Otome Gari [English, with a REALLY refreshing ending considering who is the artist drawing it !], by Carn

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By Oliver (AKA the Admin) on 35 comments
DIE MOTHERFUCKERS - agreed. Huh ?

CoNTRa, a devoted great netorare provider, had promised us that one, and he delivers, with the help of Qbtranslations. Thanks a lot =)

The gimmick, the “special” thing in that one ? True, there’s an asshole turning a girl into his cum dump after he first abused her with the help of some rapist’s drug.

And the whole manga is about him doing the poor girl trying earnestly to turn him into a true boyfriend, all the while she’s abused and fucked all over.
… Except that… There’s an ending that made me crack a wild smile. The ending was ballsy. Manly, in the proper sense. I wish it was more “developed”, but, as it is, it was already enough : GOOD !

Hey, remember to check the list of ALL of Carn’s works on Hentairules!

Open the Complete Pictures Gallery (or the backup gallery)

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(25 MB, 28 pictures, English)

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Farfignootan
Farfignootan
11 years ago

This is the one I had mentioned a while back. My only regrets is that we didn't get to see the bastards get their clocks cleaned.

MHM
MHM
11 years ago
Reply to  Farfignootan

"HASSAN CHOP!" (or something close to it) might have been a more satisfying form of payback … but then again, depicting that might cross into territory where Oliver simply doesn't go (see the header of the home page).

:@

peperman
peperman
11 years ago

Now this is more like it. The bastards get what they deserve in the end. Brought a smile to my face.:)

NTR LOVER
NTR LOVER
11 years ago
Reply to  peperman

Even if they bastards did get what they deserved guess what? It still isn't a happy ending no matter how you look at it.

The girl is not only Pregnant with the other guy's child, but she has been trained to the point where she would never enjoy regular sex again.

Heck if this story were to continue I bet she would either go back to the guy everyone hates or if she got with her childhood friend cheat on him later because her wouldn't be able to satisfy her.

peperman
peperman
11 years ago
Reply to  NTR LOVER

Never said it was a happy ending. It's just nice to see the douche bags get what they deserved. It's an manga.

guest
guest
11 years ago
Reply to  NTR LOVER

Not a happy ending, but I'll take it. It was justice, the scum learned there are consequences to being scum, that no matter how little disregard you may have for someone there is always someone who will get really pissed if you harm that someone.

king
king
11 years ago

in an NTR I usually don't care about the guys…I hate the woman for being such an idiot…

Love !
Love !
11 years ago
Reply to  king

indeed, woman can be such a asses sometimes say stuff like "i couldn't resist" or "i can't go back" when they still got time to sick help!
It really pisses e off a lot

LamNguyen
LamNguyen
11 years ago

one of the best "happy" end by Carn though, maybe one day he will draw vanilla :D

BUT IT IS WRONG!
BUT IT IS WRONG!
11 years ago
Reply to  LamNguyen

How is this a happy ending? Sure the childhood friend served justice that many NTR stories don't have hence the "A non shinji syndrome male in an NTR WTF" tag however this is in no since a happy ending.

The heroin in this story is messed up for life. She has been trained and done by the assholes of this story so much that she will most likely never enjoy regular sex ever again. Let add to the fact that she was hopelessly in love with the NTR bastard in this story and if I were to guess that look of shock from her was more from the man she loved getting beaten to a pulp by her childhood more then anything.

So even if the childhood friend and her were to get together she is so messed up in the head that I am willing to bet she would cheat on him since she will most likely never enjoy regular sex ever again, and leave him to raise the douchebag's child in the process.

So as I stated before this is in no sense a happy ending, just not your normal NTR ending since the childhood friend isn't a shinji syndrome male.

LamNguyen
LamNguyen
11 years ago

Well, as I said "happy". Anyway, the story as the assholes got what they deserved somehow soothening my mind while others story they just got around and do the same with another girl which made me unsatisfactory. The society sure has these kind of people but they must reap what they sow.

Sallallallam
Sallallallam
11 years ago

Unless, child is girl and 16 years later, there is an step-incest continuation. Not real father and daughter living alone, having bitch leave them… 'Daddy I love you, I heard I am not your real daughter…' etc. etc. Hell, Carn, do it! You can do it, man, I know you can!

Kurzwaltz Messer
Kurzwaltz Messer
11 years ago
Reply to  LamNguyen

Actually, the first Carn story I ever read was the sweet incest story "Chikakutte Tooi Kizuna"
It stuck out like a sore thumb when it was later bundled in the NTR-laden "Otome Dori" tankoubon. :O

MHM
MHM
11 years ago

And there was also "Twin Kanojo", contained in "Dere Noche Torare", and more recently "Killing time With the Freshman" – two rare treats as compared to Carn's standard M.O.

LamNguyen
LamNguyen
11 years ago

Oh, my bad, it just Otome Dori is godly NTR so it outran the vanilla side story, all I can remember is how fucked the story is, though it was unpredictable, therefore enjoyable xD

Unknown
Unknown
11 years ago

Not a hapy ending by any stretch of the imagination, but something I personally liked. Seeing a male protag in an NTR actually do something more than jerk off and be a wuss. Don’t like NTR at all, find a lot of things implausible and outright stupid with a good amount of stuff in the genre, but this one stands out as being something that at least tried to be different, despite the crappy implications in the end.

sj7
sj7
11 years ago

Toh, a new manga chapter by Carn. Could it be… happy sex with love and respect? As if! The only thing that I can save from this is the final beating of those scums but it's a cold comfort… seriously, the only plot that Carna can think is some cruel netorare where women are only dumb cumpdumps, where sex slave is an euphemism and they are humiliated to human toilets… well this is my opinion of course but after all those work, Carn gets worse…

peperman
peperman
11 years ago
Reply to  sj7

I sometimes wonder if certain manga artist hate women? Carn does make some sick stuff but there are worse out there.

my thoughts on this
my thoughts on this
11 years ago
Reply to  peperman

Different authors cater to different audiences. Some do Vanilla, some do incest, and some do NTR. While everyone doesn't agree with what some offers write they do it because there are others who do like what they like.

I mean if people didn't like NTR period do you think there would make it? The same could be said with Vanilla, incest and many other genres of hentai.

It is just that some genres are more popular then others. Though at the same time I see more flak given to those who prefer certain type of hentai then others.

peperman
peperman
11 years ago

That's not what I'm asking though is it.. I'm asking about the artist not the readers and there taste. I know people love what others don't. I'm not asking that.

Then again maybe he just makes more money because Carn was a pure vanilla maker at one time.

my thoughts on this
my thoughts on this
11 years ago
Reply to  peperman

Personally I don't think the authors of these hate women. Heck some of the NTR artists who make these are in fact women themselves.

But some authors do certain works because they like that genre. You said Carn was a vanilla writer at one time. but lately I have been seeing this author only write NTR. Maybe the author stopped liking Vanilla and developed a taste for NTR we don't know only that author does.

But at the same time even though many people hate certain types of genres and like others if only their favorite genre came out without others they might get bored of it after a while. So in a way seeing the genres you hate with a passion I believe make can make you appreciate the ones you love just that much more.

SurpriseFish
SurpriseFish
11 years ago

Best NTR ending ever. Shame we didn't get to see the bodies though.

David
David
11 years ago

Here's another perspective: Nice guys finish last??? Since the childhood friends weren't together at first and she was tricked and did fall in love with the bad guy.

koko
koko
11 years ago

not reading anything by this author. 0/5

Brolion
Brolion
11 years ago

This is actually more believable than the other endings of NTR, most murders are committed by the partner in the relationship and if you're able to kill your wife/girlfriend then some extra assholes shouldn't be a problem.

Anon
Anon
11 years ago

Wow. Carn giving an ending like this?

MHM
MHM
11 years ago

I'm not going out of my way to read this again, except to say that, if ever this gets an H-anime treatment, I wouldn't mind a little modification of the dialogue on Page 24:

(Scumbag) Sempai: Well, how about it, Sakamoto? you want me to introduce her to you? She's the biggest bitch you've ever seen, man. I'm gonna make it real cheap for you, too."

Sakamoto (prior to opening the proverbial can of whoop-ass): "Yippie-kai-yay, motherfucker."

(inspired by the latest tags added)

widowchaser
widowchaser
11 years ago

I saw Carn, I kept right on going… don't feel like arguing the merits of 'justice' vs. 'revenge' or 'happy' ending vs. 'less than usual suck' ending. I just know it ain't vanilla, so I'll take this opportunity to move on….

SurpriseFish
SurpriseFish
11 years ago
Reply to  widowchaser

Regarding the ending, it's pretty much just half a step up from his usual endings. From the ending dialogue, we can assume the guy ends up in jail. I seriously doubt he gets a light sentence and unless those scumbags are crippled or dead, they are probably gonna end up going scott free. On a related note, the girl is most likely gonna be stuck with the baby and hate her old friend for saving her.

I think what we really want to end up seeing is an NTR mindbreak that ends in the girl getting unbroken and the offenders dead or worse. I'm not sure why this hasn't happened yet, it may have to do with the artists not wanting to offend their target audience or not being in touch. I'm not sure about the opinion of Japanese readers but a sense of justice is not just a cultural thing.

Phill
Phill
11 years ago

Nice ending. It's something like prototype rape-hentai characters meet reality based character. Would have been nicer if the guy had a grenade, then again it's not something you take with you everyday.

coNTRa
coNTRa
11 years ago

Quite a discussion here o_o

We can always hope one day there will be an NTR with a real d'awwwwwwww happy ending. But until then, I'm afraid most of my NTR commissions will be the usual affair :) Definitely keeping an eye out for any NTR-style posts that deviates from the general formula though.

a cousin
a cousin
11 years ago

To those saying the girl is ruined, will never have a normal life-

A female realitive went through this. And note, this is Canada. Not Japan. I only found out later.

After she got the doting husband and the four kids.

Now, yes, it took work and help to get past it, and now that I know… I guessed when it was happening and was right. There's a her before, and a hear after. But she's not some broken thing.

And the folks that did it to her did end up paying. It wasn't as physically carthitic (sp),as the current share– but seeing their lives slowly turn shit as the courts swallowed them..

So, yes. It is horrible. But not dooming eternally.

MHM
MHM
11 years ago
Reply to  a cousin

A-MEN to that, sir.

NTR lover
NTR lover
11 years ago
Reply to  a cousin

While it may work for real life logic hentai logic =/= real life logic. In hentai the females even if they get away from their abusers end up going back to it because they can't live without it since they were trained to the point of enjoying it.

When I see a hentai manga that has that real life ending I might do a 180.

Sallallallam
Sallallallam
11 years ago

Seem like all NTR haters hate Carn? Damn what about my favorite Carn – Dere Nochi Torare. He does not always write mind-destroyin stories. Way better than those scumbags, who write vanila story, and then after long time NTR continuation – like I MA RIA(or sth. like that).