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sky
sky
13 years ago

"Be come silent and hearit!" Engrish at it's best.

Thanks for the share, Oliver.

Harco
Harco
13 years ago

Thanks Oliver and CGrascal; a nice, lovely story indeed.

/spoiler
However, note that this is the first of four chapters. Because of the artists reputation (read Housou Shitsu No Triangle if you don't know what I mean) I was curious how the story would develop. I've read the raw and while the next chapters are certainly darker of tone, it didn't look like anything majorly disturbing. It even has a nice ending! Of course, I couldn't understand shit what they were saying and thinking, but I think this arc won't nearly be as bad as Triangle was.

(NB: I hope I didn't spoil anything major. I just think it's better to know what's coming than to be unpleasantly surprised.)

AnonMan
AnonMan
13 years ago

@Harco

Where did you find the raws? I’d like to spoil it for myself, too. Especially since my definition of “too disturbing” is probably different than yours.

Allen
Allen
13 years ago

So… lowly rated. Must give 5 stars…

Ehud
Ehud
13 years ago

Just wait Oliver. Just wait and it will come. After all, it's just the first chp.

Seishiro
Seishiro
13 years ago

Not even one of those 'evil' genre? That's new.

widowchaser
widowchaser
13 years ago

I just found Ch. 2 Eriko Sensei's -Memories, where she's, well hell, she's raped and taken advantage of by a perv, while having a head injury and amnesia, from a near miss truck accident. And Ch 3 looks like 'Training' and 'mind break'. Stopped looking for Ch 4 (raw) after that. Thanks for Ch 1, but you can keep the rest.

entropy13
13 years ago

Admittedly, it's true (the English lessons, I mean)…
http://imgur.com/mgd5i.jpg

Morgoth
Morgoth
13 years ago

Actually in ch4 the girl is saved by her lover, so.. there's a happy ending.

widowchaser
widowchaser
13 years ago
Reply to  Morgoth

LOL! I don't think you and I define 'Happy Ending' quite the same way. I think 'salvaged a disaster' maybe, but getting through rape, gang-fuck, training, etc. ain't how I'd describe a happy ending. And glasses didn't get Fucked up near enough. A lousy bloody nose… shit, he probably got one of those looking at her naked. Baseball bat time, now THAT would be a happy ending…

Harco
Harco
13 years ago
Reply to  widowchaser

You have to see it in perspective. Most women whose mind got broken are usually doomed to live there lives as some punks (and sometimes his friends) personal "cum bucket". Raped and mindbroken or not, at least she's with her boyfriend now. To me, that's a better ending than the temporary satisfaction granted by excessive violence.

widowchaser
widowchaser
13 years ago
Reply to  Harco

You misunderstand me, I am greedy – I'm in favor of both getting her back AND the excessive violence. I'm an 'eye for an eye' kind of guy, I guess. But I prefer NOT wading through chapter after chapter of shit, just to get to a weak-ass payoff. Better yet, how about no violence INCLUDING against the chick. There's a novel idea! But given that, I like the scales to at least balance out.

NTRmakesmerage
NTRmakesmerage
13 years ago
Reply to  widowchaser

Yeah I completely agree. I am too an "eye for an eye" kind of person. If you bring gang rape, "training", and other fucked up shit to the main heroine, then the least the antagonists deserve is death by being hanged by the testicles.

nibee
13 years ago

got chap 2-3… and holy rage mother of rage… but from what I read from the others, chap 4 is gonna be a good ending so hope it's all good in the end

Numinor
Numinor
13 years ago

You can't think with our standards.
In hentai is comming inside just like sharring kisses.
So for this (like in all Inomarus stuff) it is okay, that a totally stranger cums inside your woman.