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loplop
10 years ago

I don't know if I would even consider this as netori considering how this plays out. Normally even the hint of NTR/Netori will cause me to rage. Very funny stuff, Thanks for the upload!

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
10 years ago
Reply to  loplop

Protip: Laruffii is essentially a rewrite group. This translation is more inaccurate than CGR. It started a whole war on BOTH 4chan and E-hentai.

Also, it’s not called “Shock”. It’s “Yoroshiku” (essentially “Nice to see you”). Goatse can’t read moonrunes for shit.

loplop
10 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

Hmm, Wasn't aware of that. I'll keep that in mind when I see other items by that group.

anon
anon
10 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

Then why the hell is this on hentairules?

Oliver makes fun of Oobanburumai rewrites and yet this shit goes on the site like its a perfectly normal english translation?

Have some standards.

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
10 years ago
Reply to  anon

I dunno, bro. I also ask why he still posts CGR.

Lusty's translations are also considered wrong among more proficient translators like Biri and everyone from LWB.

That's why when I was running the show for those three weeks I didn't post any from Lusty, CGR or Laruffii. I don't consider any of them English translations.

Svarty
Svarty
10 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

Just how wrong are they? Just imprecise/unliterary or ez rewrite / the guy didn't even understand the story wrong?

Given the number I may have in my collections, I'd like to know how to appraise them.

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
10 years ago
Reply to  Svarty

The general consensus is "this isn't what is going on in the original at all". CGR's, on the other hand, are Google translates. So they're accurate, but still entirely wrong because Google only translates it to one word, even when there are other, more accurate words it can mean.

Ezequias
Ezequias
10 years ago

… I´d expect the japanese were more informed, the girl is brazilian, but she sings in "spanish".

Ezequias
Ezequias
10 years ago
Reply to  Ezequias

It´s not a big problem, but i will skip this one.

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
10 years ago
Reply to  Ezequias

Read my above comments.

Svarty
Svarty
10 years ago

A shame about it being a rewrite, the graphics deserve better than that, even if it turns out that this is a no brains, no scenario piece.

NTR Lover
NTR Lover
10 years ago

If anything this is self NTR since the husband asked for it himself.

Umbal
Umbal
10 years ago

I don`t get the fuzz about rewrites. I enjoyed reading some of "olddog(forgot the number)"`s work back in the HFH days. Rewrites still need effort and creativity.
Plus the original storys ain`t no shakespear either.
So lay down your pitchforks and torches,please.

Svarty
Svarty
10 years ago
Reply to  Umbal

Matter of principle… we look at Wamusato's story's pictures, as well read Wamusato's story, not just anything the pics inspired to some hack. (even if the original is bad, rewrites improving on it are unheard of)

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
10 years ago
Reply to  Svarty

The rewrite of OMD was pretty good. He even made fun of himself for skipping several pages. Had me loling as much as OCD's real script did.

^-M-9
^-M-9
10 years ago

Oliver what program do you use to resize the image, I try to resize some of them to 1600×1200 to save disk space but they always end ups bigger. I'm appreciate some tips or a manual on how to resize too. Thanks Oliver

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
10 years ago
Reply to  ^-M-9

Errm, why would you make it 1600×1200? >_>
http://imagetwist.com/kujcoabv3t31/

Seishiro Haga
Seishiro Haga
10 years ago

That tan that curves…

widowchaser
widowchaser
10 years ago

Hmmmm… no rage, not even a little bit… I guess it's tough to believe that the chew-toy of a husband really counts as a genuine spouse… it's more science fiction than NTR of any sort… and watching the two healthy young bodies slam together was kinda nice… thanks Oliver, for this interesting story.

sdfs
sdfs
10 years ago

Japanese people in general seem as ignorant about the world as Americans do. Since when do Brasilians speak Spanish…..

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
10 years ago
Reply to  sdfs

No, they're just extremely racist. Also, I'd take anything this script says with less than a grain of salt.

sancho
10 years ago

have to say he has improved his artwork a lote

Sol
Sol
10 years ago

Thanks goodness he's back, was wondering why Wamusato's works just stopped for a while. Was afraid he just up and stopped, maybe because of his manga, if that thing is still going that is… Anyways, glad to see new stuff from him, still funny and with lots of improvements! Hope to see more, bro.