Hougan Kanojo (“Shot Put Girlfriend”) parts 1-3 [English, the story is complete], by Arai Kei (AKA Kansai Orange)

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By Oliver (AKA the Admin) on 15 comments

At least you can't say the girl isn't hot :3

Well. This is confused boner material.
We go from happy sex, to cheating happy sex, to netorare, to open perversion, to forgiveness and acceptance of one’s perversity, to sex with love, to threesome, with a happy ending conclusion :shock:

Don’t misunderstand me, this isn’t bad, but the fast pace and edgy themes might give you a strong desire to facepalm or give up. I won’t blame you, but this might be a loss: even with the poor English and the (whiteout) censored art, the girl is a solid hottie: tall, well-built, tanned, with tanlines, while the drawings are full of pleasant “hand-drawn” idiosyncrasies. It’s good on the eye, and, after all, the ending is happy, too…

(Oh, a brief summary: a tall athletic girl is secretly the lover of a male teacher, but he is a genuine pervert and orders her to become the girlfriend of her male childhood friend. Yeah, that’s a shitstorm in the brewing.)

I’ll leave it in your hands, I guess ^^ It’s been released by Satoru, thank you! :jap:

–Update: excellent news, this share has become obsolete! Its contents are now part of Gunjo Gunzo, a 245 pages long complete tank :)

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Billy Mays
Billy Mays
5 years ago

It’s like swallowing bile, then straight away trying to eat a cookie.

This work is a piece of shit, and the ending does not absolve the girl, or the old man. The boy is also a cuck.

Wazzaby
Wazzaby
5 years ago
Reply to  Billy Mays

as all the netorare works, didn’t care, I just fapped or got it because of the draw

Pavlov
Pavlov
5 years ago
Reply to  Billy Mays

Man, there is just nothing like the words of a closed mind to make me give a work a second chance! This was a thought-provokingly original plot with unique characters and couple of kids who had realistic life-choices to make. Would I have made the same choices in the same situation? Could I eat my pride like that or would I stay bitter and alone?

Most stories make you think that if you’re a good person, good sex will come to you, but reality is more like this story: complicated and weird. A beautiful girl who’s classmates told her she was ugly, a boy who let a bad experience shape his life, and a used-up old man trying to fix a terrible mistake he made to get off. There’s good and bad to every person, real or imaginary. You just have to look a little harder sometimes.

Billy Mays
Billy Mays
5 years ago
Reply to  Pavlov

The plot of this work is not thought-provoking at all.

Stop using mental gymnastics to try and make it as if terrible stuff like this is any good.

MarqFJA87
MarqFJA87
5 years ago

Oliver, you have a LOT of doujinshi by this artist already, under both “Arai Kei” and “Kansai Orange”.

… Also, thanks for removing what you removed. That was utter garbage, and I’ve already reported the E-Hentai gallery over this in hopes of seeing justice done.

Battousai124
Battousai124
4 years ago

I HAD to know what that was about^^
Yes, something like this, definitely has no place in hentai.

Sixugliness
Sixugliness
5 years ago

The story reminds me of Miito Shido’s Total Inseminator.

Guest
Guest
5 years ago

i dunno…i have pretty mixed feeling over this one’s story…

On the one hand the story is well built enough that you think you want to root for the two of them, but each time i try to put myself in the shorts of the cucked boyfriend i just feel like even if he his still in love with her, if it was me in his place, i just couldnt trust the girl with anything at all, since the whole premise of their initial relationship was built on both a freaking lie and a convoluted way for glasses dude to get off…

in the end you just cant create a long-time, stable relationship if you keep undermining the trust you have in the other

but maybe im just a cynical dude ;)

TheTrexfromSark
TheTrexfromSark
5 years ago
Reply to  Guest

They are in highschool, they were never going to stay in a long term relationship anyways. Hell, in my country most people don’t even have relationships outside of friends with benefits until their 30s.

Guest
Guest
5 years ago

I guess it does depend on the country and the individual, but to say they were never gonna stay togheter is pushing it a bit, as i have two friends who are still with their high school sweethearts and made their lives togheter (and im in my mid thirties mind you, so its not just 2-3 years time we are talking here).

Different countries, moral, societal norms and the likes i guess, but i can only bring my own spectrum to the discussion and its always nice to see a different perspective

Aeneas
Aeneas
5 years ago

As usual the forgiveness is of the ‘handwavium’ variety. Somehow the asshole teacher magically talks the boy in to participating in the ending. Of course we don’t see the discussion because, well, lets face it that dialogue would have been hard to make convincing. Instead we just conveniently skip that inconvenient section. I’d agree that the story has the potential to be good, but not when it doesn’t do the hard work of resolving its mess on camera.

oldbrokenhands
oldbrokenhands
5 years ago

Gotta say, without the censorship, this would be a masterpiece.

Hot and sweaty sex like a Yoshu Ohepe work, but without the annoying flying fluids everywhere.

Tanlines, cute young lovers, and great sex action like a Jingrock work.

Battousai124
Battousai124
4 years ago

VEEERRRRYYYY conflicted with this share, I have to agree that it IS a well written story as a whole, but i cant agree with the characters. The guy says (in the translation) that IF she focuses on muscle alone, she wouldnt get a BF, I would think that would prompt her (since she values his opinion) to ask how she could be “girlier” or “prettier”…NOT to go to an old fart and ask him to have sex, that jump was just too bad, if he had said, she should try to be sexier and we see her trying outfits and behavior but not getting to the guy at all or failing at it, I could accept her hearing the stuff from the old fart and being slightly infatuated with him, as he would be the only one saying she is pretty and MAYBE having sex with him in the first part.

However she seems to be completely indifferent to her childhood friend, look at her face when SHE asks HIM to be her BF and her complete lack of interest until HE basically jumps her. SHE even says it at that point “I dont mind, just warn me beforehand” = Complete lack of attraction and only a simple desire to “obey” the old fart. She may have cum from having sex with the guy but still.

The last part again is also of course a complete hodgepodge, the teacher he saw her have sex with is apparently still employed at the school (and it seems to have been a few days since that incident) so HE is a complete wuss, who wouldnt even follow rules if they bit him in the ass. I would think that teacher x student relationships are forbidden BY LAW would be general knowledge. INSTEAD the teacher starts talking and somehow gets him to agree to have sex with HER IN FRONT OF HIM????!!!!
WHAT THE FLYING FUCK???

SHE NEVER NOTICES THAT THE DICK SHE HAS SUCKED ONCE!!! ISNT THE TEACHERS!!!! AND SHE IS IN NO WAY EMBARRASSED OR EVEN FAZED by the childhood friend to have been the one she had sex with, AFTER it was the TEACHER who told her to wait in the storage room with a blindfold on (ANYBODY could have walked in OO).

I agree that a relationship built like this, could never hope to hold even for another month, I mean at some point the guy will ask himself, if he doesnt say that he finds her pretty or attractive (or any other adjective) she will simply start humping the next middle aged old fart she finds in the street.
Unfortunately she seems like that girl, after all we see it happen just like that in part 1.