Torikago No Joou [English], by Aki Kitahara

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By Oliver (AKA the Admin) on 37 comments

... Wut ? é_è

I am so confused. The heroine of this share is deliberately acting as a “public toilet”, accepting sex with all the boys in her class, and the only boy resisting her charms is the one who’s in love with her, and that she secretly loves.
From here on, this is my own interpretation, I may be mistaken, but I *think* the girl was actually desperate for true affection, and once she got that affection (with bonus dicking from the boy), she could cease being the public toilet and become exclusive to the boy she liked.

… Did you guys also understand the story that way ? Or in another way ? Once again, I’m very confused with that one ! é_è
Besides… Would you also accept a “used” partner, as far as you’re concerned ? Me, frankly, I don’t know… Jebus, women aren’t cars, this isn’t a bloody BMW male chauvinist ad ! >_<
Oh well, still, thanks to Cgrascal for this release !

By the same artist, known as Aki Kitahara and Secret Society M, I also share Kousai Keiken Hitori Keiken Ninzuu 13-nin, Ninshin Shichatta Dareka Tasukete, Senpai Ga Benki, Venus Ga Oji-san Ni Camera Mesen De Makuwararete, Sayonara Nene-san, Inyoku No Kan 2199, Helena-sama And I, Shintaku No Kairou and A Pack of 9 other works (Doukoku no Ori + Kinpatsu Tsuma no Toriko + Koi suru NyoTengu + Limit of Despair + Pleasure on the Opposite Side of the Vending Machine + Second Hand Nene-san + Utahime no Shouzou + Utahime No Shouzou 3 + Yousei Keikaku).

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Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
11 years ago

Well, that ad was macho like hell, but, gawd, for real, I wouldn't mind if that girl came second hand, I have a very soft spot for blondes with almond eyes :3

(and, yeah, Anita Blond, Sylvia Saint & Laure Sainclair > all the others)

MHM
MHM
11 years ago

Chalk it up perhaps to "the redeeming power of love" (or something like it). :*

Jasta85
Jasta85
11 years ago

As long as she took a thorough medical exam first to make sure I'm not gonna catch anything, hell yea I'd hit that.

Vibew
Vibew
11 years ago

Second hand? Oh god no. As long as she's loyal to him afterwards, it doesn't matter if was the public toilet or something. Just as long as she's hot and nice.
I like these stories better. I kinda hate virgin (girl) centered stories.

Dis077
Dis077
11 years ago

One or two partners?? yes…the whole of the fucking united kingdoms??…no.

LongOtaku85
LongOtaku85
11 years ago

Personally this was bittersweet with a bland aftertaste. I don't mind "used goods" but i do mind knowing that she was passed around like a turkey on thanksgiving (and with plenty of second helpings…). I also believe that once a slut always a slut, and this is a NTR ripe for the remaking, huhuhuhuuu. Anyway thats my 2 cents. Thanks for the shares, keep em coming!

SpectralTime
SpectralTime
11 years ago

…Well, long as she didn't go back to her old ways on me, and she got tested for STDs first, I'd be okay with it. I might not be quite that blunt about it, but… it'd occur to me to ask.

After all, love's love, and people can change if they feel like it.

Big Al
Big Al
11 years ago

In this exact situation I think most guys would shy away from her probably even me and shit like this don't usually bother me none. But as for the you're not the first part i don't see why it should bother anyone since most guys are dating women with previous boyfriends some even previous husbands. And most people never spend the rest of their lives with their first love (or sexual partner) so this is not a problem at all.

Evie
Evie
11 years ago

it looks to me that the idea is that plain and simple as she says she likes sex just for the pleasure and not feelings attached, she does it with anyone and get fix it on these one guy who has not interest, after he confessing to her still says no to sex which ends making her more interested and decided to make it happens after it happens she feels like trying if been steady is something worth to have

I liked pretty straight forward story very simple to.

beside she seems more strong willed and dominant then most hentai girls as the part the guys try to talk shit and she says how bad he was at sex that was funny in a way

daveshultzerlbur
daveshultzerlbur
11 years ago

once a slut always a slut

Edenn
Edenn
11 years ago

Nah, there's nothing wrong with a promiscuous girl. It seems weird because there's all these social dynamics about the man being the conquerer and the woman being pure, but as a society we've moved past those things. If a women wants to sleep around, she's allowed to do so. Just like in all those harem mangas the guy is allowed to fuck a bunch of different ladies and no one thinks poorly of him.

Although it's a different story if the sleeping around happens while in a relationship. But while a guy/girl is single, there's nothing wrong with slutting it up a bit.

I realize it may not be productive to try to bring up gender equality issues on a hentai blog, but that's just how the world works. Demonizing woman for being promiscuous while also praising men for the same is just unfair.

Alexandrine Library
Alexandrine Library
11 years ago
Reply to  Edenn

Unfair, I agree, but natural, like it or not.
You will see that in all societies along history. The harem is the greatest example, once female-controlled versions are not exactly ordinary.

The reason is simple, and it remits to the species preservation: it is impossible to deceive women. Even if you have one hundred lovers, your wife (and all your lovers) know who are her children's father. If a woman is involved with two men, who is the father?

And forget about DNA tests. I am referring to natural instincts. And before blaming machismo, we must remember that EVERY man is raised and educated by women.

Steve
Steve
11 years ago
Reply to  Edenn

Anyone that votes this down is an idiot. I'm tired of the bullshit that society is okay with sexually active men but not women. It's not fair and it's only further given life by people accepting it or saying "Well it was natural to think this way…you know, before society really existed as it does today, so that somehow makes it okay."

A man fucking a dozen different women outside of a relationship is okay. A woman fucking a dozen different men outside of a relationship is okay. Both are sluts, but "Slut" is NOT and SHOULD NOT be a bad word.

Sex is awesome and feels amazing, for BOTH genders. Why is only one gender allowed to enjoy it?

I've been with girls who have had 0 men before me oe 1 man before me. I've also been with girls, in serious relationships mind you, with girls that have been with 20-30 men before me. And that's perfectly fine in every way. Makes them much better at sex and much more fun in a relationship.

battousai124
battousai124
10 years ago
Reply to  Steve

ever thought about why women have 20-30 sexual partners? They may be good at sex but bad at relationships maybe they only have a relationship because it means a steady supply of sex but still whore around if a possibility of sex presents itself, and yes i mean it negatively. If youre in a relationship your fucking pussy/dick is to be used only for your partner no one else, if you dont like that dont have a relationship.

animefaptastico
animefaptastico
11 years ago

He's a better guy than me, cause I would have given up on her a long time ago. Even through all that, all the dicks in her, he still wanted her. Hopefully she'll stay with him and not mess around, but me? She would have never got the time of day with me, especially known she was throwing that ass all over the place. Dude might want to get her checked out for pregnancy and some STDs

MHM
MHM
11 years ago

A similar argument could also apply to a one-shot posted here a while back, which had the key roles switched – "Killing Time With The Freshman" by Carn. May not be an exact "role-reversal, but it's similar enough to warrant a comparison. I probably don't need to spell out all the exact particulars. :S

widowchaser
widowchaser
11 years ago

Just my gut feeling too, but I could NEVER get around the mental image of everybody in the entire class having fucked her way before I did. More than once too. A deal breaker. Any feeling of Love I might have had would have fled after the Third? Fourth? Seventeenth? time I saw somebody else screw her in school. Maybe somebody else could soldier on like the MC, but I damned sure couldn't.

Dis077
Dis077
11 years ago
Reply to  widowchaser

my feelings exactly, one or two dudes? sure, why not? 10-11…at the same fucking time?? na.

Mr.fine
Mr.fine
11 years ago

my only comment is
SEXUAL HEALIN~~~~

Tatjana
Tatjana
11 years ago

I would recommend an STD check after 6 months. If these were real life I would suspect a violent childhood. Personally I wouldn’t want the town’s mattress.

DerpFather
DerpFather
11 years ago

Well, people can change and I agree with Oliver's assessment. From her behaviour the sex seemed like a "filler" for missing real affection in her life. This occasionally happens in real life too, when "loser girls" are taken advantage of by boys (obviously, few of those girls display that much self-confidence as she does here).

I was also actually in a slightly similar situation as the protagonist once. A girlfriend I had, had two sex friends before we started dating. When I asked her out I said if she wants to give it an honest try with me, she has to quit them first. And she did. Lasted for 3 years without problems.

Avalone
Avalone
11 years ago

Just goes to show you. As long as it's vanilla, that's fine, and nothing else matters. Even a scenario as stupid as that. But had it been ntr or Hentai rape, you would've made your dislike very clear in the description, how the theme or the story is crappy and all that good stuff. You hypocrite

Not a vanilla story
Not a vanilla story
11 years ago
Reply to  Avalone

I actually agree with you on that. The story can be shitty as hell but as long as it has a happy ending it will get up voted.

However this story isn't vanilla. If it was then the main female wouldn't have been fucking everyone like a free whore. Vanilla is two people and only those two people having sex with each other not every tom dick and harry getting their nut inside of said female or visa versa. It is just that this one had a happy ending with the cheesy and overused true love will always win thing even though we know that she was originally a free whore.

okay
okay
11 years ago

First time I saw something like this one. However I still go by this saying. you can't turn a hoe into a housewife. If this continues I have a gut feeling it will be just like those NTR stories where the MC actually succeeds in getting rid of the bad guy only for the woman to go back and cheat anyways.

UltimaLuminaire
UltimaLuminaire
11 years ago

Coincidence, but my playlist was on "(I Don't Know Why) But I Do" by Clarence Henry. Torikago no Joou became 100% more cathartic. Can't help who you fall in love with.

sj7
sj7
11 years ago

From cum dump to girl in love, the reverse of netorare; this sure is a strange case of vanilla but it's cute :)

guest
guest
11 years ago

I'll take "Slut-Girl Finds True Love" story over "Girl Friend Turns into Slut-Girl" NTR trash any day. I think your take on the story was dead on Oliver. Thanks for the share.

rhapsody
rhapsody
11 years ago

meh. The story had a strange after taste but the art was good. I'd rather the girl was a slut through her own will and choices than magically transformed into a slut by the power of dick.
Thanks for the share.

widowchaser
widowchaser
11 years ago

Is nobody else unsettled by his comment at the end? 'Right now, I have her all to myself”. 'Right Now' … I mean, it seems with that comment, even the MC has some mental reservations about how long her love for him (and his sexual exclusivity), will last. It's not supposed to be a 'continued' story, so it ends at that. Still, if it does get a Pt. 2 treatment, then the MC better not be making any long range plans with his tame cumdump just yet.

Dis077
Dis077
11 years ago

….now I'm no expert "having only had sex 4-5 times in my 23year lifespane" but it seems to me that her vage would not be as tight as it is made out…and would she even feel HIM over THEM?? I mean think about it 20>1…but as I said I'm no expert.

Steve
Steve
11 years ago
Reply to  Dis077

It's actually very hard to actually permanently stretch a vagina. And since most of her partners were in school with her, most of them probably have a very similar sized penis. Doubtful any of them have monster cocks.

battousai124
battousai124
10 years ago
Reply to  Steve

hehe, if it was she wouldnt have been sexually healed because we all know our hentai bigger dicks are always better, is the directive here^^. Also if one of them would have had a monster cock she would have been shown enjoying it much more with the other guy and saying "that was fast" with the one who is in love with her.

Kusojijii
Kusojijii
11 years ago

Hrmmmmmmm… food for thought for sure.
1) I can see myself doing what that guy did, but I'd have to be THOROUGHLY and COMPLETELY head over heels for the girl. I'm talking about an intensity of sentiments that I'm not sure I've felt yet.
2) Starved for affection, eh? That's a possibility… whatever the case, I'm quite sure she didn't know what actual affection felt like. She couldn't comprehend it, really. And, apparently, she likes it more than before… or at least so I hope.
3) And now, the biggest question for me… Did she actually enjoy being a cum-dump, or did she just not know any better? It's an important question because, if she actually did enjoy it, then their relationship is a ticking time-bomb that will soon explode in a mess of NTR. If she just didn't know any better, and therefore now has a more satisfying sex life AND an actual love life, then their relationship will actually last more than the average high-school romance.

I think she actually didn't know any better, personally. I'm basing this hunch on the fact that she was unsettled when someone actually told her he loved her; a girl who knows what affection feels like would have just smiled bitterly and left him alone in order to not hurt his feelings.

All that said, I'm left wondering just one thing: Just how dysfunctional was this girl's family? I don't think that a girl that's been brought up lovingly would end up thinking that sex is the only way she can connect with a man. I think there's a rich but VERY disturbing back-story behind this.

Also, I'm glad that your blog allows comments to be so humongous.

battousai124
battousai124
10 years ago
Reply to  Kusojijii

1)same for me I'm 28 yo and I have only felt it twice in my life at all (I'm ugly-I accept that but I don't like it) but if you can't even sleep when not having talked to her thats a good sign its this way.
2)I'm agreeing with you here, she was completely disturbed by the fact that he is in love with her "give me back my daily life" clearly shows that she understood on a deep level that what she did isnt real connecting.
3)I think its quite certain to assume that she liked it more with him than ever before, the way she is drawn is much more satisfied than when the other guy was done.

Eomi
Eomi
11 years ago

Thanks for your explanation now I feel better, when i first read this one i felt kinda bad. I don't really mind NTR so i was confused why this one made me feel that way when it was actually not a sad story or bad ending. Your explanation does kind off put it in perspective, the girl didn't really seem to be into the sex just kinda nonchalant about it guess she really was in it more for the false affection.

Amano Jyaku
Amano Jyaku
9 years ago

Finally read this, and it’s pretty vanilla.

***spoilers***

Basically, the girl loves sex and has been sleeping with every guy in class EXCEPT the MC. Because he refuses to sleep with her. Thing is, she didn’t like him initially (didn’t hate him, either), so sex with the other guys had nothing to do with him.

But… the MC tells her he loves her, and it didn’t affect her at first. But it does eventually, because the next day the guy said they didn’t have sex because she suddenly got her period (she lied).

It’s fiction, but I think the author intended for her to go from slut to girlfried. Not sure if the “right now” comment is a translation error, but she’s not the brainless cum dump that gets used up at the mercy of men. I don’t think she’ll cheat like Kon-Kit’s Kaya-Nee. Kaya’s a slut through and through. Her poor husband has no idea…

Amano Jyaku
Amano Jyaku
9 years ago

FYI, doesn’t bother me at all that she fucked a bunch of guys. She wasn’t cheating on anyone. I’ve fucked a bunch of girls, so why can’t a girl do the same thing if she’s single?