Ero-Isu [English, 231 pictures, AWESOME], by Isutoshi

Wow, 100% “thank you” rate !!

Have fun filling your hard disk, guys ^_^

@ Lhytiss :
Yeah, having a slow connexion sucks, I’ve had that for a few years ¬_¬

Allright, if you’re OK with a list of the elements I found, here it comes, it was a great opportunity to read Ero Isu again

Most of the mistakes come from just two grammatical errors, so it would be relatively easy for you to avoid them with a bit of care in the future, that’s good news. They revolve around (a) singular VS plural forms, and (b) accurate choice between past and present form for the verbs.

The list follows (praying I didn’t make typos myself when I wrote) :

– page 15
it’s should have been a fun trip — it should have been a fun trip
– page 17
have you ever cook for your boyfriend — have you ever cooked
– page 31
spread that legs — spread those legs
– page 35
two japanese civilian was finally — two japanese civilians were finally
like they don’t want — like they didn’t want
an endangered animals — an endangered species
the animal protection group all over — the animal protection groups all over
– page 55
at all cost — at all costs
grab my breast — grab my breasts
inserting your cock — insert your cock
– page 65
did you messed her up — did you mess her up
your cums — your cum / your ejaculations
I did raped her good — I raped her good
– page 66
you didn’t forget, right ? No I don’t — you didn’t forget, right ? No I didn’t
– page 97
a magical girl » — a magical girl ?
– page 98
find another otaku guys — find other otaku guys / find another otaku guy
– page 105
keep an eye on those brat — keep an eye on those brats
problematic kid keep — problematic kids keep (or keep it in singular form but then you forgot the “problems” word)
– picture 106
the boss arround — the boss around
these part — these parts
– picture 108
what are you called us here for — what did you call us her for ?
– page 109
if I didn’t called you — if I didn’t call you
– page 110
you never done it before — you never did it before / you’ve never done it before
– page 117
your tiny cocks — your tiny cock
– page 129
someone who don’t have a girlfriend — somebody who doesn’t have a girlfriend
– page 141
it’s head would bear — his head would bear
– page 145
a bad guys coming — a bad guy coming
what are they up to these days — what they are up to these days
– page 147
it’s His friend or something — it’s his friend or something
– page 154
that thing in your head — that thing on your head
– page 164
it is for those very reason now — it is for this very reason now / it is for these very reasons now
– page 165
such a hard to understand words — such hard to understand words
– page 166
not a cheap tricks — not a cheap trick
– page 168
how could it changes anything — how could it change anything
requirement to do a ninja skills — requirement to do a ninja skill
a foreigner actually have such — a foreigner actually has such / a foreigner can actually have such
– page 175
realize his limit — realize his limits
– page 186
somewhere arround — somewhere around
these prefecture — this prefecture
– page 191
a lot of volunteer here — a lot of volunteers here
– page 198
you’re taking me back — you had taken me back
you must be doing much more — you must have been doing much more
– page 199
she really have the best ass — she really has the best ass
– page 201
I hope this don’t — I hope this won’t
– page 204
perform illegal prostituion — perform illegal prostitution
make you complete these procedure — make you complete these procedures
– page 207
just let it to me — just leave it to me
I=I think paying a girl for this — I-I think paying a girl for this
– page 208
that what makes this district so interesting — that’s what makes this district so interesting
let throw this guy to the nearest place — let’s throw this guy to the nearest place
– page 209
information around these part — information around this part
– page 214
for all our current customer here — for all our current customers here
impossible for us first-timer — impossible for us first-timers
troublesome if everybody think like that — troublesome if everybody thinked like that
– page 216
I’m at a lost here — I’m at a loss here
a 3D girl has it’s limit — a 3D girl has its limits
– page 217
I haven’t watch this yet — I haven’t watched this yet
– page 219
with extraordinary feat like you — with extraordinary features like you
this will surely makes them bleed — this will surely make them bleed
it also have a cactus-like design — it also has a cactus-like design

That may look big, but you know, in comparison with other h-mangas before proofreading, this isn’t that bad