hate mindbreak/rape, I appreciate thet you tolerate it from time to time (because I enjoy these tags/genres)
Great art! Thanks for the upload.
on February 7th, 2012 at 3:01 am
So, good up until page 56? Okay. I’ll just DL it, and then delete everything after page 55. I know that kinda fucks the story, but from all the comments, it sounds as if the story is already pretty fucked. It’s not gonna bother me to wonder about the rest. ^w^
on February 7th, 2012 at 3:14 am
Not really NTR…YET
The ending implies that he will find out after watching the video
on February 7th, 2012 at 3:26 am
You're right about why I enjoy it. I enjoy the thought of having sex with female from someone in some fashion, anywhere from someone liking the girl to marriage. On the other hand, I'm sure there are lots of people who put themselves in the position of the guy losing the girl. Cuckold fetishes are far from unheard of and manga probably provides a good substitute.
on February 7th, 2012 at 3:32 am
NTR doesn’t bother me that much, but I have to say this one was a poor showing (in the story). I think it mainly comes down to what Garuda said; the big fault is in how incomplete it is, and how nothing is resolved.
on February 7th, 2012 at 4:16 am
The sense of this story is about every woman has to understand what's important for her: soul and feelings or size of a dick. As for me this girls just wasn't able to walk through the true test.
Sry for bad eng.
on February 7th, 2012 at 4:33 am
Umm, maybe instead of a warning we can get a system going that filters all the NTR and fucked up scenarios we Nilla lovers hate. A "Vanilla" or [insert opposite here] tag would help to deter the heartache and pain =(
on February 7th, 2012 at 4:46 am
Let me reply to you with this: do you play videogames? Do you play things like, Call of Duty, Grand Theft Auto and other games where you kill people? If you do, then ask yourself: would you do the same in real life? The obvious answer is NO. Same applies to hentai. People who enjoy reading stories about incest, NTR and other fetishes don't necessarily have to be mentally disturbed. It's called FICTION, the purpose of these works is to convey emotions that normally shouldn't be felt in real life. Just like you don't go and kill people after having played Call of Duty, it's not like one likes cheating in real life just because he enjoyed reading a NTR story.
on February 7th, 2012 at 4:54 am
The heck? I didn't want to read this because of Oliver's warning (oh and I don't like NTR but I don't like unfinished stories too so stopping would made me think over it now and then >.<
BUTTT 82 comments?! For this one only? You guys made me look into this post again -_-
I'll check the gallery at least..
EDIT: UGH. I picked out 10 pages, then I looked at the last 3 pages. That made me sick.. I can already imagine what went on in between. Must.. wash.. away..
on February 7th, 2012 at 4:54 am
I think the mangaka was trying to say something regarding the ending of the story, but I can only rely on google translate.
http://translate.google.com.my/translate?sl=ja&am…
on February 7th, 2012 at 5:04 am
Thanks for the explanation. I just realized why I can stand some groupsex hentai.
Usually it's when there's no strong relationship for the MCs, or for doujins, I don't know anything about the main story…
on February 7th, 2012 at 5:05 am
Was thinking of thumbing up, but.. Even better if he never knew them T_T
But dang.. it's hentai world..
on February 7th, 2012 at 5:06 am
All of US. Blocked per IP address.
on February 7th, 2012 at 5:08 am
Oh apparently I'm not the only one feeling like that..
on February 7th, 2012 at 5:09 am
I hope I don't turn too less human..
But once in a while I read Alice no Takarabako even though I really hated it at start.
So I know I'm changing too. Dangit.
on February 7th, 2012 at 5:12 am
That's what I thought about those who enjoy NTR too.
I can't get into that mindset though.
Call me a hypocrite, but I can't place myself in the snatcher's shoes.
Am I pathetic? :\
on February 7th, 2012 at 5:18 am
karma is a bitch
from no on only drinking sealed bottles when away with girls
on February 7th, 2012 at 6:45 am
Like for me, even from the beginning there were too much words for my taste so i pretty much just skimmed through the entire thing. I did read Oliver's warning but it wasn't that much of an impact anyways.
on February 7th, 2012 at 6:50 am
It's just like you said, it's not really NTR until you find out what happens to the MC after watching that vid
on February 7th, 2012 at 6:52 am
That's the way to go man
on February 7th, 2012 at 7:09 am
I don't mind the NTR, it's just those damn speech bubbles, theres like 40 of them in one page. And the entire massage scene was dragged out to shit, also subs were half-assed couldnt really tell what was being said in most of those scenarios.
on February 7th, 2012 at 7:09 am
Thanks for telling me to stop to page 56 to see some good hentai, I appreciate not skipping this manga based on the first 50 pages.
on February 7th, 2012 at 8:13 am
I hated after page 56 cuz they took so fucking long to get to the point, I don't care about this other whiny bullshit you guys are crying about. I want variety, not a 100-page dragged out scene with a lame payoff.
on February 7th, 2012 at 8:30 am
My thoughts exactly, it took like 50 pages and a billion speech bubbles to get to the fucking point, shit.
on February 7th, 2012 at 10:35 am
I have read other mindbreak and stuff, but it didnt really do much damage to my head, but this.. this one… really get my head and my heart burning!!
RAAGE is what i get after i read the whole thing… >_<"
on February 7th, 2012 at 10:59 am
Epic!!! Can’t wait for part 3 this summer to see the wild orgy in the second room!
on February 7th, 2012 at 11:34 am
Fantastic art with a good story… until the second half. The end really just left an extremely bitter taste in my mouth which I'm sure will come back every time this story pops back into my head.
Most times I can ignore the story when the art is that good but it's hard to avoid it when it takes up 3/4 of the page. Seems like a waste of time to build a story that all nice and sweet and without warning go 180 on it.
Doubt that a part 3 will show up. Don't know if I'd care enough to read it. Fuck this guy and his shitty story! Just draw shit with no words and/or no scenarios next time and save us all the time and anger.
on February 7th, 2012 at 12:49 pm
Not to mention that the, in my mind, good relationship kinda ended about one third of the way in and it made me wonder why the guy was there in the first place, seemed like he only existed to get the girls used to the idea of sex and wanting more, then that was it.
I have kinda a love hate thing with NTR to be honest, because if it's something like the boyfriend/husband neglecting his 'duties' or just being a bad partner then I can understand it. Everyone has needs, even if some of the scenarios make little sense (Like an INSANELY hot wife and the guy just rolls over and goes to sleep…I understand your tired, but it doesent take much to work your tongue mate) but when the guy doesent do anything, or worse, is held hostage or the like before them (The main character was poisioned here, could have been dieing, and they were off screwing?) and fall into it I just get pissed.
No anger to our Lord and Master from HS here, but I have to wonder at some of the writers….
on February 7th, 2012 at 12:52 pm
Or, worse, is when a girl is stringing along a guy she knows likes/loves her, I know it happens, happened to me, worst pain I'd known until that point in my life, how someone can write it like that and not have the girl get he's just gets me…
on February 7th, 2012 at 1:20 pm
This one made me rage hard! Really hard! But are you sure the women are really pregnant by the end ? It only seemed they wanted to hide that video to me.
on February 7th, 2012 at 2:39 pm
They talking about "something" of them didn't come this month. (I'm sure it's their period.)
And when they sure about it, one of them said she going to "ask" her friend about "safe place" to do something with it.
(You didn't need to ask your friend about how to hiding a thing in your own house right?)
Then yes, they all pregnant.
And the missing part of that night (what happen with them after they follow to those guy room and make them collapse in the next day) are going to be seen by the boy. (It's in the AV he just bought)
I'm sorry to confirm this to you, but yes it's that bad.
For the kind of NTR story, I'm sure this one is a great one.
Because it successfully make a bond to the character before land an impact. That make a great pleasure to NTR readers.
But for regular reader, the first arc of the story can count as some kind of trap that lure them (i mean us) to a really terrible heart breaking NTR.
But don't worry mate. Even you suffer from it, you still have a hundred of ppl suffer with you.
on February 7th, 2012 at 4:01 pm
yes he did.. from what i can understand vaguely…
he said on the lines on initially wanting to have a 4P but decided to change the story plot as he wants to include MILF, sis, big boobs and massage therapists..
He also planned to draw a 20pg on the manor arc but had to drop it due to time constrains..
i replied slightly more in detail to Besbin above.. u may want to take a look..
My understanding may not be totally accurate but tt's how i understood his text..
on February 7th, 2012 at 4:12 pm
sorry..wrong text..
i thought u're referring to the afterword in the manga.. didn't realise u're referring to his blog..
on February 7th, 2012 at 4:14 pm
Reading this type of H manga is just exciting — because one just does not know whether it will be a depressing fap session (/cue okay-guy meme) or a sick-perverted fap session (/cue me gusta meme).
Lucky for me, somehow MTSP's works have always given me me-gusta faces
; however, somehow, Yuzuki N Dash's works (such as Sister Control) have the opposite effects … :|
on February 7th, 2012 at 5:22 pm
This manga is a trap! You start of with a a little romance, get strung along…then the steel jaws close around you and there goes your joy for the rest of the day. I'm with you guys; the ending sucks and I wish I listened to Oliver before reading this. It's good to know that anyone who still has a soul feels pain over the ending, but now we all have to find a way to get it out of our system. For now…DELETE!
on February 7th, 2012 at 5:47 pm
Wow! Oliver, if your intent was controversy then Holy Shit, did you succeed! I come back and find over a hundred responses, all about as strongly polarized as the earth's magnetic core… almost makes me sorry for not reading it, because I can't intelligently discuss something I haven't read … but I said ALMOST. Still pass. Still grateful for the warnings.
on February 7th, 2012 at 6:03 pm
Judging by all the comments above mine it looks like I'm not the only unhappy one here. Like most of you guys I didn't stop to read Oliver's warning (shame on me). But I'm kinda glad I didn't. The first part of the story was built up really well and I expected it to go THIS way but instead it went THAT way… Now, I don't like these kinds of stories because it hits a little to close to home. However, every story shouldn't have a happy ending. Not to mention, it is rare for something to get me angry. So in this case I have to give credit to the writer/mangaka for this one, cuz it riled me good.
on February 7th, 2012 at 6:15 pm
Well, I do read Oliver warning.
I always do, after I blindly download and get hit by some kind of this thing before.
(His preview for the story is awesome and interesting too.)
In my opinion, Oliver warning for this one is a bit too soft compare to the strong emotion impact it can do.
Well, maybe it just a different NTR correction for each person.
on February 7th, 2012 at 6:15 pm
where did the magaka say he was continuing the story.
on February 7th, 2012 at 6:40 pm
Come on guys, in comparison to others in the NTR genre, even MTSP's last one which is partially translated, this is relatively light on those aspects. The girls all regret it at the end and have resumed sexual activities with the boy. At the end it is heavily implied that the mother found an abortion clinic, so they want to totally forget the whole situation. The perpetrators have been caught and sent to jail. Most likely everything will return to normal after they abort (or maybe not since the ending is open).
Point is, just enjoy it for what it is. Put yourself in the netoris position when reading if you can't handle it. I also recommend yama hime no satomi and sayuki no sato by sanbun kyoden (or any of his works really). Sinful mother by bai asuka is also another good one.
on February 7th, 2012 at 7:05 pm
so the mangaka was talking about the manga on his blog, he said spoilers that is all i could read so pls someone translate it or just summeries it for me and is he making a part 3 or not. i really need to know
on February 7th, 2012 at 7:08 pm
normally i just a silent reader n don't vote but this time i vote it , this is the most strage hentai story i ever read hahahah i believe there will be a next chapter of this story
on February 7th, 2012 at 7:10 pm
Link to his blog http://karen.saiin.net/~mitosupa/nicky/nicky.html
on February 7th, 2012 at 9:07 pm
I regret reading this ;/ I mean the story at start was fun and a lil comedic but at the inn…..all sh1t broke loose, personally I hope the guys that fvcked them at the inn will die from ballz cancer ^^
on February 8th, 2012 at 1:12 am
i should have responded to your warning now i have a bad day because of it xD
on February 8th, 2012 at 1:33 am
Even if the author makes an afterstory it is impossible to change it to the better.
I mean: -They sucked them off: Okay forget it.
-They fucked with them with condoms: Okay forget it.
-They did it RAW with them, let them cum inside, did who knows what with them in their manor on there own will AND MIXED THERE GENES WITH THEM AND GOT PREGNANT: THAT, THAT WILL NEVER BE FORGIVEN.
If I were him (Yuu), I would everytime when one of them dares to try to speak to me or to look me into the eyes slap them into the face as hard as I can.
There are things that can only be forgiven by "to good for this world"/stupid MC's in mangas (like Ponta from Chisa x Pon).
on February 8th, 2012 at 3:04 am
"Point is, just enjoy it for what it is." there you go, read this story for the art not the story. It's made up anyways
on February 8th, 2012 at 5:42 am
i have seen worse things in adult manga, this isn't one of that, i think this is in fact a very realistic one, yeah, women always want bigger pennis and better sex, im sorry that i have to break your hearts, kids
on February 8th, 2012 at 12:29 pm
Wow man I read the warning and still read it anyways… Yeah past that 56th page, it just clicked in my mind haha this is like the first time I read completely through one of these haha its just wow O___O.
on February 8th, 2012 at 1:06 pm
Now I understand the scene where he woke up and fell asleep again. It takes place directly after they moved to the manor and what he smells are the remains of the sex session. And on the next page is a time skip back to the point where they started with the fucking. That means if he would have woke up a little bit earlier, he would have caught them in the act.
on February 8th, 2012 at 2:11 pm
I don't know about the slapping in the face. I'm leaning more towards the punching in the face when in a… I don't… 10ft radius?
on February 8th, 2012 at 3:21 pm
Hmm Wait I'm a bit confused at the ending, so it's implied when she says "How could we from just once" They mean get pregnant? And "I'm going to look for a safe place for it okay?" Which implies an abortion clinic. But prior to that why did they also say things like "You had them?" "No" "I see… I Didn't as well" Could anyone please clarify those parts?
on February 8th, 2012 at 4:21 pm
They all miss their period, that means.
on February 8th, 2012 at 7:33 pm
-"How could we from just once" = yes pregnant
-"I'm going to look for a safe place for it okay?" = Im thinking pregnancy tests, the porn video or the abortion clinic info
-"You had them?" "No" "I see… I Didn't as well" = I think they are talking about their periods.
on February 8th, 2012 at 8:14 pm
i liked a lot this manga but when the guys raped the girl i feeled bad for they :
i didint liked it a lot from page 56
on February 8th, 2012 at 8:30 pm
It's… gut wrenching, that's the only way to discribe it. I mean, I like NTR if it's from the other point of view, but from this, where they build up the character set up everything and then destroy it, it's just wrong. =/
on February 8th, 2012 at 8:49 pm
Well like a said before, we need a tag that helps deter these things. Theres a tab for Incest so Im sure there can be one that helps keep us vanilla lovers safe. Some of you choose to like it but most vanilla lovers(myself included) dont feel sexually aroused or excited by the pain of others. Unless they deserve it of course.
"Empathy is an amazing gift, but can be a terrible curse."
on February 8th, 2012 at 9:41 pm
Well the arts are georgeous, especially the mother and younger sister…well, yes its enraged me, i feel like to KILL (or JOINING maybe?) the rapists and also the MC (what a useles piece of shit!) but still a nice arts anyway, and i have to give a credit to author for tricking and breaking heart of innocent readers..hahaha
on February 9th, 2012 at 12:01 pm
Please, oh God, PLEASE let there be a continuation of this story with a vanilla closing, there was just too much damn potential even with the NTR. The author is seriously a genius for making a plot like this to wrentch your heart out, but pleaseeeee put it back in after :'(
on February 9th, 2012 at 1:06 pm
Someone over on the Doujin-Moe comments mentioned how AMAZING the author is. At first, I was incredibly appalled like many other readers; I'm trying not to exaggerate here, but I was bummed the fuck out for an entire day. Waking up felt like crap, enduring work seemed more difficult than normal, etc. The thing that killed me the most was that (despite the setting and circumstances) something like this could very well happen!
After I got over the initial shock, I realized how correct the nameless Doujin-Moe commenter was. The author essentially crafted (aided by an incredibly pleasing art style) a story with characters deep enough (for a doujin) for us, the readers, to give two shits and a damn what happened to them. And when the curtain rose up (came crashing down) to commence an entire shitstorm of rage and heavy chested feelings we readers went up at arms.
on February 9th, 2012 at 9:50 pm
I have to agree with this poster, i skim read it for the pure fapness tbh and even i got a sense of betrayal and low mood at the end so that must say something to the author's talents and if im going to be honest again, its actually stories like these that actually have the biggest impacts on me compared ti a vanilla ending which is nice but it can get stale so a story like this now and then makes you think 'whoa'. Of course you gotta back up the story with good art and that came with the release too. My final point? NTR can be a bitch of a genre but man, doesn't it leave a emotional impact..
on February 10th, 2012 at 10:35 am
My boner died when they started getting massages. *sigh*
That was disappointing…
on February 15th, 2012 at 12:21 pm
love the story and art up to a point i deleted after 57 to leave it on some what a good high hopeful part
on February 16th, 2012 at 12:17 pm
That'll teach me to read the damn description next time, my body was not ready
on February 16th, 2012 at 12:23 pm
I feel somewhat raped
on February 16th, 2012 at 12:33 pm
this is affecting me more than it should, my chest hurts, I kinda hope i get a heart attack
on February 17th, 2012 at 1:27 am
I looked at the pics and was mildly interested, but dismayed by seeing the cenosor mosaic. Then I read the description. Y'all seem to be describing a train wreck. The sad thing about a train wreck is that you want to look away because of the twisted humanity, but then you look for the morbid curiosity. You've peaked(usage error) my morbid curiosity.
Thanks for the upload.
on February 17th, 2012 at 1:11 pm
the healing powers of yanagida-kun and mizuno-san, this trash is erased from my being, i can breathe again
on February 25th, 2012 at 9:25 pm
this is SHIT …the Start was SOOO GOOD … but Eventually lost its TRACK after TRIP …WHAT THE F***o.0:@
on February 29th, 2012 at 2:36 am
I loved it I hated it.
The art is the best, im looking foward for more MTSP works.
The first part is a great story, the second one, it mess it up.
But all together is a complex history with great art that left you a bitter taste in the mouth like Oliver said.
Im not into NTR, but by mistake i have seen mangas of this genre, and this one is like childs game compared to others. And i believe it has still so much potencial for a vanilla ending in a part 3. And i would love if MTSP write an other conclusion.
Someone knows if its planned another part of this manga?
Excuse my english is not very good.
on March 17th, 2012 at 1:01 am
Thumbs up to shadow_fury's comment!
I'd really like it if a vanilla ending will be granted because I mean I feel poor for the guy. It's one thing enjoying a NTR doujin/manga knowing that at the end the girl/woman deserves it just because she doesn't have that much of a will to stay focused with her relationship just like say naruto. This.. by god, my boner died while reading the last parts of it. I was like.. come on creampie that bitches and make babies and *bam* vanilla ending but this… it's leaves a really bad aftertaste. Well in any case thanks for this, I think I'll reread "When You Let Go My Hand" by Takenoko Seijin to get rid of this aftertaste or the one's by Ver9.
PS. Long story short, I LOVE NTR, happened to me once irl and now I'm somewhat hooked into it and paranoid at the same time but my girlfriend now is thankfully keeping me in a much better shape since then. =)
on March 17th, 2012 at 1:02 am
PSS. My new girlfriend of 3 years, dumped that slut long time ago.
on April 6th, 2012 at 9:07 am
Can you guys list your top 10 Rage in decreasing order of 'raging'?
I really need to know the best, i mean worst out there! Keep my hands clear of them!
I'll read them when i'm really depressed to know there is worse out there ><
on April 9th, 2012 at 5:24 am
I cannot express in words(possibly due to my lame vcaobulary) just how disappointed I was in the ending. Like the whole time, I was intrigued and interested in what the ending held and then the autor basically set my house on fire, and there was nothing I could do aside from watching it burn to the ground.