Long Distance Relationship [English], by Takano Yuki

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By Oliver (AKA the Admin) on 26 comments
Just dump that cunt, man.

Sigh. This is the typical netorare story in which a boyfriend is temporarily separate from his girlfriend, and the girl is trained and broken by some douchebag gifted with a huge cock, and eventually the pure honest candid innocent boyfriend has his soul shattered by the sudden discovery.
I didn’t feel particularly annoyed by this, the story didn’t take long enough to set the stage in the beginning, so I didn’t feel attached to the characters. Luckily :D

Graphically, the male protagonist is an ugly baldie, this got on my nerves much more than the storyline, actually ^^ Fortunately, the girl isn’t half bad, a girl aged around 20 with large breasts, nice, nice :3

Oh well, get over this or enjoy, it’s up to you ! And thanks to Desu and Drtybird for this release :)

–Update: this post has become obsolete, as this story now belongs in Minna Hatsujouki :)

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NTRfansaresad
NTRfansaresad
11 years ago

Yay misogony

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
11 years ago
Reply to  NTRfansaresad

Not sure it's misogigny, nobody's seen under a good light. The girl is a stupid cow, the male teacher is a goddamn douche without any sense of moral values, while the boyfriend was too weak and too shallow to claim in the beginning or retort in the end. Misanthropy, more like this.

Tom Riddle
Tom Riddle
11 years ago

Yay… No reedeming characters…

Harco
Harco
11 years ago

I doubt the artist intended it to be funny, but that "But after a few weeks… the professor suddenly raped me." line made me laugh hard. Hentai can be so full of narm sometimes. Just like that overused "I'm a slave to your cock!" talk. It works when there's a decent build-up, but in one-shots like these it comes of as forced and lazy.

As for the overall story, well, it could be rather enjoyable if you're a fan of the genre. Just don't expect anything you haven't seen before. It's not bad, but it *is* run-of-the-mill.

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
11 years ago
Reply to  Harco

> I doubt the artist intended it to be funny, but that “But after a few weeks… the professor suddenly raped me.” line made me laugh hard. Hentai can be so full of narm sometimes. Just like that overused “I’m a slave to your cock!” talk. It works when there’s a decent build-up, but in one-shots like these it comes of as forced and lazy.

You realize that sometimes the script here isn’t what the original author wrote, right? Occasionally, it’s impossible to actually translate something when it uses only words found in Japan (like “itadakimasu”, for example) or the translator just doesn’t understand what the author is saying at a specific part.

Also, a lot of translators translating into English aren’t actually native English speakers (which is the case with Desu, iirc), so they might be phrasing it incorrectly or not be certain what it would actually be in English and just guesses.

Harco
Harco
11 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

No, I didn't realize that. I'm sorry for blaming the artist for something that might or might not be his fault. It will not happen again.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
11 years ago
Reply to  Harco

Well, fact is, it's highly likely it REALLY was that line, you know ^^

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
11 years ago

Well, I'm not saying that isn't possible too. I'm just saying that sometimes shit happens during the translation. Especially phrases you see a lot. If they translate something similar to some more popular phrase they might go "oh, well this sounds like 'I'm a slave to your cock!' so I might as well just go with that since it seems to be what most people use".

I can attest to doing it myself. In the second chapter of Maruta's h-manga, I put "uguu~" on the last page. That wasn't in the original script, but it fit so I was like "whatevah, I do what I want".

BUT IT IS WRONG!
BUT IT IS WRONG!
11 years ago

I swear the main female characters in these stories get dumb by the second. The professor rapes her and threatens to post the rape crime on the internet and she does what he says Seriously? The guy literally gives her the way out and she give him power over her. I don't even feel sorry for her since I think she is seriously a in the closet retard.

The dude however, I feel sorry for him especially since he had his heart crushed when the guy is recording everything and he will be going to this school. Hopefully he picks up the pieces and moves on.

HeavensDealer
HeavensDealer
11 years ago

I just don’t understand NTR/its attraction. I mean regardless of how dumb/stupid/naive/etc the male/female (typically female) victim may be, why are there fans/creators of it? Considering that majority of the perpetrators are old/ugly/fat/db-looking so I hope no one imagine themselves in that particular role nor does anyone wish to be the cheated husband/wife/boyfriend/girlfriend/friend.

So bottom line, I’m avoiding this one.

And at the comment about how she was raped, threatened exposure which then leads to enslavement by the teacher… its not exactly the idle choice of action but its not without reason.

I mean, its bad. Its terrible. But what would have happened?

Internet + Video= spread. Sure, if the teacher gets jailed/sacked/punished thats wonderful but what about her life? Will her boyfriend still be with her? (realistically..I don’t think so. “Love” can only do so much) Who would want to date her with such a reputation? Rather I can imagine various scenarios of more rape by terrible people considering its hentai. And some people, culturally, are different when presented with similar situations. I know from a few Japanese friends that they would rather aim for meek/harmonious resolutions rather than confrontation (Not talking about a rape situation mind you). Just think of the various occasions of having a pervert on a train…

Overall… I’m just saying it sucks and I wouldn’t degrade her for what has happened to her.

HeavensDealer
HeavensDealer
11 years ago
Reply to  HeavensDealer

Also, I'm in a LDR so I have these fears occasionally.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
11 years ago
Reply to  HeavensDealer

What is this, a LDR ?

Uji
Uji
11 years ago

I think it means 'Long Distance Relationship'… but it could mean:

BUT… http://acronyms.thefreedictionary.com/LDR

There are a bunch. Personally I often feel that I'm more of a 'Law of Diminishing Returns.' The more effort I put in the less result I get out…

Jake
Jake
11 years ago
Reply to  HeavensDealer

Its a power fantasy. That's all it is. No sense of getting into the moral implications because it isn't real life, much less realistic. I like NTR because it fulfills my fantasy of taking something that isn't mine, owning it, and bending it to my whim. Its sadistic, but hey, it gets me off. Its better than what I usually do (i.e. sit around thinking "woe is me, I can't get this girl because she is with another man.")

Would I do it in real life? Not in this particular scenario because rapes involved. However, in a general NTR, I still probably wouldn't do it because I'm too much of a wuss to try. But, considering the commonality of cheating, which is essentially what NTR is, and the fact that women fantasize about rape just as frequent as men do, it isn't as surprising as one would think. Which is why it makes me laugh when NTR stories get such low votes. Its because, deep down inside, people act way differently than they talk.

On a final note, morality isn't as cut and dry as people think. It isn't all about having to sacrifice your desires or self-advancement to maintain some level of dignity or purpose. Sometimes, you have to get something out of it. It just depends on how much of a risk you're willing to take and how much you've thought about it.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
11 years ago
Reply to  Jake

Nah, about the low votes.

NTR is simply the only hentai fantasy that is extremely close to real life, to being possible for real. Futanari, aliens, childhood friends who keep on living next door to you during 18 years and suck up on a promise made at the age of 4, all of that won't happen for real. However, being betrayed by a loved one, hooo, now, THAT one is highly possible and is an ACTUAL threat.

People feel threatened by NTR, hence the hatred and the low votes, I believe.

Jake
Jake
11 years ago

So incest, childhood friend, rape, and regular sex doesn't happen for real? All of those are real life scenarios and I find it hard to believe that regular sex and childhood friend/friend aren't common in real life.

Jake
Jake
11 years ago

By the way, love the new comment system. It kicks ass.

Alvin Theodore Web
Alvin Theodore Web
11 years ago

"… and the fact that women fantasize about rape just as frequent as men do…"

…What? I've never fantasized raping anyone, and I have a very close friend who is a rape survivor so I've seen firsthand the trauma it can cause. I don't know the kind of women you've spoken to about this, if any(which I highly doubt), but the vast majority of women do not in fact fantasize about getting raped.

Zack.G
Zack.G
11 years ago

I might be a guy, but I've study psychology enough to know one thing: There's no limit to the level of depravity in humans, just like our idiocy. Rare as they might be, I'm willing to bet everything I've ever worked for that there are women who fantasize about rape/being raped out there.

I might not be proud of that bet, but I'm sure i can win it. It might not be possible for you (never mind your friend) to accept the possibility, and in fact, I hope you never do, but the situation is as it is.

Jake
Jake
11 years ago

If you want, I can cite some evidence regarding this.

Artum
Artum
11 years ago

As Oliver said: "nobody's seen under a good light" in this. Although I think this is what makes people angry, this is also what I think makes it work for me. NTR is one of those weird things and I find it falls under two broader categories.

The first being like this one here, is on the darker side. The male you are (presumably) supposed to sympathize which is dumb (as evidenced by his lack of passing the entrance exam), weak (if this is the first time they have sex), self-centered (there was no intimacy when they had sex, it was just for him), and will presumably fail to act. The professor is an ugly douche. In the end, the woman is the character I can sympathize with the most, she's smarter than her boyfriend, willing to work for what she wants (although it starts as rape, it turns into prostitution), she never really stops loving her boyfriend, and ends up gradually reducing her inhibitions to the point of realizing she has lost nothing. It's dark, but all the characters are flawed to the point that I can't be angry.

The second type is the better kind, it still has some of that darkness but at the least we fix the male we are supposed to sympathize with to one we actually can. Sanagi Torajirou displays this in Cast Aoi and Utakata Omoi. We also see it to an extent in works like Kawasaki Tadataka's Rock, Paper, Scissors. We get a male who is actually not weak, is going to take action, and is not going to stop loving.

Things get real bad when true mind break is involved though. Don't get me started on things like "I Will Protect You" from Nagare Ippon. I find myself hoping for the best with those, only to find nothing of merit, they just stand on their art. That's not so much an issue of NTR though, it's mind break and I approach those with care.

DrtyBird
DrtyBird
11 years ago

Well I liked it! :D

Random
Random
11 years ago

Damn man sorry to not have anything to say about this, but fucking shit i have to let this out. i mean wtf is wrong with japan recently man why the hell is NTR so popular i mean almost every h manga with a story is NTR recently its pissing me off man i hate this genre( no offense to people who like this. seriously this Genre has building up more and more and its making all the good art h manga artist that made good stories convert to making this too and when happy to see a good artists new work or a new artist great skills this fucking NTR story fucks it up especially when the dude stealing the chick is an ugly fat ass. i really hope japan gets out of this soon man i mean they have enough rape and mindbreaks to last a life time (really check E-Hentai Galleries if you dont believe me). this is just me venting so one again no offense to people who like this genre

DustDragon
DustDragon
11 years ago

I laughed when I saw the name of the place behinb the guy waving goodbye to his unfortunate girlfriend. ''Anal'', what a wonderful phrase!

Bob
Bob
11 years ago

It's NTR, but not as vile as many I've seen. I'd portray this as more of a D/s storyline, where the girl is a natural submissive, and the professor is a natural Dom who took one look at her and realized what she was — and took advantage. Is he a nice guy? Obviously not. But Submissive Girl isn't going to get what she needs from her sweet gentle boyfriend.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
11 years ago
Reply to  Bob

brought this back from the spam folder, can't tell how long it was in there, sorry :|

And now, I'm off the hentai shores, back to working ! (sigh)