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baka-man
baka-man
12 years ago

I will wait for the complete translation, before reading this. I hope that my last assumption will be not so far from the truth, and the brother gets what he deserve. Really, what a shame that the sister SPOILER failed to kill him at the end SPOILER. Sigh,…

acolyte
acolyte
12 years ago
Reply to  baka-man

okay that's one creepy spoiler.
Btw Oliver, you got spoiler tags?

baka-man
baka-man
12 years ago
Reply to  acolyte

Really sorry for that. :(

MegaHentai
12 years ago

Yuzuki N Dash is a woman? That makes "Another World" even hotter than it already was, for reasons I can't quite articulate.

baka-man
baka-man
12 years ago
Reply to  MegaHentai

Yuzuki N Dash is in fact the name of a circle. I don't know if it is leaded by a woman or not,…

vvvvv
vvvvv
12 years ago

i kinda liked it, and after seeing the faggot boyfriend in chapter 3 i kinda started rooting for the brother lol

ech
ech
12 years ago

lol that dude is a total scumbag I prefer brother overhim ;p

analu
analu
12 years ago

brother FTW

baka-man
baka-man
12 years ago

Lol, so the two guys are both pathetic as each other. but the brother is so selfish and stupid, that it would make me rage (a little) less than usual, that the third guy steals her sister from him (since I saw the complete raw version, I know that it will SPOILER not happen SPOILER). It is really a pity that with the same background, it will be possible to make a great NTR story : a caring and a gentle boyfriend who delivers the girl from the selfish brother. And in revenge, the couple will show their love for each other in order to make the brother suffer endlessly,…

Wow, I have to be really tired if i begin to imagine about the ideal NTR story. XD

ech
ech
12 years ago
Reply to  baka-man

Third guy xDDD hahaha lol and yea thats pretty damn bad if u start imagine about ntr ><

Well the brother aint that bad :D coz he loves her afterall! unlike that guy she fell in love that he used her as a cumming bucket :p without even a single word of I love you ^^

baka-man
baka-man
12 years ago
Reply to  ech

"Third guy DD hahaha lol"

Okay, it will be better for me to sleep early today. XD

"Well the brother aint that bad coz he loves her afterall! unlike that guy she fell in love that he used her as a cumming bucket without even a single word of I love you ^^"

Yeah, the "boyfriend" is the typical bastard in the hentai world. But I can't help to despise the pathetic brother who put his own and selfish desire before those of her beloved sister. I may be a naïve person, but I honestly believe that we have reached the limits of what is acceptable. That's why, i'm not so far here to wish for a NTR ending (I know it will Spoiler not be the case here Spoiler) and God knows how much I can hate this kind of stuff,…

ech
ech
12 years ago
Reply to  baka-man

ye hentai is messing with our minds I actualy dont mind brother hypnotising her at all it just feels hot :p ( sorry I guess I am messed up abit ).

acolyte
acolyte
12 years ago
Reply to  ech

Nah I agree with you – in some cases – only in cases where 'all that's well ends well', and there are a couple of hentais here like that. Because sometimes it brings the 'inner lust' of the women (but of course, as Oliver said, dumb cows are something else – that I don't agree too)

ech
ech
12 years ago
Reply to  acolyte

I agree with oliver on dumb cows though lol but I got used to it already >< , I mean look at her ( SPOILER ) she let the guy fuck her right away and she though it was her viriginity too and let him do it without protection and then screaming come inside thats terrible! but thats hentai for you lol.

General Hentai
General Hentai
12 years ago

Well, I don't see this gal as a dumb cow, at least not yet. There are 2 basic uses of hypnotism in hentai, though they can sometimes both be present: Pathetic boy/man uses hypnosis to get girl he couldn't otherwise get, going along with the all too often theme seen in a lot of hentai, from maids, to slave, to loli, of the fear of dealing with a girl/woman on equal terms. it's stuff like this that helps make sense of all those polls that rank Japanese men at the bottom when it comes to being lovers.

The other type is an excuse for the woman to experience sexuality. We also see this in a lot of hentai, including rape hentai, where the girl/woman experiences sexuality without it being her "fault" that she's become a sexual being. It's very Victorian in its mindset: Good girls don't do "that" and they have to be given an excuse to open up sexually in a way that doesn't ruin their "good girl" status.

Too soon to tell which way this is going to go.

2Hip
12 years ago

translated by; Dammon

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
12 years ago
Reply to  2Hip

Thanks !

princeheir
princeheir
12 years ago

yeah more Yuzuki N Dash :D

sans18
sans18
12 years ago

Yea, I'm actually looking forward (sort of) to reading this when it's translated.

SPOILER ALERT!!

From what I gather, this doesn't take the typical hypnosis/mind break/cumdump route. Not completely anyway. It seems the brother gets to the point where he regrets ever doing this to her. Still not a happy ending from what I gather, but it will be interesting to see a story where the main male isn't some macho man with no soul and lives "happily ever after" with his own personal cumdump. It's going to be depressing, but I'll read it when it's finished being translated.

baka-man
baka-man
12 years ago
Reply to  sans18

SPOILER ALERT !!

"It seems the brother gets to the point where he regrets ever doing this to her." > it doesn't change the fact that the brother acts like a stupid and selfish bastard during the 5/6 of the manga. And it is only when the sister discovers the whole truth, loses her mind (logic), and is about to kill him that the brother realizes how stupid he could have been. And even if the sister may have became aware of her feeling toward her brother, his act remains unforgivable. I really hope that the last picture will talk about her desire to take revenge toward her brother. And he really deserves it in my opinion,…

sans18
sans18
12 years ago
Reply to  baka-man

Yea, don't get me wrong, I wasn't sympathizing with the brother. It's just different from the typical male lead in hypnosis manga. That's all.

baka-man
baka-man
12 years ago
Reply to  sans18

Don't worry, I got it. :)

Tim
Tim
12 years ago

I personally have a hypno-fetish (or mind control with powers) *though I prefer the happier endings, or the girl just continuing like nothing happened **Can't remember one of the stories I really liked that I read a long time ago, and it was a 200+ page story. And … I forget where I was going with this… Anywho I am siding with the brother of the two, firstly because of wincest, secondly because he is trying to stop *poorly* but his obsession plus a VERY easy and convenient way to deal with it is simply too tempting for him… the 'boyfriend' will just fuck her over.

NilP
NilP
12 years ago

First of all, thank you, the great master of hentairules.net, for sharing this. :)

Second of all, !!! SPOILER ALERT !!! !!! SPOILER ALERT !!! !!! SPOILER ALERT !!!
http://h.stack-style.org/Magazine/2011-09-10-01%E

According to my broken Japanese (plus bing&google translation), this page says there are totally 5 chapters. Basically, after chapter 3, the hypnosis was extremely effective, and the onee-san became obsessed with her little brother — to a point where she concludes "because the sampei was interfering [taking out a knife]"… Eventually, the little brother gets really depressed and hates himself because he destroyed what/who matters the most to him in the world — his sweet sister is now gone and broken; what's left is merely the memory of the good old time.

NilP
NilP
12 years ago
Reply to  NilP

Third of all, just like what's said on 4chan — "Fall in love and you lose." In this case I lost :( I was looking for fap material but unfortunately identified with the little brother — getting friend-zone'd by the perfect girl you have a crush on just hurts, a lot.

If I were in the little brother's position, I'd take advantage of the situation too, but in a much more subtle way. There is got to be another way to use hypnosis as an edge to escape the friend-zone. Definitely no rape — I may be a pervert but I am not a monster :D

Today's lesson: If you must identify with some character in hentai ACG, go with Kisaku (鬼作). That way you will have a great fap session plus lots of laughter. ;)

baka-man
baka-man
12 years ago
Reply to  NilP

Just to let you know that you can find the complet raw version with this link :
http://www.bibliotecahentai.net/foro/mangas/12238

"his sweet sister is now gone and broken; what's left is merely the memory of the good old time. "

SPOILER ALERT

Since i don't speak japanese at all, i can only make assumtion, but i'm not sure that the sister losed her mind completely. Before she fainted after her brother knocked her out, it might have been her who remembered about the good old time. Perhaps, she became aware of her feelings at this moment. However, it doesn't explain what has happened at the last page,..

NilP
NilP
12 years ago
Reply to  baka-man

Thank you very much!

!!! SPOILER ALERT !!! — more broken translations :)

* Contrary to my previous statement, there are actually 6 chapters instead of 5.
* Ch 4: The onee-san was hypnotized so she believes her wrists are tied to her ankles and cannot move. Then it's the usual hentai rape

– onee-san said: ok let's get over with it but promise this is the last time (which implies this time the hypnosis did not include turning her lust-mode on.)
– Little brother: I am gonna make you beg for it FTW!!

In the end, onee-san gave in and started enjoying it. The whole thing went too well for the little brother and he said "Nee-chan is my thing (nee-chan belongs to me)"; and the onee-san, while still hypnotized, replied "(yes,) nee-chan is yours"

NilP
NilP
12 years ago

!!! SPOILER ALERT !!! — more broken translations

Ch 5 — the whole chapter can be read independently from all other chapters. It's almost like any ordinary sweet-love hentai wincest fap material; except that, on the last page, the onee-san said "no one can ever interfere this [relationship of mine with my little brother]" This hints that onee-san is now clinically obsessed about her brother.

Ch 6 — onee-san's obsession made her mad, rage-comic FFFFUUUUU style. At a point she decided to kill her boyfriend (sempai) so she can erase him from her head (read: mind). When her little brother tried to stop her from killing sempai, she turned against the little brother (because the little brother wanted to stop her from getting rid of what could have come between her and the little brother) The she realized none of these makes sense, and then cried for help. The little brother headbutted her and gave the final hypnosis: please return to how you originally were.

NilP
NilP
12 years ago

Basically the little brother decided to end it up after seeing how much (emotional) pain he has caused his nee-chan. So he gave the last hypnosis: "I am sorry. It is fine even if you see me as a brother. It is fine even if you are falling in love with sempai. Therefore. As my wish, please return to how you originally were."

Then the onee-san (who just got headbutt'ed) started trying to make sense of what the little brother just said — especially: why she would like the sempai?

"The first time I meet the sempai was when I started going to high school."
"Seeing soccer club practicing, sempai's play was dreamy (read: awesome)"
"Sempai's fan, a girl, "沢山" (her name)"
"I guess, that type of girl is the type of girl I think the sempai would like"
"so to speak, I know nothing about sempai …"

My interpretation is that in her current state of mind, she has no feeling towards the sempai. In other words, she may have returned to how she *original* were — even before she had a crush on the sempai.

NilP
NilP
12 years ago
Reply to  NilP

(umm… not sure why, but the system said my previous comment (about ch.5 and the first half of ch.6) must be first approved by the site admin…)

I could not understand the onee-san's exact wording on ch.6 page 39, but based on the little brother's reaction, this is my *guestimation*

– the next day, nee-chan returned the way she was
"it's nice your room has a TV"
"about the sempai I mentioned, of course, we did not hit it off"
"I, I am a soccer-baka (I only know about soccer)"
"[therefore, not hitting it off with] a boyfriend makes sense"

Then,

"remember when we were little, we saw a TV show about hyposis?"
"do you think it really works?"

NilP
NilP
12 years ago
Reply to  NilP

Then she turned around,
"let's try it [hyposis] on you" (Notice her eyes; those are the eyes of an obsessed predator. Nature you scary!)

Little brother: "did she *really* returned to how she originall was?"

Onee-san: ah, let me borrow this lighter

Little brother: "does she remember?"

Onee-san: okay, look at the flame

Little brother: "I am confused…"

Onee-san: when I count to three, you will fall asleep

Little brother: "I cannot resist nee-chan's words…"

Onee-san: 1…2…

Onee-san: 3!

Little brother: "just like that, my conscious flew away… [black out]"

NilP
NilP
12 years ago
Reply to  NilP

To summarize:

* my initial guestimations (based on how I read http://h.stack-style.org/ ) were not entirely accurate. Thanks to baka-man for the rest of the chapters (4, 5, 6); it really helped clarify things up.

* The Japanese language is very interesting. However, it's really difficult to translate while maintaining its subtelty. :|

* Congratulations to all of those who identified with the little brother like I did — this story has a *happy* ending, in a little creepy, twisted, almost dark, way. <3 (/cue CLOSE ENOUGH meme)

The great master of hentairules.net also kindly shares another little-bro-onee-san hypnosis story, the first chapter of this http://www.hentairules.net/2010/09/29/chijou-no-h… .

baka-man
baka-man
12 years ago

WOW, THANK YOU VERY MUCH for your translation. As I can see, the little brother is (a very little) less pathetic than I thought (Althought her behaviour remains unforgivable of course^^). Afterwards, we can only make assumptions about why the sister has decided to use hypnotism on her brother. And unfortunately, she really seems to have fallen in love with her brother. There is no place here for revenge. :(

NilP
NilP
12 years ago
Reply to  baka-man

No problem :) I just had to see where the story was going. The little brother certainly man'ed up a little to repent. The rape would definitely be unforgivable in real life, but in the hentai world, a parallel universe where orgasim is guaranteed and STD & unwanted-pregency is not a concern, I will let my moral standards relax a little :D

This is my first time reading this series. It appears that ch.1 was released in November 2010 and ch.6 (the final chapter) was released just last month (October 2011). I am very, very happy that I get to read all 6 chapters at once without having to wait for a whole year. On the other hand, it is quite possible for this story to continue to expand (by releasing additional chapters such as "chapter 0" or "chapter 5.5"). So, there is *always* room for dessert ;)

Blargarg
Blargarg
12 years ago

Regarding Yuzuki's identity, I think it goes like this: her real name is Yuzuki Natane, her pen name is Yuzuki N Dash, and her circle name is Lv.X+. As for her being a woman, that info seems to come from her Wikipedia article and an interview it links to.
http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%9F%9A%E6%9C%A8N&amp;… http://ero.manga-studies.com/?p=article&bid=6

Blargarg
Blargarg
12 years ago

http://h.stack-style.org/Comic/4887744145/%E3%80%

Looks like the tank is out now, and includes one of her other Mujin stories (unrelated to Sister Control, not a downer story).

egg
egg
12 years ago

All six chapters of this storyline are now translated. See: http://exhentai.org/g/459807/6861732797/

qz89
qz89
11 years ago

i wanr ch4-8…can i?

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
11 years ago
Reply to  qz89

Sorry, too time-consuming :(