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N. Bypasser
N. Bypasser
12 years ago

Well, it doesn’t really look like she’s taking her relationship with her boyfriend for granted. But one could wonder why she hasn’t done it with him yet, since it’s said in the story that he was still a virgin.

The only way to truly confirm her “priorities”, so to say, would be with a sequel to this story. But I’m afraid such thing may never be made.-_-

Topher
Topher
12 years ago

On the one hand, I found this pretty arousing, but at the same time, it also left me with a bit of a sour taste in the mouth…conflicted.

widowchaser
widowchaser
12 years ago

Love a slut? I guess some guys can… or in this story, delude themselves that it's ok if their alleged 'girlfriend' wants to screw everybody BUT her alleged 'boyfriend' (he was still a virgin when he 'discovered' her hobby, IIRC) … Dunno if I could though… glad it ain't my problem.

battousai124
battousai124
10 years ago

People who can't feel the greatest pleasure with the one they love, havent met love yet.

Cluemaster
Cluemaster
10 years ago

I disagree, this is pure NTR. I hate the bullshit of people's true whatever. The club is like a cult. She was trained to do it. She didn't decided to start having sex(and she's being whored out in classic mindbreak fashion), she was talked into it for a stupid reason.

Also love isn't about putting up with whatever. Even if you like or love someone, if their unreliable, lying bastards, then their awful people.

She's cheating on him. I also think the idea of hypocrisy is bullshit. Most guys don't try or do anything like this.

Nor is there any indication that the couple survives or becomes strong. She's still lying to him. He might be suffering like a lot of NTR protags who put up with it. Characters putting up with it in NTR isn't unusual. It's about the only slight variation but it falls in line with the overly used "he does nothing".

This is NTR, It's horrible in a moral sense. The girl character is horrible and she's being used, you can pretty much stick mindbreak in there as well. This wasn't some fantasy she had, it was something they developed. And she is lying to him. This is a basic of a relationship and people know that it's a betrayal.

I think it's a bad american idea not to criticize women at all.

Three things that make NTR shitty storyttelling is mindbreak, protags having the same reaction(never confront), and half a story(never dealing with the fall out). This has it all.

we don't know what her morals are but you can imagine their standard and she wa sn't sleeping with her boyfriend beforehand.

This isn't any different than Boku no Shiranai Kanojo no Kao(at least the girls in that felt guilt), Happy birthday side B, and any number of NTRs.

I keep wishing if the guy had written this well. That the kid would have confronted her, while getting the club disbanded, and perhaps some of the kids arrested.

Cluemaster
Cluemaster
10 years ago
Reply to  Cluemaster

Let me add some things.

Mindbreak doesn't mean the people become vegetables. People can be brainwashed, and conditioned too. Sayuki no sato and Sein/Zain are examples(but really any of the housewives type are).

Emotion has nothing to do with character. Finding out your wife/girlfriend cheats and never tells you isn't a gauge for love. I hated one story that acted as if the guy was in the wrong if he didn't forgive his girlfriend cheating on him and ending their relationship just cause people were saying if he "really loved her"… seriously that's bullshit.

The boy didn't do anything wrong. But this guy thinks he has to be responsible for some sort of imagery collective will. It's really bullshit to blame the victim in that situation. Especially just because they don't want to put up with a despicable person. If that other person
loved them, then they shouldn't have done something damaging and painful. If she did love him, that doesn't change what a horrible person she is.

A good ending to this story would be that after he heard the explanation he would have punched those women away. I hate in stories how people suddenly lose all strength because their shocked. In that situation, the opposite would make sense. And I like I said, it's the same reaction that's too bullshit. It's too hard to believe at this point. It might be fine once or twice but I doubt it would make for 99 percent of reactions. It's probably the opposite, only one percent might react like that.

In a good ending he would have barged into the room and dragged her out. Maybe even ask his friend for help. Maybe he would have taken the chance to take some pictures. Then he would have taken her to her house and told her parents that the club president was her pimp and she was a prostitute. Then the police would have arressted the club president and then contacted the school and that would have abolished the club.

an alternate would be that he starts ignoring her for awhile since they aren't dating anymore. Calls the club president out with a thick and long flash light, and beat him till his teeth are out. Then he explains that she betrayed him and that she was being a prostitute for the president and that she put the club above morals and hurt him ect(being used, stupid for a school theater club).

I think the first one is better but like I said, the annoying things about NTR are characters that don't act at all and that's awful writing, since this is a situation where people can put themselves in. You can't harm heartless people with emotions since they already don't give a damn, and if you can't harm them physically, then there might not be much you can do. But in scenarios like this, anyone would know what they can do with a little bit of thought.

If he's still together, I doubt it's because of love, plus the club was responsible. I'd hate to think the boy would react like that but he might use her as a meal ticket(in an unlikely scenario). Chances are he's not that type of person. And you never know how that girl might react either. To her she might think she's roleplaying in her stupid way of justifying her shittiness. And he wouldn't be doing that unless they gave her some training excuse. She seems dumb and conditioned so she might buy anything. But this isn't about love getting stronger, nothing here is about that.

I remember there was a story about a couple and the wife decided to tell him about the kind of sex she likes by becoming a slave to some friends(her old boyfriend) and showing how she gets. That was moronic. She still betrayed him(or was that an old video?) and all she had to do was talk to him about it. But her wanting him to be her S and M master is different from what this girl is doing. That'sabout the only story where a girl is asking a loved one to accept her interests that I can think of, though I don't get why'd she cheat to get her point across. But that story too had the guy blamed himself for no knowing something he had no way of knowing since she never told him and the reaction to getting cheated was really annoying. It's basically two separate issues, she could have told him, but the way she did it is something that you can legitamately get angry at. Though easier to forgive since she wanted to get him involved and she just made a mistake that she'd probably agree was a mistake and wouldn't do again.