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widowchaser
widowchaser
13 years ago

A wall of text, and no NTR tag, Oliver. Don't you think THIS one deserves it? Or Cheating/ Or Stupid Fucking Bitch warning? Just the number system offends people? I dunno, but I think better warning was called for.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
13 years ago
Reply to  widowchaser

I thought everyone knew already. But you're right, I'll add this.

MegaHentai
13 years ago

I've enjoyed most of what was released thus far, so I'll be snagging this as well. Much love, Oliver!

AnonMan
AnonMan
13 years ago

Yeah, you might want to mention the NTR (in case people haven’t heard of this series yet…). I can’t help but remember the reactions on Desu’s blog…

somedude
somedude
13 years ago

This story definitely deserves a dumb ass bitch tag on it. Good drawings though.

Monster-Girl Lover
Monster-Girl Lover
13 years ago

I'd agree with an NTR and/or Moronic Girl tag, this series is not one of my well liked ones because the entire premise relies on this genius girl actually submitting to the will of some random delinquent because of some random comment her boyfriend made. Even forgiving that, the boyfriend only says what he does in the end because he's worried about the girl dumping him. This series is a prime example of why COMMUNICATION IS IMPORTANT. If either character in the relationship had just spit it out, primarily the girl, then all would have been well. Hell, she could've had the BOYFRIEND train her bit by bit using toys and such, would've likely been fun for him as well. I can only hope that the girl ends up using some of her "intelligence" to ask the boyfriend to try anal sometime, instead of the utterly moronic option of going back to the delinquent for a fix. It's not like it'd be THAT difficult to bring up, and she shouldn't have any kind of pride left either after all the training she went through, so that shouldn't be a factor either. Long story short, this series has good art IMO, but a terrible story because the girl doesn't think things through, and also just plain won't speak up to the one person she's SUPPOSED to trust with her problems and thoughts, that's one of the key points in a relationship. Sorry for the rant, just had to get that off my chest.

AlexandrineLibr
AlexandrineLibr
13 years ago

I agree the story is absurd in many points, but from my experience I can assure it is extremely realistic. I have seen all sorts of absurdities in this world. But who hasn't?

Intelligent people (especially intelligent girls) playing stupid is no novel at all. Why do you thing along history the worst sort of criminals have attracted intelligent and informed women? I haven't got the answer, but I doubt anyone has.:(

SpectralTime
SpectralTime
13 years ago

…Yeah, pretty much what he said.

Zathael
Zathael
13 years ago

First of all, thanks Oliver for all the hard work you have done with this one, including the time taken to describe the mess of a translation this has turned out to be.

One thing you said though really caught my eye: "The coup de grâce : not all of the English chapters are based on the Japanese tank."

So just to be sure I am understanding you correctly, what you mean is that some of the magazine chapters that have already been translated into English Are *not in the tank*? So there are some chapters that can *only* be found as magazine scans? That's *crazy*. But then again, considering how much of a mess this whole thing has become, it isn't that surprising. :-(

Thanks again for all the work you have put into this.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
13 years ago
Reply to  Zathael

My bad. I mean : some chapters are based on the magazine versions :)

Zathael
Zathael
13 years ago

Oh, ok. I totally misunderstood what you were saying. Thanks for clearing that up.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
13 years ago
Reply to  Zathael

There, I updated my description accordingly :)

TimeForHentai
13 years ago

Thank you yet again Oliver, not so sure about this manga though.
Doesn't suit my taste but oh well, appreciate your uploads.

nestletollhouse
nestletollhouse
13 years ago

i know, we're not supposed to comment with angry or harsh words…..
BUT , i really hate that fucking stupid bitch!!!!!!! not mention the stupid guy alsoooo
the girl is so stupid that i just want to be there to slap the bitch and wake her up
the guys also need to be punch, both of them!!!

need to yell it to relax myself……

AlexandrineLibr
AlexandrineLibr
13 years ago

Guy, I do love this manga! The buggering scenes are greatly described. Even people who do not appreciate that sort of entertainment have to applaud it.

Thanks for the especial gift, Oliver. I am not a mother, but… whatever!:D

Readme!
Readme!
13 years ago

i agree what 'somedude' said. I read some of Yuzuki N Dash of this work ( for odd reason he went from happy sex to this NTR o_O) and it doesnt really look very NTR-ish compare to most NTRs i seen cos it not forced and the two seem to get along in some extent but in this kind of NTR, there is a reason why this is all happening. I could see this as more of cheating since the girl did it behind his boyfriends back, nothing more. I havent looked in to the japanese full version yet but from the comments from everyone here, i believe theres a chapter missing and thats more NTR than the book itself. Its called 'Another Another World' and when you read this, your opinion about the current event (probably) change.
I like Yuzuki N Dash's work but this kind of thing is depressing to read but I dont hate it cos hes my fav artists, lik Carn, very NTR but cant hate his work.

somedude
somedude
13 years ago

Wait, the main story isn't complete? AND it gets worse? Scratch what I said, THAT would make me rage. When I read it somewhere else, "chapter 0" was a sort of appendix of the story, explaining a bit about the delinquent boy's past and how come he acted that way… Making the tank as a whole feel more about "stories about screwed-up (and dumb) people" that pure and simple NTR. What's the untraslated stuff about?
(I can't take NTR, and this story in particular makes me kinda sick, so I don't really wanna read it, but I'm still curious)

Readme!
Readme!
13 years ago

Ah sorry, i probably didnt make it more sense since i still had a bit of rage after reading 'Another World'. 'Another Another World' is the 'chapter 0' your on about, its just separate chapter from the main 'Another World' book from magazine or just separate book from Comiket. Only mentioned it cos most people only read the current event and gets pissy with the 3 characters. Like you said somedude, its 'tame NTR' and it had reason behind it all unlike most NTR where its a simple stealing away the girlfriend/wife and mindbreak the crap out of her. Tbh, I feel sorry for the delinquent overall out of that story since it seems to be all about him really if you connect the chapters.

somedude
somedude
13 years ago

Good to know, there wasn't anywhere much to go with the main story… So all in all it's just terribly depressing instead of rage inducing, which is pretty much all I the praise I could give an NTR story.
I've stumbled upon a raw of Carn's latest tank because it had a couple vanilla one-shot that were translated recently, and found out that the main story was about some guy's childhood friend getting gangraped and knocked up by a bunch of old men, on tape, while he watched and fapped off to the scene. It's… pretty disturbing, seriously. The only NTR thing I kinda-sorta got through without wanting to bleach my brain was Otsuka Kotora's "Her True Colors", but I'm honestly glad he ditched the genre and went straight vanilla.
Now the comments thread has become a chat, I wrote hundreds of words about porn, so it's high time I take my leave.

???
???
13 years ago

I dunno about you, but this is precisely why I avoid these sort of manga: I'd rather deal with relationship problems in the real world rather than read about them.

Harco
Harco
13 years ago

I was kinda hoping that 2.5 would actually provide a decent ending for this manga, but alas, no cigar. That disappointment aside, the art is quite good and I can't help but to find the anal sex very intense. Just too bad the story is retarded. Oh, and Yuzuki 'N Dash? You can release as many side-chapters as you want, but I won't let it get to me, oh no. Now go to Inomaru and ask him nicely if he can wrap the story up for you. Because you obviously cannot.

Damn, got mad after all.

Well anyway, thanks for sharing this, Oliver, and for taking the time to explain the mess that is the order of the chapters.

princeheir
princeheir
13 years ago

so Oliver do you plan on finishing the last chapters as translated and the whole book as tankoubon? or are you just gonna leave this like that due to complications with the numbering and so.

anyways i'll wait for your reply for me to decide :D

but still you manage to deal all that crap just to give this to us and i thank you sir ^^

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
13 years ago
Reply to  princeheir

I'm waiting. With just one chapter left, I'd feel bad if I was ninja'ed by another scanlator (that is to say : paying for a commission, having the scanlator work on it, but someone else releases another version before).

princeheir
princeheir
13 years ago

oh cool :D

will wait for that :)

Scheider
Scheider
13 years ago

Hmmm. As disappointing as this was, it didn't really get to me that badly as compared to other NTR works. Yes, heroine was pretty silly and dumb, but she didn't get mind-broken in the end, and at least showed regret and stuff as she did technically plan it FOR her bf<<<retarded etc etc(Hopefully we can get stuff along the lines of inomaru's epic NTR comeback stuff-heck, misao there even got into more retarded stuff). In my opinion, the small consolation was at least she didn't get it in her pussy. that's it.

Anyone can flame this comment if they want though. It's not like it ended up like "a lovely scenery" by rei shinozaki. =_=

Diego
Diego
13 years ago

Hmmm… spanking… *drools*

Scheider
Scheider
13 years ago

Hmmm. As disappointing as this was, it didn't really get to me that badly as compared to other NTR works. Yes, heroine was pretty silly and dumb, but she didn't get mind-broken in the end, and at least showed regret and stuff as she did technically plan it FOR her bf<<<retarded etc etc(Hopefully we can get stuff along the lines of inomaru's epic NTR comeback stuff-heck, misao there even got into more retarded stuff). In my opinion, the small consolation was at least she didn't get it in her pussy. that's it.

Scheider
Scheider
13 years ago

Hmmm. As disappointing as this was, it didn't really get to me that badly as compared to other NTR works. Yes, heroine was pretty silly and dumb, but she didn't get mind-broken in the end, and at least showed regret and stuff as she did technically plan it FOR her bf<<<retarded etc etc(Hopefully we can get stuff along the lines of inomaru's epic NTR comeback stuff-heck, misao there even got into more retarded stuff). In my opinion, the small consolation was at least she didn't get it in her thing in the front. that's it.

Scheider
Scheider
13 years ago
Reply to  Scheider

*puts up flame shield*

Scheider
Scheider
13 years ago

Sorry for the multiple posts. Please feel free to delete the repeating ones. Thank you.

LoLPorn
LoLPorn
13 years ago

boner killer, absolutely could not get off to this at ALTHOUGH I thought adding depth to the male character (instead of just making the NTR retarded girl go with some random ass guy) made it a good story. Not fap material in my book, I'm too imaginative and this really gets to me. I guess love is about growing and making mistakes together, whichh this couple failed to do, but hentai should be about escaping the real world. I would even prefer rape/mind-break (also not fap material, but just if I had to read it) to plots like this, because its easier to brush them off…

Kuonji Alice
Kuonji Alice
13 years ago

I don't know….I think I can understand about you guys' comments, but this is actually one of very few doujin with NTR that I actually like. Even though I pitied that girl's bf, I still think he's a bit…weak compared to the deliquent in terms of personality and attitude.

I dunno, in terms of shipping then perhaps I must say that I support the delinquent rather than the girl's bf.

It's kinda strange because I'm quite sensitive about NTR (though not really rage-inducing and will probably only cause a frown when I read it, but still….boner killer), this one still got me intrested and manage to make me support the NTR even for a bit >_>

Not to mention with the amount of sex that girl had with the delinquent, it's as if the delinquent is the one who got NTR'ed instead ;P

BobJones
BobJones
12 years ago

Oh she is so definitely gonna cheat on him again. I’ll pay to see the chapter that that happens in, it would be an amazing fap material.

Also, saying the the bf is weak compare to the other guy so he doesn’t deserve her has got to be the stupidest thing I’ve ever heard. The bf is not weak, he’s a normal guy and there’s no way for him to know that the bitch is cheating on him.

You’re saying that if a guy isn’t aggressive and trying to get into a girl’s pant left and right (even though the girl is not even his gf) then he’s WEAK. Since all girls are whores anyway, considerate = weak and sexually aggressive = strong and that’s all that matters right? I suppose some people might think that way but be warn, unless you’re just too smexy, not all girls are desperate dumb whores.

oldbrokenhands
oldbrokenhands
11 years ago

I know eventually there will be a completed version of this coming down the pipe, so I'll wait till then. But I know this one is good because of the thumbs I've seen, and the long comments in the post.

Thanks for the upload.

kyuubi123
kyuubi123
11 years ago

no offense to anyone who likes this type of hentai- i read this on fakku tihnking it would be good since i like the artist a little but then when i read the first chapter all the way through i jumped to the last chapter andafter reading it i actually cried cuz the girl loved her boyfriend but she decided to cheat on him it was really sad to me.
(love the site though oliver you always put the best up)