A Straight Line To Love chapter 1 [English, and AWESOME], by Gunma Kisaragi

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By Oliver (AKA the Admin) on 66 comments

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UPDATE : following a legal request from the Wani publishing group, I am removing all download links to this from Hentairules.net

In due time (today as I am writing it, the partnership is a fresh announcement but a day will come…), this will become available for sale on the Fakku! webstore, thanks to a new partnership between Fakku! and Wani. Think about it, it will earn some well-deserved money to the hentai mangakas (every sale will bring them additional bucks), the works will be in top quality, available on paper or digitally, and they will be fully uncensored!

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annoying guy
annoying guy
10 years ago

I miss this author so much!!! thanks a lot man. Great way to start this year

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
10 years ago

>as I was politely but firmly explained the proofreading’s results, with its gazillion details of nitpicking, were too time-consuming for what I paid

Which weren't all fixed it seems. :(

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
10 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

I beg you, Hurp, don't write anything more, I don't want a nuclear war on the hentai scene, much less on my blog. Maybe it's my fault, I removed the stingiest remarks or rewrote them, because there was no point in poking someone's acute touchiness with a hallberd. Rants ? Sure. Do it by email with me.

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
10 years ago

IMO, the only "stingiest remark" was the thing at the end.

Tornado
Tornado
10 years ago

Love gunma's drawing of bodies (boobs, waist, hips in particular). I still think he "owes" us some anal hentai.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
10 years ago
Reply to  Tornado

I wouldn't hate Gunma doing anal, ooooh yeah :3

Also, Tornado, you must be careful, you used for the comments an email adress that gravatar seems to associate with your real face. Your face can be, in turned, searched on the internet, until you're caught red-handed. You need a second email for "non-respectable" activities. Do you want me to edit your comment to remove your email or write another one instead ?

Tornado
Tornado
10 years ago

Yeah, thanks, i didnt notice. If you can add a dot after the first letter of my email (e.de… instead of ede…) my "p|-|N4t0mz" avatar will be enabled.

If that dont work, delete the email.

Thanks!

(PD: Also, delete this post afterwards XD)

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
10 years ago
Reply to  Tornado

…Dude, just change your email address on your IntenseDebate account. Not that hard.
http://intensedebate.com/edit-user-account

Alexandrine Library
Alexandrine Library
10 years ago
Reply to  Tornado

Well, I think he could draw something written by Emua, for example. I would also recommend Yuzuki N Dash if she were not so obsessed with incest.

Anon
Anon
10 years ago

Nothing wrong with incest!

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
10 years ago

Who dared vote it one star ?

Alexandrine Library
Alexandrine Library
10 years ago

Kisaragi? I will certainly download it, read it and keep it in my library.

CellTF
CellTF
10 years ago

Thanks for the fantastic share, Oliver. Having commissioned works to both biribiri and desudesu, I'd definitely recommend either of them since you mentioned TLLP will only be doing the 1 chapter.

MHM
MHM
10 years ago

Today, the H-Manga. Sometime in the future (dare we hope), the H-Animation. xD

mvee
mvee
10 years ago

You had me at Gunma.
hngggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

2Hip
10 years ago

Love Gunma!! Thanks Oliver

fuego kahones
fuego kahones
10 years ago

kisaragi gunma for japanese olympic ambassador plox!!

Dream Shark
Dream Shark
10 years ago

Good news are always welcome!!! XD

Dream Shark
Dream Shark
10 years ago

I will love some new works of Shinji Nora too!!! =)

Seishiro Haga
Seishiro Haga
10 years ago

As usual, out of norm.

Kurzwaltz Messer
Kurzwaltz Messer
10 years ago

>> which highschoolers have, as alibi for sex, the practice of Seikoudo. Sex made into a sport, for high level competition

The description kinda reminds me of Kojima Saya's "Gakuen Seikatsu" http://www.hentairules.net/2013/07/05/gakuen-seik

But since this is Gunma we're talking about, it's going to be harem all the way. :D

Ehud
Ehud
10 years ago

Awesome. Many thanx Oliver.

NogardNogard
NogardNogard
10 years ago

I tried my hand at translating. I've never done it before. The first 3 pages were pretty easy, but I was pretty confused about what they were saying on page 4. I think I also need to improve my typesetting skills. I don't think I'll do the rest, just these 4 pages took hours. Maybe when I get a little better at Japanese I'll try translating something else.
http://postimg.org/image/8nqknndtb/ http://postimg.org/image/er857k433/ http://postimg.org/image/x2ysopcq7/ http://postimg.org/image/xia2hpynj/

NogardNogard
NogardNogard
10 years ago
Reply to  NogardNogard

Err, maybe this link will work better http://postimg.org/gallery/88k0hh34/120b00c6/

NogardNogard
NogardNogard
10 years ago
Reply to  NogardNogard

Yes, I'm rereading the first chapter, and I got page 4 very wrong.

Anonymous
Anonymous
10 years ago
Reply to  NogardNogard

"I also need to improve my typesetting skills"

You used punctuation. You're already 100 times better than LLP.

NogardNogard
NogardNogard
10 years ago
Reply to  NogardNogard

Im sure that part of why I'm having such a hard time translating this is probably because it is Gunma. I've known for quite some time that his works are difficult to translate.

Alexandrine Library
Alexandrine Library
10 years ago
Reply to  NogardNogard

Where do such pages come from?

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
10 years ago

The next chapter which hasn't been commissioned yet.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
10 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

Actually, it has been commissioned. Now is to wait for Biribiri :)

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
10 years ago

Oh. So probably 3 months. :v

Alexandrine Library
Alexandrine Library
8 years ago
Reply to  NogardNogard

Hey, NogardNogard, wouldn't you try to translate it?
The entire series has more than 200 pages, but only 50% is translated.
Gunma's fans will build a virtual statue in your honour. :D

Tornado
Tornado
10 years ago

@HurpDurp: I was logged with a personal public account, tt was my mistake.

CrazyRabbitt
CrazyRabbitt
10 years ago

Bless be the Tsundere ^^

Thanks for sharing Oliver

HighTimes
HighTimes
10 years ago

I'm not surprised. It's pretty well known (quite a few scanlators) the quality of his translations. Aibuka's translation is horrible compared to Afro's version.

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
10 years ago
Reply to  HighTimes

We told him.

Anon
Anon
10 years ago
Reply to  HighTimes

oh well, what's done is done

Hakaze
Hakaze
10 years ago

Thank you for the commission Oliver! You are my hero! :D

NIkolaus
NIkolaus
10 years ago

DepositFile link is down.

Otherwise thanks for this one!

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
10 years ago
Reply to  NIkolaus

Nope. Works. Try later :D

furupawa
furupawa
10 years ago

awesome share, i totally like it . . .

loplop
10 years ago

I'm away for a few days due to a funeral and we finally get some new Gunma. Very nice to see.

As it was said before, I really got a Gakuen Seikatsu vibe from this chapter.

totti
totti
10 years ago

Thanks you! this is awesome but i think chapter 2 and 3 are out now….

one of my favorite manga!

zodd
zodd
10 years ago
Reply to  totti

raw ch 2-3 are out…

h**p://g.e-hentai.org/g/658609/3f86ec0704/?p=2#ulcomment

([Kisaragi Gunma] suki ni nattara icchokusen)

[Kisaragi Gunma] Ch.01 (COMIC X-EROS 02)
[Kisaragi Gunma] Ch.02 (COMIC X-EROS 03)
[Kisaragi Gunma] Ch.03 (COMIC X-EROS 13)

we need waiting … i think …

(the translated isn't stopped … right ? pleeese …. )

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
10 years ago
Reply to  zodd

I just saw your comment in the spam folder, I hope it hasn't been in there for too long ! Here, it's approved.

PrinceHeir
PrinceHeir
10 years ago

is this already included in the new updated pack?

i'll download this and the new pack just to be safe ^^

thanks again Oliver!

furupawa
furupawa
10 years ago

could i ask a thing? how often a new chapter of this manga will be ready in japan?

i mean, i would like to know if there is a weekly/monthly magazine where Gunma Kisaragi releases his works or not…i don’t know very well how hentai are released and wanted to know better, if possible…

(sorry for my english, hope you will understand)

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
10 years ago
Reply to  furupawa

Whenever the artist feels like drawing / needs money to not starve to death.

furupawa
furupawa
10 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

ah, ok , thanks for the fast reply HurpDurp

zodd
zodd
10 years ago

the translated isn't stopped … right ?

….pleeese …. !!!

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
10 years ago
Reply to  zodd

Nope.

The chapters 2 and 3 are translated by Biribiri, from whom I commissioned the task. He already did the translation, but now it's waiting for Afro Thunda's proofreading. And when I asked Biri if he knew when Afro would be done, he replied me he had no idea, and it was best not even asking him, for fear it would take him even longer T__T

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
10 years ago

Afro's thing is 20 mangas all at once every two months or so, instead of one every two days or so.

Edit:

[01:15 AM] <+HurpDurp> http://www.hentairules.net/2014/01/08/a-straight-
[01:15 AM] <+HurpDurp> You got brought up, Afro.
[01:15 AM] <+HurpDurp> Shots fired and such.
[01:16 AM] <&AfroThunda> oh dear…
[01:17 AM] <&AfroThunda> oh, I thought it was bad
[01:18 AM] <&AfroThunda> if it makes him feel any better, chapter 2 is 17th in line :3
[01:18 AM] <&AfroThunda> and 3, 26th
[01:18 AM] <&AfroThunda> so I'd say they're in striking distance~
[01:19 AM] <+HurpDurp> On hte plus side, at least one of those will be done within two months.
[01:19 AM] <&AfroThunda> weeeell…

coresplinter
coresplinter
10 years ago

so we have to wait months for the continuation? Sigh

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
10 years ago
Reply to  coresplinter

No idea. Lots of stuff have been released since then, so I doubt it will take much longer.

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
10 years ago
Reply to  coresplinter

If you want it that bad, you're completely welcome to go pay some faster translator to do it.

Quality takes time. Biri's gotta do a lot of stuff to the images. They look like shit.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
10 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

NO !

I paid for the translation already, I pray that nobody snipes me.

Lukasz6969
Lukasz6969
9 years ago

Kanade has amazing body ^^ thank you:P

Alexandrine Library
Alexandrine Library
9 years ago

Just a question: one year after the release of chapter one, does it still make sense to wait for new material?

__Millz__
__Millz__
9 years ago

Wow, one year passed?
I came back to check if there were news but it seems the answer is no.
Also it has become difficult to find any Gunma stuff lately.

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
9 years ago
Reply to  __Millz__

I'm not sure why you're surprised. I mean >Wani

__Millz__
__Millz__
9 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

Because I didn't think this cleaning would have been so thoroughly executed and I was quite positive that it wouldn't have lasted much. On the web people usually find a way to bypass this kind of things. But maybe it's just me that's not looking in the right place.

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
9 years ago
Reply to  __Millz__

You’re ignoring the fact that most (if not all) scanslators are students and scared shitless about getting buttraped in prison for distributing a comic book online.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

Or grown-up webmasters who decide it's too much of a hassle to seek confrontation with a big company over sharing porn online, even if that's the best form of porn there is.

ichymaru
ichymaru
9 years ago
Reply to  __Millz__

Chapter 3 was translated not long ago by a brave anon,hopefully he will dodge the ban hammer enough for the others chapters

But dat typesetting xD Dx still better than trying to remember my lessons of french to understand the translation of the french team that translated chapters 1-5.

So as you said: people is finding ways to dodge the fanstranslation inquisition

pd: and chapter 6 came out in magazine x-ros25 x3

Sorry for my awful english ,i'm better understading it than writing it

battousai124
battousai124
8 years ago

(Oliver-admin update: because fucking Wani, I had to edit Battousai’s comment to remove the most fapworthy part. Really sorry Battousai, I don’t have much choice, it’s too much trouble for me to handle otherwise T__T )

Free Manga Downloader: https://github.com/riderkick/FMD/releases
It is a godsend and can be used for several sites, also normal Manga sites and Hentai both.

Eric
Eric
7 years ago

Oliver I found a complete version of this but that site has no dl, so I went here but can’t find the complete here, are you going to share it here or not because of wani?