Karma [English], by Ran Hiryu
There’s a remark that I very strongly would like to do (actually, I’ll post it, but in the comments), but I can’t write it just like that, it would spoil you the story.
I’m always complaining that hentai stories are plain and boring, this time I won’t be bitching when there’s an original scenario based on an unusual idea
Graphically, it’s just a bit above average (these were especially the sensible variations in relative body proportions that annoyed me, was it an early work by Ran Hiryu ?), overall it’s still tolerable. And the story makes it worth it, in my opinion at least Thanks a lot to Yoroshii !
By Ran Hiryuu (but these days I see “Hiryuu Ran”), I also share Mamma Mia (182 pictures), Mamama (186 pictures), Mother’s (145 pictures, this is the main arc of: Mama Ga Uketomete Ageru), Inyuuzuma No Soto (211 pictures), On A Distant Island 1-4, Sister Taste, Mitsu No Getsu 1-3 and Ha-Ha.
Open the Complete Pictures Gallery (or the backup gallery)
Here comes the zip link! Help yourselves! ^^
(12 MB, 18 pictures, English)
Or you can also use the Alternative :
Zip Mirror #1 – or – Zip Mirror #2
I'm just glad that I was wrong about her being a yandere: I started to get scared at first.
Thanks Yoroshii and Oliver for sharing here.
is it over? are there more chapter or was this a oneshot
It is a translation from some monthly magazine, so I am guessing it is probably a one shot.
The plot in this one does make it more interesting. It would be nice though to know more about their past.
Thanks Yoroshii and Oliver.
"Was it an early work by Ran Hiryu?"
Actually, this story is one of his most recent ones. It's an April 2011 publication.
Thanks Afro !
That's funny, in my eyes it looked less "achieved", "controlled" than other works. Oh well, maybe it's just that the artist had to make it super-fast.
Forgot my comment :
OK, we're in the comments.
HUGE SPOILER WARNING !
Rather than relying on her former man's memories of their sexual relations, couldn't the girl simply tell him "hey remember, we did that, said that, had the secret that…"
Jebus, fortunately I didn't make myself this remark before the manga was over, I would have been enraged other this ^^
I think she at first wanted to make him believe her, but then had second thoughts about trying to force him to remember things or to try to prove it to him, based on his "logical" nature. Plus, from the flashbacks, it looks like he died of some sickness or traumatic injury (based on his being in a hospital bed) and she is worried about him having to deal with those memories. So she decided at the end to make up the story about being the neighbor so he *doesn't* try and remember anything.
I still do not get the story.
Call me dumb/
thank you soo much Oliver ^^