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anette
anette
13 years ago

I think after his recent chapters ShidoL has some issues with envy over female sexuality. I am maybe on of the few girls which read hentai with my boyfriend (mostly for laughs – but tragedy of M was really fun and sort of exciting). But this one really disturbed me – it seems author is expressing hate because woman can cum multiple times by orgasm considered stronger than male. That is why they have to be reduced to "cumbuckets" and mindless sex-obsessed whores as for their punishment for that. This is the recurring theme in all his late works – and hitting womb isnt actually pleasurable at all.

I think ShindoL should let his girlfriend give him a prostate message to calm down ;). Author has exceptional talent for drawing but his stories are getting worse and worse not only as a whole story but also as individual chapters. Which is really a pity – the story about exhibitionist girl was funny but next chapters turned into usual barf.

thatguy
thatguy
13 years ago

yup i feel your pain

sky
sky
13 years ago

Yo, Oliver.

Wanna bet that Sengohara girl is going to turn into a boy and "protect" Takuma? I was kinda disappointed with this story too but since he isn't using his DaHootch heteronomous I guess we can kinda hope for a nicer ending than more gangbang and the kid borning at the end of one of those.

Also, 'bet' is just a expression, don't take it to seriously. ;)

Zathael
Zathael
13 years ago

I'm hoping for some sort of "happy ending" with Sengohara as a boy as well, but this middle part is *really* pissing me off. I am actually a bit surprised to see you sharing this Oliver. After reading your "Fuck You, ShindoL" comment on twitter I figured this wouldn't see the light of day on your blog. But I must give you major kudos for sharing this. Again, I am hoping that the ending ends up being worth it.

Harpy
Harpy
13 years ago

Honestly, It was so gross that I couldn't even get into it. And I was okay (more than okay, LIKED) [with] the first chapter. Sure, it doesn't really represent trans issues but I think the way it approached it was unique. I don't think it's about having a fetish, but people would not be accepting if a man decided he was a woman or if he was forced to become a woman because of certain circumstances. It actually dared you to still find the girl and these situations attractive, and for that, I found it a little unique, if that makes sense. Or course, the way everything played out was still cliche and not original, but I blame that more on the writing than anything else. The second chapter was just typical Chikan erotica, but the third was just depressing to read.

I can respect the "weirdness" of it (If you even wanna call it that) and think initially it's okay because it approached the whole Transgender girl thing in a unique fashion and I could sort of get into where it was initially headed (different than the way most Futa stories handle it). But like you said, not only is it just not realistic, it's disgusting and offensive.

"A man gets turned into a chick and immediately becomes a whore", I mean come on, we get he's trying to write erotica but to tackle it like this is just…Wtf, ew…

Harco
Harco
13 years ago

Well, I can understand why you don't like this. But disappointed? It's not like chapter one and two were such pleasantly normal stories either. This is one weird manga and I wouldn't be surprised if the next chapters are even more fucked up. I mean, we're talking about ShindoL aka DaHootch here! The tone of this guy's works are as unpredictable as a drunk hippo on a unicycle with a giant warning sign on its back, screaming: APPROACH WITH CAUTION. And that's exactly what I do when I see a new work from ShindoL. Because if I expect nothing less than an atrocious manga, I'll end up positively surprised at best and just indifferent at worst.

As for this manga… well, I rather like it. The absurdity is rather… "funny" and the drawings are just awesome. Thanks for sharing this, Oliver.

alvaro3173
alvaro3173
13 years ago

Althought I know for sure there is a bit of sarcasm on your words (not that I care, anyway), the intention is what it counts, so thanks, Oliver AKA "FUCK YOU SHINDOL" :)

alvaro3173
alvaro3173
13 years ago

I'm not gonna share the same feeling of yours, Oliver, not because you're wrong (c'mon, we're talking about ShindoL, duh), but because sometimes you just need a "fucked up" story like this one. The more you see it, the more your appreciation for others mangakas growths. That's all about it. And, like Zathael, kudos for sharing another "not your cup of tea" work, Oliver.

Normal Guy
Normal Guy
13 years ago

'page not found' error
But i all i got to say it the title is a bit of a mask to me (since i havent read it) as long as its not like the one manga with the boy who switched bodies with a girl he liked and would get turned on by the slightest touch and have guys just use her body in anyway…yeah got like 3 chapters in and just quit…cant think of the name of that manga but its here i know that much.

Zathael
Zathael
13 years ago
Reply to  Normal Guy

That is pretty much the summary of this manga. She gets her entire body turned into an erogenous zone, and because she can't control herself, she ends up being everyone's cumdump, complete with people drawing things all over her body with a marker, she stops going to class just so she can fuck all day, etc.

Normal Guy
Normal Guy
13 years ago

if it helps i can tell you the beginning of it…that i remember.
it starts off with him/her walking and he see himself walking with his friend and he happy cause he was glad that he wasnt dead. but then starts to wonder where the girl is because he thought that since he was in her body she would be in his but that wasnt the case…like i said i got turned off by the story line so i dont really remember the rest of the story but i think that should help.

Zathael
Zathael
13 years ago
Reply to  Normal Guy

That is Ochiru Tenshi, by Distance.
http://www.hentairules.net/2009/12/05/ochiru-tens

I think there are 3 volumes to the story, but only the first one has ever been translated. The group that worked on it dropped it. I don't think it was that popular. The story was just too strange and confusing, even for Distance.

AnonMan
AnonMan
13 years ago

@Oliver

But it fits so well in this case…he should put this stuff out as Da Hootch…so we can know ahead of time which direction the story will go in.

Zathael
Zathael
13 years ago
Reply to  AnonMan

Exactly! If this series was under the "DA HOOTCH" name, we could all just say "oh, this is all going to end up as mindbreak/slavery/etc" and those people who like the "vanilla" stuff could just ignore it. But since he is using the ShindoL name for this, we all have hope for a good/happy end.

yerza
yerza
13 years ago

moo another "Page not found".

hellbert
hellbert
13 years ago

I do hope, there will be no happy ending. This story cannot end well. It would look unnatural, artificial… vanilla flavour is not about forced "happy endings" !!! This story should turn out to be total "cum dump" ending.
Does she want to be loved? Or to be fucked? Does fuck=love? Despite stating all those questions, story must be "cum dump" kinda.
And there is no talking about mindbreak. What mindbreak? She was fucked up from the very beginning:/

hellbert
hellbert
13 years ago
Reply to  hellbert

And one more thing. Did Setebos commission this one? I think not. Was that a Stebos' commission, we could be sure its gonna go all well, happy-fappy ending. But in case of this story – I do hope it won't.

Zathael
Zathael
13 years ago
Reply to  hellbert

This was commissioned by TaBsiCore, who runs the Anime & Manga Transgender blog. Funding came from donations from the readers.

banzemanga
banzemanga
13 years ago

@Oliver
The author must be expressing his desire to become a girl, lol.
I totally agree with you too; the stupid story ruins the great art.

The protagonists' friends are sick too since they are f**ing a man.

Afro Thunda
Afro Thunda
13 years ago

Hoho…. I had no clue the story was going in that direction. Now I'll have to start reading it. I'm not too big a fan of Gender Bender, so I've been putting it off. But after seeing all these reactions, I've got to see what the big deal is now. Based on Oliver's description and all the comments, sounds like a winner in my book. Especially if it has Oliver cursing the author, how can I not read this? I think I'm gonna like this.

hellbert
hellbert
13 years ago

Or he is just posing to be one :/ Man, its so easy to get flames on u, Oliver :)

hellbert
hellbert
13 years ago
Reply to  Afro Thunda

I like this one, cuz its gender-bender. Maybe some birh gang-bang with scat? Would be nice. I cant even look at that thing as an actual girl :)

Omni
Omni
13 years ago

I remember viewing some of the first chapter before quiting and burning it.

Now I just took a peek at 4 pages before completely avoiding it.

This entire series pisses me off so much. Reminds me of Sayuki no Sato. All thanks to the FUCKING FUCKED UP story.

Seriously the main character is so pathetic and stupid! If I was in his I mean her shoes I'd have ditched all my male friends and went straight for female skinship. =D

Girl Clothing, Girl Restrooms, Female lockers, and last but not least GIRL BONDING! Did I mention girl bonding? Ya Girl Bonding… LOTS of it! An endless amount of time spent fondling boobs because I'm the same gender. XD

Too bad I didn't get gender blended in a chemical blender thanks to cancer. =/

S.C.
S.C.
13 years ago

I believe the author uses ShindoL for original works and Da Hootch for doujin parodies.
As for the content; I don't even bother noticing this kinda stuff anymore (mind-break, cum-dump, etc.).
It's like some kind of cheap-ass everyday meal you only bother eating 'cuz your starving, and that's 'bout it.
I could hardly be any less surprised.
Well, let's just see for now if this is gonna turn into the first ShindoL/Da Hootch-futa story ever.
I'm curious after all~.

Jankull
Jankull
13 years ago

There is much, much worse cumdump mangas on the web…and on hentairules as well.
Type90, Tuna empire, John K Peta, Drill Jiru…etc.

All excellent in their own way, and far more extreme than this new ShindoL.
I don't see why this one gets so much "hate", I found it more funny than disgusting since the hero/ine (fuck transgender!) actually enjoy those lame situations.
Not to mention the "state of the art" ahegao faces of ShindoL, wich greatly help appreciate it.

Stupid hero/ine, lame scenario, fucked up sex…so what? This is hentai world. ^_^
And the 2nd chapter gives me a raging boner each time I read it, I don't really ask for more.

Tent
Tent
13 years ago

Guys remember in the previous chapter? The female friend? I think shes going to become a futa or a boy. What happens after that I have no idea. Whether good ending or bad.

Kyoten
Kyoten
13 years ago

Just finished chapter 1. I have that feeling you sometimes get when you wanna throw up but you kind of don't at the same time. The one that keeps you feeling nauseated in a noticeable but not hampered.

~Kyoten

Ale
Ale
13 years ago

im hoping for a happy ending like almost everyone else, dont dissapoint me shindol ! =/

Rikko
Rikko
13 years ago
Reply to  Ale

I wouldn't expect it.

Don't be surprised if the next chapter feature rape over an unconcious pregnant woman….

I'd love to be wrong, though.

Zathael
Zathael
13 years ago

My guess as to how things will end: The guy/girl, knowing that s/he is pregnant now, is going to try and stop all the sex and become more "responsible". They guys in school aren't going to have any of that shit and are going to drag her screaming and kicking back to the bathrooms, and really rape the fuck out of her, being even more brutal than anything up till now. Then the one girl will come back as a guy, and will either A – try and save her, or B – join in with the other guys and rape her even harder with his new dick. I'm hoping for A, but guessing that B is much more likely.

Boom
Boom
13 years ago

I have a few questions: Are people actually going to buy this? And if people do like this then I guess they have have some very weird/disturbing fetishes. I mean don't get me wrong vanilla stories can be a bit boring but this is just some of the weirdest shit I've ever read and I've read a ton of the ntr and tentacle stuff. Sure the art is good but there are many other great artists out their like fueta kishi, nico pun nise, and others, that you can read that aren't just straight up vanilla.

Ale
Ale
13 years ago
Reply to  Boom

of course ppl will buy it, otherwise he would had stop doing this kind of works =/

Afro Thunda
Afro Thunda
13 years ago
Reply to  Boom

Heh, what you asked is a rhetorical question that doesn't really need an answer, but… Of course there's going to be people that are going to buy this. It's probably already considered weird/disturbing from other people's perspective to be reading drawn porn anyway, so why not put the icing on the cake and go for some real fucked up and weird stuff.

After all, this is the kind of stuff that makes Vanilla seem way better than usual. I'm sure there's been many a person on here that returned from the "Dark Side" of H-manga, then read some Vanilla stuff and automatically thought it was the best piece of reading material ever lol.

Anyway, as for this "Becoming a Girl" story, personally, I could have done without the Gender Bender. Out of all the stuff I've ever read, Gender Bender is by far the weirdest there is for me lol.

Rikko
Rikko
13 years ago

Damn, Thanks for the share Oliver.

The art style is great but….but….The story is turning to be AWFUL.

This is soo gonna end like 4 Leaf Clover, which is one of the most shocking hentai works I've ever seen.

This guy is fucked up sometimes (Shindol). I just don't get how he can enjoy drawing that. :S

Sol Hwan
Sol Hwan
13 years ago

Why, oh why must you be so freaking good at drawing Shindol? Your extremely unique style that I can freaking spot a mile away with your awesome facial expressions!
And yet… And yet… I have an excessive want to erase your dialogues and insert my own… And "maybe" improve you godawful senario…

widowchaser
widowchaser
13 years ago

Your first instinct was the correct one, Oliver. The story sucks. There are some of us readers who don't find good art enough to salvage a crappy story line.

red
red
13 years ago

Why is everyone hating? Apart from the pregnancy, which I could understand would put some people off I don't get why everyone's puking because of this. Until chapter 3 there's nothing really that bad. I also don't get why everyone is against "cumdump" stories. Isn't this just the old sexist approach, If a guy fucks 20 chicks at once he's a god, if a girl does it she's a fucking whore. Isn't that double standards? Am I missing something.