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soro
soro
12 years ago

no offense to u oliver, or gunma, but im going to wait for a complete story repack and some news of a positive ending before i even think of downloading. p.s. run on sentence doth run on.

widowchaser
widowchaser
12 years ago

I started reading it, knowing how Gunma's stuff usually is. (Group, swapping, sex as just something to do between cigarette breaks or before brushing your teeth, etc.) I admit I'm not really thrilled so far. And after Yuzuki N Dash's jump into NTR, I wouldn't be surprised if GK did so too. Like in Ch. 3 or 4. I predict the younger sister and male protagonist getting involved, and then younger sister getting brought in to 'help out the older sister'… perhaps unwillingly, or just through 'man's cock mindbreak' while trying to help sis… I just hope I'm wrong, but we'll just have to wait and see… but I sense it's coming.

acolyte
acolyte
12 years ago

No NTR please? :( No more :( If Gunma goes NTR.. Nooooo…

hellbert
hellbert
12 years ago
Reply to  acolyte

What NTR? They were NEVER a couple to begin with:/ Chill out, she's just stupid cunt, that's all there is.

Unknown
Unknown
12 years ago
Reply to  hellbert

Not to mention she even says she only enjoys it when she's with him. I'd say that's pretty anti-NTR.

Also, the translation is painful to look at. Tons of spelling and grammar errors, sad to say.

Andate
Andate
12 years ago

I see what you mean about the story. This kind of story will only end in a way that makes me wish i never started reading it. Of course Gunma's art is as god as ever. Maybe i'll just white out the dialogue…

Anon
Anon
12 years ago

Was anyone able to find raws of this? As I would really vastly prefer to have even a remote approximation of how it ends before I read it.

alejandro
alejandro
12 years ago
Reply to  Anon

Dude…. There's no tank of this yet, if that's what you're asking.
It's still being released chapter by chapter.

Harco
Harco
12 years ago

Well, I have never seen Gunma draw pure, cruel netorare/mindbreak and these first two chapters give me no reason to assume he will start now. However, he does have a knack for writing stories that contain multiple 'layers' (as far as that is possible in hentai) and are not always pure love & happines. And even though his drawings are of undeniably great quality, I find them not really that appealing when it comes to personal preference… So yeah, I'm gonna skip the following chapters, although I look forward toward the comments when Gunma does decide to walk the netorare road.

mvee
mvee
12 years ago

double jackpot!!!!! gunma and tosh today!!!

saks
saks
12 years ago

This doesn't appear to be heading down the NTR route at all. I don't know, I guess I'm getting a different vibe. The younger sister is obviously in love or whatever with the male protagonist. That's what it looks like the older sister was going to say before she started having massive orgasms. There will probably be a fake NTR scene (similar to the one in Mai Favorite and to a lesser extent the one in Sweet Hearts) in one of the coming chapters, and eventually the male will pick one of the two sisters, or more likely, hook up with both sisters. I would have a clearer image of what I think will happen in the future chapters, but the grammar makes it hard to understand exactly what's going on. I'm looking forward to the next chapter to get a better translation hopefully, and to know exactly how the story will end.

Ehud
Ehud
12 years ago

Many thanx Oliver. Great post.

somedude
somedude
12 years ago

I'm betting on a "everyone fucking everyone else" ending more than anything…Dunno, it's pretty much what the author has drawn in most of his stories so far, it's just that then not many characters bothered with "feelings" and whatnot :)
Still, nice drawings and all, but I'm not really liking it much…

hellbert
hellbert
12 years ago

I would like to see younger girl with main protagonist, and older sister being just ona-hole just like she is now. I would like the next chapter to be a sanpi of two sisters and lucky bastard rather than younger sister walking the path of ona-hole to take her "revange" :/

alejandro
alejandro
12 years ago

I assume you're giving thanks to Ryuu no Tamashii for the first chapter, because I'm pretty sure he didn't translate the second one (although he does plan on doing it later).

Phill
Phill
12 years ago

You know what? No bad feelings on how it will unfold, not after sweet hearts. I saw the same reaction when that girl said to the two female protagonists that she knew how to make the male prot. decide, and guess what? No bs.

2Hip
12 years ago

RyuuNoTamashii did translate the 1st chapter. But he has not done the 2nd, as yet.

This version of the 2nd chapter was translated from Japanese into Spanish, by a blogspot called Dengekinf. Then meiwow on exhentai. Translated that, into English. Ergo…. this ehhh copy

2Hip

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
12 years ago
Reply to  2Hip

Oh my god. How do you manage to always have all the information, 2Hip !?!

Thank you =)

2Hip
12 years ago

eerie ain't it. lol……………

Seishiro Haga
Seishiro Haga
12 years ago

Well, if you can't enjoy the story, enjoy the sex.

Kiew Moon
Kiew Moon
12 years ago

its gunma, and its easy to see where things are going. gunma never ever have real rape in his story.
most of his story is just pure ridiculous , but his drawing is strong.
next should be the little sister that will serve the whole house, either sharing
the sister burden or simply because she want it. because its gunma!
so this is another happy gang bang story like the other gunma.