Rec chapters 1-3 [English, Complete], by Erect Sawaru

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By Oliver (AKA the Admin) on 51 comments
WOOHOO, SOUL CRUSHING, YAY ! -_-

Woohoo, who’s riding the soul crushing train with me ? :D

Let’s enjoy watching a pure guy’s feelings blossom (chapter 1 – taped happy sex with love – fapfapfapfapfapfapfapfapfapfap), suffer doubt (chapter 2), and eventually collapse from moral agony (chapter 3), super ! :D
*cough*
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Update : good news, the present post has become obsolete ! It has now become a part of Oppai Infinity, a 250-pages long manga :)

 

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Acerbatus
Acerbatus
12 years ago

Honestly I was laughing by the end of this. I've seen so much ntr that sometimes its just kind of funny to me now.

Harco
12 years ago

Another advice: don't read chapter 1 and go straight for the bad stuff. I did it and it made me realize just how easy it is for an artist to screw with the feelings of the reader. I mean, you only need one chapter of the happy, lovey-dovey couple and all the following netorare chapters will hurt like hell. If that "lovey-dovey, happy couple" context misses, however, you will notice just how silly NTR really is, scenario-wise and in this case also art-wise. Just look at those black guys to see what I mean.

Then again, even if I had read chapter 1: I doubt it would have hurt. This drawing style does nothing for me, at least not on an emotional level.

BluMeino
12 years ago
Reply to  Harco

You establish a cute relationship and then crush it. That's why if a main love interest in a story is going to die, you don't kill her five minutes in before she's had any shred of development. I think most netorare manga and doujinshi are far too short to properly convey the right feelings and emotions, since it is a story element that can only be expressed through narrative and dialog, unlike most fetishes which are physical and visibly noticeable.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
12 years ago
Reply to  Harco

Hey, that's an interesting theory, to skip the happy sex with love part, so that the broken up sex following holds no negative emotional charge O_o

Jag90
Jag90
12 years ago
Reply to  Harco

Interesting theory indeed, why I didn't try it before.
This one is still tolerable to me compared to Pandra, another one of erect sawaru works. Completely translated by little white butterflies with lots of (tentacle & normal) rape.
It actually made me prepared as Erect Sawaru always mix a fucked up chapter and awesome chapter in his tank

dude
dude
12 years ago

thanks for the share i really liked it. tho i got a feeling many here wont.

threetwo
12 years ago

IDK why but this post actually hurt me a little inside. Maybe if you just skip the lovey-dovy opening and go straight to the bad end it would hurt less. But it isa shame to see such good art wasting on depicting NTR.

Krautnuck
Krautnuck
12 years ago

Why the fuck would you upload this sick shit?

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
12 years ago
Reply to  Krautnuck

Because it is interesting. I issued warnings, so weak souls can stay unharmed if they're reasonable.

Rez
Rez
12 years ago

Any chance Oyster's works will make it here? Some people are just too sensitive.
The translator should keep the engrish .
Anyway thanks for the upload Oliver.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
12 years ago
Reply to  Rez

No, not Oyster. Or Sanbun Kyoden. I am open minded, but there are artists that I abhor.

Unknown
Unknown
12 years ago

It'd actually have a redeeming quality if Erect Sawaru's works weren't really nasty to look at. I nearly threw up after going through the manga version of Seme Chichi.So… much… ugly foreskin… *bloats.*

BluMeino
12 years ago

Kind of weird you knowingly post a netorare manga, Oliver. And the reason why the first chapter is so sweet is to act as the contrast to the latter chapters. It's the setup for the payoff.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
12 years ago
Reply to  BluMeino

Why would it be weird ^^

Even if it's hardcore mind break or rape or netorare, it CAN be interesting, I feel.

Just like movies, are you ONLY going to watch the lovey dovey humorous romance movies ? Or sometimes more hardcore stuff ?
See what I mean ? We need emotional discharges from times to times.

alter
alter
12 years ago

As much as I despise NTR I tried to stomach with the artwork. I don't quite get the last page though. Was that just another recording or did she come back? I'd think it was the former than the latter.

Harco
12 years ago
Reply to  alter

I think that he was watching the recordings they made together, trying to convince himself that everything was all right, or something like that. To be honest, I think they both went insane. The girl from the drugs, the guy from watching all those tapes.

Like I said in an earlier post: I couldn't be bothered by it. In theory it was a pretty tragic ending, however.

VVen
VVen
12 years ago

Excellent fapping material. I treated them as separate stories and found the second one so unrealistic its laughable. Thanks Oliver

VVen
VVen
12 years ago
Reply to  VVen

Actually on careful reading(after fapping), I found the story to be less ridiculous. The premise is quite plausible, cos studying abroad and alone, there truly are many ways one can be led astray, drugs being one of them.
And that's all that I found to be meaningful, everything else are just fillers using the NTR formula, including the "emotional trauma" type bad-end.

Nalanocnir
Nalanocnir
12 years ago

I have already read this before this share, and i hate myself for not being patient enough. Ty for the description and for the share, next time ill wait till your description QQ

ten20
ten20
12 years ago

wow… i’ve really grown resistant to this kind of work. good material, thanks

hellbert
12 years ago

The "medicine" thingy in last panel made me give up on this piece. I have nothing against girls deciding their life ambition is being cum sucking cesspit. But "medicine"? I don't like that, no mindbreak for me:/

Znakemane
Znakemane
12 years ago

I've been a reader of hentai for many years now, and while i've gotten used to most of the unusual genres out there, i still get a major rage on when reading NTR. I may indeed be labeled as a weak soul, or an overtly jealous one, but i usually go completely off the top when reading stories like this one. I can appreciate the artist's attempt at creating a story the reader will connect to emotionally, but doing it with negative emotions instead of positive (in this area i usually put something like Candy House) is silly to me. So yes, while I respect Oliver for putting this up (people are different, as he knows) i also appreciate the warning he puts up when posting NTR, as it gives people like me plenty of opportunity to find hentai better suited for our tastes.
Wow, that almost made me sound old, didn't it?

somedude
somedude
12 years ago

After reading the description, I skipped this (not just the NTR, but the drug-induced mindbreak doesn't really sit well with me), but on a positive note it made me remember a 2 chapter story not shared here, that is pretty much anti-NTR (the "good guy" steals the jackass wife and they're happy together): "The same school" by Hiroshi Itaba (http://www.mediafire.com/?j6rtd1c2ryqbml7)

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
12 years ago
Reply to  somedude

I'll gladly take a look, thanks :)

somedude
somedude
12 years ago

You're welcome. It was translated by darknight, and if I remember correctly the whole tank (in japanese) is available on pant.su

Zyibis
Zyibis
12 years ago

I kinda saw it coming, After I read Chapter 1 I thought that there was a 90% chance that it would turn into a NTR and a small chance that is would stay a happy lovey dovey story/

Anonymoos
Anonymoos
12 years ago

Niggers always rape something

V.A
V.A
12 years ago

He reaps what he sows after all, cause he made his GF a pervert before she goes abroad, so she would seek some men for sex right? And recording and sending tapes have become her 'fetish' , that's what make the story so good !

Funlove
Funlove
12 years ago

I lol'd at the black guys. Why do black guys with other race girls make so many uncomfortable? Bigger dicks?

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
12 years ago
Reply to  Funlove

More simply, hidden racism, I'd say :/
Coming from a Japanese artist, xenophobic as one can be, being superfucked by black guys would be like the worst offence possible for the crushed former BF.

ironschloong
ironschloong
12 years ago

Fits to be jacking off material for kim jong il.
I read through the whole thing then shrugged and fapped to Hyoco Road instead :) Thanks for that awesome upload from 2 days ago.

Kanon
Kanon
12 years ago

disgusting hentai >_<
man i should realy learn to read the description first . and don't read the hentai only for the drawing =_="

well i guess thats what happen when anyone go to america man/woman …
huh they want to stay faithful to each other all this years!!! like hell they will
i suspected from when i heard about she will go to america i was almost sure it will be ntr
but i am an idiot when i start something i have to end it

i hope i'll forget about it realy fast this love crusher hentai ….

youmustbethenewguy
youmustbethenewguy
12 years ago

Call me crazy but after reading so many NTRs it almost seems that these writers/artists are trying to promote xenophobia within Japan. (given their extremely conservative views on love/relationships/marriage etc)

BluMeino
12 years ago

It does seem that way, and even I'd say that it does feel inherently racist. But since the Japs are racist to pretty much everyone, it comes as no surprise.

dwsdwqdq
dwsdwqdq
12 years ago

That is obvious, well more for girls. It is okay for men to get with foreign women. There are a lot of couples like that and manga and anime reflects. When a Japanese women gets with a foreigner, that is seen as a shame. Foreign men are seen as barbarians. Africans are seen as the most barbaric, animalistic. That is why you never see anything with foreign men and Japanese women.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
12 years ago
Reply to  dwsdwqdq

And that, this is true racism, so deep-rooted that the Japanese don't even notice/question it and also make the men/women distinction.

dwsdwqdq
dwsdwqdq
12 years ago

I would like to add a referendum. There are a very few manga/anime that have a Japanese girl with a foreigner guy. I could count them on my hands though(I am talking about a consensual real relationship, not rape. Foreigners are used for rape/mindbreak more often).

I remember a fighting anime where a girl was with a black guy, a hentai manga(Shared here) where an American guy got with a Japanese ninja, and a few others. Yet, there are megatons where Japanese guys are with foreign chicks. There was that one shared not too long ago that was basically a Japanese guy banging the UN. I will say they tend to favour white girls though when they use foreigners. I guess in Asia there is a white girl fetish like there is an Asian fetish in Europe and the Americas.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
12 years ago
Reply to  dwsdwqdq

Why a poll/referendum, I don't see the point ?

Anyway, don't forget the almighty Bougen Honey :D

Joe
Joe
12 years ago

Hm… I think I'm going to have to go kill this Erect Touch.

ben
ben
12 years ago

somehow i could already tell from the first chapter that it was going to be NTR… does this mean i read too much doujinshi?

Wandering Cookie
Wandering Cookie
12 years ago

So that guy finally went off the rails and spent that Christmas alone watching a video of a previous get-together with Miharu while being miserable alone IRL ? Captain Obvious I know but damn … The other option is that after a timeskip where things were magically fixed we’re treated into that scene …. Buuuuuuut ……

Besides there were Miharu’s parents if he truly wanted some way out of this hellish mess. He could have asked them for her contact info… They could have gone all together to America and try to get the cops and/or the embassy of Japan involved.

I’m almost certain that those guys were keeping the videos away from Miharu, as seen in the last chapter, and for good reason. If her rents of Tooya showed up maybe there would have been a solution …

And seriously buddy? “She’s not a business man to carry her cellphone” You bleeding imbecile. No wonder you’re stuck into such a bullshitty dead end, to the regret of all this community.

I’d like to think that those guys were finally arrested (as vaguely foreshadowed) and that somehow things would work themselves out … Judging from the artist other works he can also end things in a satisfying manner. Hopefully there’s an EX chapter in the works dealing with that. There’a way to give this story a human closure …

Sorry for the little wall.

wazzaby
wazzaby
12 years ago

no problem, that was totally great man :D

VVen
VVen
12 years ago

My thoughts exactly, if such a thing occurred IRL…and that would either totally make the headlines or be covered up…the manga ended there, with such a dramatic note, but in real life time never just stops with complete tragedy, considering her parents getting involved and with luck, justice served, and then some. Stories end, but life goes on.

Eyeshield_21
Eyeshield_21
12 years ago

i really dig this one…….. "disgustingly horrifying" A big thumbs up Oliver…

DT512
DT512
12 years ago

Man I wanna hit the mangaka in the face really, I wanna hit him :@

Devspar_Zero
Devspar_Zero
12 years ago

Read this if you feel raged after reading this NTR…

P -> Protagonist
A -> Antagonist

After knowing what happened…

P : Hello, I know you bastards are there. I have a very specific set of skills, skills that will make me a nightmare for you all. If you release Miharu now, I will not pursue you and that will be the end of it. If you don’t, I will hunt you all, and I will kill you.
A : … Good luck.

Cue Taken 2.

JoPrinz
JoPrinz
12 years ago

I wish I didn't read it in order, but I did, and I cried a little at the end.

william ero sennin
william ero sennin
11 years ago

dont know if i should read this as its a bit close to home with a gir l i fell in love with who was into open relationships -_-' but fuck it i will anyway lol carpe diem mo fo's fap fap fap this one sounds great in an emotionally painful kinda way ! sadism is this evenings theme it seems :P

people
people
11 years ago

most of people start raping women because these type of doujins.A friend of mine had a girlfriend in yamagata when he found out that she cheated on him he raped that guy,s sister and send him its video i wont say the name he is in mental hospital now still going through rehababilitation its been7 years now HE was like a brother to me.BULLSHIT please protest against dark themed ntr and if you think i am an idiot or you are an ntr lover then ignore it

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
11 years ago
Reply to  people

<img src=http://www.thefeelgooddepot.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/07/I-dont-have-a-short-temper-I-just-have-a-quick-reaction-to-bullshit.jpg>

Franly ? Bullshit.

Your case was the story of a person with a mental disease and a sick personality. Exposure to hentai mangas had no relation to that problem.

Fact : pedophilia and rape existed even before the internet existed and haven't grown in numbers since its creation.

I feel sorry for you, but you're using a personal drama to score a point in an argument, in a shockingly irrelevant – and plainly mistaken – manner.

Notaku
Notaku
10 years ago

Never posted before, but I've been coming here since like, what, 2006? Love the site, Oliver. Moar Homunculus plz :D

Anyways, yeah, this one already got the typical NTR eyeroll from me, until the "medicine" bit. And the. . . "interesting" depiction of the rapists. That's when it went beyond disturbing for me. BUT, I was warned, and it's not the first time my curiosity was horribly unrewarded in a hentai manga. I've seen worse, but I've seen MUCH better. Even when it comes to NTR.

Now here's the part where I want to feel bad for the guy and sympathize for the girl being a victim, but the calmer for me came from realizing that – based on what they said – it's safe to assume SHE went back to them after her initial rape. Why? Dunno. NTR-hentai logic perhaps. And this is assuming it was a coherent choice, not a drug induced one. But then there's the belly piercing and the [really lame] tattoo (it's like a reverse tramp stamp! lol) I'm pretty sure both of those had nothing to do with what was happening to her, but simply serve to depict her "fallen" state. Like a visual cue of "she's beyond all hope of redemption", and more to suffer for the guy. Taking a bad, negative depiction of "art imitates life" and turning it up to 12.

Call me cruel to say this, but all in all, I'd almost call him lucky if she were really THAT dense or weak enough to go back to her rapists so "happily" (again, assuming it wasn't a drugged up choice). In the end, all he has are the memories, but hopefully time heals and memory fades. Anyways, didn't mean to write a book here, but I just had that epiphany and wanted to share. Not a great way to introduce myself to Erect Sawaru's work, but I've seen worse. I'll thankfully skip the NTRs for the vanillas/funnies in the future.