Aisai Nettori [English], by Marukidou
♪ ♫ « Makin’ love, cheap heartbreaker, broken backed,
Nasty ballbreaker, stay out of my bed, outta my head !
If it’s lovin’ you, I’m better off dead !
Back off, back off bitch,
Down in the gutter dyin’ in the ditch !
You better back off, back off bitch,
It’s such a pity that you’re such a bitch !
Back off, back off bitch !
It’s time to burn – Burn the witch !
Fucking bitch ! » ♪ ♫
OK, you got it, everyone ? Read at your own risk.
Credits to Axel Rose, Guns And Roses, and Cgrascal.
By the same artist, I also share SM Danchi (“SM Apartment”) ~ Maso Mesu Heaven (183 pictures) and Hitoduma Super.
Open the Complete Pictures Gallery (or the backup gallery)
Here comes the zip link! Help yourselves! ^^
(19 MB – there’s a fitting bonus in the zip -, 16 pictures, English)
Or you can also use the Alternative :
Zip Mirror #1 – or – Zip Mirror #2
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Haha, I didn’t like to share that one, but just in the name of doing something original as a description, that was worth it
I modified the pictures in the version I shared.
At first I thought of rewriting the dialogues but I gave up when I realized it was impossible to turn it into an incest or a vanilla story. Besides, I hate non-antialiased fonts, I hate ComicSansMS, and the husband doesn’t have a face to be called Shinji or Kirk.
So I just performed a batch retouching of the pictures to adjust the color levels, the pictures were in dull gray, not in true black, it didn’t make this splendidly optimistic story justice.
This manga inspired you to link to Guns and Roses, so I guess it can't be *that* bad. xD
Thanks for the manga Cgrascal and Oliver.
“You can come home, but I won’t sleep with you.” Either that or "Bye Bye, my useless husband." Had to be the worst lines in there lol… Talk about kicking a guy in the balls repeatedly whilst he is down.
NTR. Well, I was bored and read (in Gallery, damned if I'd DL it) it anyway. I confess it had a certain over-the-top feel that made me rage with a small 'r'… Some of the shit she was saying, well, hard to think anybody would be that stupid or callous. Still, it's NTR and I'd skip it ordinarily.
Story is absurd as hell, that's all I can say. Obviously, the author was aiming for supreme rage and he got some people but I get this "meh" feeling. I've felt worst, I guess a one shot story can't overcome a few build-up stories that go on for a few chapters.
bleh…. I tried to stay open with all sorts of stuff but NTR always makes me feel sick… she can be the hottest chick in the world but the scenario just kills it…
this manga remind me to the movie Jarhead.
well how about a spin-off, where the husband get a pair of balls
get some mother fuk guns
and say
is time to kick ass and chew bubble gum
and this mother fucker, dont have any bubble gum
just saying xD
¿Do you mean the part where they see a video and the wife says, now who has an affair?I feel very bad by the guy (exposed in front of several men and his wife so far).
But when she said "NOW who has an affair", got me thinking … perhaps "the" had an affair first
yeah is a bit similar, in the movie the soldier have cheating the wife so the wife have his revenge,
but here in this story we dont know why the wife is so angry with the husband.
Dude… NEVER go work overseas and be ok with the idea of not see, touch and feel your wife for months or even years. Or you take her with you or you finish your marriage. The thing is, a woman won't move with you if she has her own work, here she was a damn housewife and the guy an idiot. I read NTR and most of the time the guys deserve for not having balls to react. Here the guy could have found a way to bring her with him. Is like that phrase, those who really want something find a way, those who don't find an excuse. Lonely women will fuck anything, neglect a woman is the worst mistake possible.
NTR o/
Thank you :')
Just a quick question: Are there really supposed to be *no* preview pictures whatsoever in this post? I am just wondering if Oliver considers this story that worthless, or if there is some sort of error with the post itself that is making me not able to see any pictures.
It's deliberate. The only interest of that shit is to have fun quoting Guns And Roses.
Ok… I am just very surprised/concerned because this is the first time I have *EVER* seen you do something like this, even though you have shared plenty of NTR before. Not that I am complaining mind you; I know there is a "market" for NTR, and you probably get a ton of downloads from stuff like this that helps with the beer money. But all that aside, I have NEVER seen you hate something so much that you didn't even bother to provide preview pics. I am assuming that compared to this share, "Crossing Man and Woman" is a lighthearted romantic comedy? That this share makes "When You Let Go My Hands" look like a "chick flick" that Oprah would recommend to her viewers? In short, is this the WORST THING EVER that you have shared here? Because if it is not, then I am still struggling to understand why you decided to provide NO preview pics whatsoever.
Any preview pic I would have given would have sold out the netorare stuff. And the main reason for me to share it was to have fun with an original description, to make people understand with the song that it was a shitty netorare ^^
The number of downloads greatly varies following patterns I'm unable to understand, however. Yesterday's thing that I hated was popular, but most of the things for which I write angry or negative descriptions do not make good figures. Sometimes a super-censored Touhou doujin will make more than 300 downloads, while an original manga with humour and tolerable censorship will be less popular…
I still have to figure out how all this works, frankly o_O
As for my taste : yeah, even Crossing Man And Woman was something I prefered over this. At least CMAW had a bit more ambition and writing quality.
Ok, now that I know that you consider Crossing Man and Woman to be better than this share, it all makes sense. I guess I have to thank you Oliver for sharing something this deplorable. I must admit though, that based on your description, I hope this has the worst download stats ever on hentairules. :-(
If you're curious, so far Tosh Toraoana + Menkui repack is around 300 DLs (Impossible to expect less from something so glorious, and it's the glow of being glorious + good update + gooder update), while Aisai Nettori is likely to reach a hundred by the end of the day.
I don't think the download was high because it was liked, it was because we hated it that we need to see for our self just how much we hate it. Whereas the good stuff has less download is probably a repack of better quality uncensored, stuff we already watch and kept the first time around. some people don't really give much regard to quality.
It just occured to me that had missed one aspect of your question, so here I am again.
There's also the fact that I love breaking the routine.
I have a few other ideas of fun original stuff to do, except that I need an opportunity to do so. For instance, having as unique description a song quotation, like here. Or when I shared Sweet Lip with just "I came" as the textual descriptions…
It makes my hentai blogging much funnier to be on the lookout for routine breaking alibis ^^
I guess I am just so used to you being very predictable in how you do your shares, that when you went outside of your normal way of doing a post it surprised me.
Also, I did something I had told myself I wouldn't do: I downloaded this one and read it (I guess I am a glutton for punishment). I now agree that as far as NTR goes, this is one of the worst I've seen. The fact that by the end of the story, she was showing no remorse *at all*, and was in fact blaming everything on her so called worthless husband and *taunting* him about everything, was just way over the top.
there is no preview picture, it is THAT bad. For the sake of curiosity once again, I can summarize this trash as:
NTR + RAPE + MINDBREAK + WAIFU = BULLSHIT
Every element that makes a hentai doujin bad to read is in it. EVERY FUCKING ELEMENT
Are there tentacles too? If not, someone should 'shop some in, add some pegging and call it "the worst stuff ever". And then it'll get downloaded a million times xD
Lol.
Yay, one more event. Just need 472 more to unlock to unlock MEH STATUS
-__- i dont like stuff like this i cant help but feel disgusted betrayed and rage and wanna kill…it somehow put me in a angry mood tell something take my mind off it
Sorry… well, im a little angry (not soo much). Is very difficult to work hard and get this kind of thing (and worse, to receive such words discrediting and demoralizing). If this history continue, i want a revenge (not an understanding)
Everyone's so mean~
Poo~r NTR :'(
After a few pages I couldn't read anymore and found out why you featured that song from Da GunZ…
Am I the only one who is unaffected by NTR? Loved the GnR quote by the way…
I might just be out of the loop but did Cgrascal get a new website? The one from before is gone.
ttp://oneofakindproductions.blogspot.com/
The Song Sucks
The Mang also
no good story, draws, cenery, costumes(fetish)
NOTHING
DELETING it!
bB
man the moment he left, i had a feeling things were gonna suck for this poor guy and it sure did…man totally hot wife but damn it's a shame she's cheating on him, not only that it's being recorded and being sent to him…damn that's just cruel and wrong…:(
man if i had a wife like that and the job required me to be away from her at long period of time, i'd pass on that job offer, i rather find a job that's near home and be home everyday to see her…
Though i didn't even bother to finish reading it, because what was happening, I'm still thankful for the share Oliver
Of course that the plot was very poor, but people forget that this story, and NTR in general, teaches you some lessons, more if you're a guy. I would never, NEVER trade my wife by a job that makes me work like a slave for 17 hour a day as a salaryman that is nowhere near the career that I expected or dreamed. When you like your job you can easily forget about the whole world and become a workaholic, I know because I still am one, but for a job that only gives money and no satisfaction at all, for me is not worth. Besides, the idiot leave the wife at home… Ok, certain jobs require that you travel a lot, or go alone and be at the company disposal, but if the money is coming in you can afford for at list hotel and tickets for her to travel. Marriage sucks, if you have to be absent for almost a year or months, you're asking to be cheated. It could be worst, he could have bring her with him and she could have cheated on him with every single guy of his company. LOL
If it was with me, I would find me the maximum amount of girls or prostitutes that I could, make them all drunk, turn the cameras on and have sex for as long as I could. If I couldn't anymore I would take Viagras and fuck for hours even at the risk of dying. Then I would send the movies to her and also go there myself, kill every guy she fucked, torture and maybe kill her. Yeah, I know, I'm sick! LOL