Tachibana San’s Circumstances With A Man (“Tachibana-san-chi no Dansei Jijou Jo”) [English, 158 pictures], by MTSP

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By Oliver (AKA the Admin) on 223 comments
No, seriously, what a bitch-ass ending, it killed my boner

Hooo, these wonderful, delicious, sweet curves ! This happy sex with soon love ! These sweet shades, perfectly outlining the body curves !


Up until page 56.
You can safely read as far as that and fully enjoy it to your heart, and then you might stop here and happily imagine a cliché happy ending.

You see, the rest is a fucken half-mindbreak story, with a fucked up ending.
Mind you : this did NOT end up in netorare, since netorare implies the male hero is having his feelings crushed, okay ? But instead, it ended in a half-baked lame-ass poor tasteless ending.
Let’s make a comparison, let’s imagine : when, after lots of ceremony, you’re served Dom Perignon, you expect it to taste better than sour orange juice, right ? The ending was sour like that, and we weren’t served what was promised. We weren’t served poison either, just sour juice that lost all flavour and is a little sickening.

… And you know what ? In hindsight, I must salute the artist, MTSP, for his brilliant art of trolling. Rarely have we, the readers, been betrayed so violently before ! It’s almost Game Of Thrones level.

This was done was by Touma and Raikoh from Doujin-Moe.
By MTSP, with equally good drawings but with a better scenario and happier sex, I’m also sharing a Macross hentai doujin :) On the opposite, behind the doujin circle MTSP there is the artist Jin, from whom I’m sharing Educating A New Wife, a straight facepalm material. And then, rather on the half-assed side of things, there’s also a 6-works pack.

     

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ken878
ken878
12 years ago

Yeah 56 and on killed it for me im not sure to give it a 5 star or a 1 star. I like the art the the first half but the rest makes me want to……gahhhhhhh

Brand
Brand
12 years ago

sorry, you might hate me for it, it's only my opinion, so please don't bother reading this.

For me it's NTR, something is definitely being stolen from the MC, his fuck buddies (so to speak),
even though he didn't "claim" them, it's all about the feeling of losing someone precious.
For me, Netorare is all about the feeling of loss and the depression to not being able to do anything about it.

Do not reply to this, i know this might be wrong, but i can at least live with that explanation.

T-Bag
T-Bag
12 years ago
Reply to  Brand

I agree with you competely. This leaves the same bad taste in my mouth as does NTR.

MGJSakazaki
MGJSakazaki
10 years ago
Reply to  T-Bag

I agree with you cuz you agree with him.

Kabuto
Kabuto
12 years ago

It will turn into NTR once he watches tht DVD tht he got from the store. But yea this was a pretty fucked up story since they always got pregnant at the end……

ken878
ken878
12 years ago

Did they get pregnant at the end? im not sure and i dont want to go back and look at it. It will just remind me of that feeling that i hate.

Besbin
Besbin
12 years ago
Reply to  ken878

The story highly hinted that they all did…. The second chapter is a fucking huge boner killer. Too bad I had read this shit before Oliver come and warn everybody. Now I need to try and overdose myself with some brain cells killer and hope I will forget all of this stuff tomorrow.

Kabuto
Kabuto
12 years ago
Reply to  Besbin

they did get pregnant cuz the MC was like they won the lottery or something, meaning the female characters found out tht they were pregnant

Zazel
Zazel
11 years ago
Reply to  ken878

they did get pregnant… the last page (DAMN IT!!!!!!!! I read this hentai last FREAKIN WEEKS ago and the last page still keep replying in my FucKInG brain) the MC heard those three say to each other "Do you get it?", that is a reference whether their period came or not…. and all 3 did not have their period which meansss………………… somebody please help me give suggestion how to remove this from my brain…… it drive me crazy

willy191
willy191
12 years ago

It is a serious waste of art….it gives a very bad taste after that page…..

ken878
ken878
12 years ago

Can anyone recommand a good H-manga that can help me get this nasty taste out of my mouth and forget about this?

Garuda
Garuda
12 years ago
Reply to  ken878

Maybe the Boin Boin Teacher/Onsen series?

Judo
Judo
12 years ago
Reply to  Garuda

Thank you for that recommendation *even though it wasn't me who asked*.

Kabuto
Kabuto
12 years ago
Reply to  ken878

u can read some of oliver's post from yesterday if you haven't already

aredale79
aredale79
12 years ago
Reply to  ken878

Maybe watching some cats videos/pictures might help. I usually read some Yuri mangas to get my feel good factor back into my system.

Eternity
Eternity
12 years ago

Damn ya i just skim through it cause i don't wanna read it but damn just a waste of good art. Art style really fits me but i hate the story lol

Kabuto
Kabuto
12 years ago
Reply to  Eternity

me too i skimmed it too much words in between

Besbin
Besbin
12 years ago

NTR with good art style like Nagare Ippon alway leave a bad taste in my mouth. Especially when the author go out of their way to establish the background for the relationship between the hero and heroine e.g. REC.

BTW there is a author notes at the end of the 2nd chapter. I wonder what is he talking about. I am really interested in knowing what authors think when day create such soul crushing story.

aredale79
aredale79
12 years ago
Reply to  Besbin

I wish the author have a better ending than this.

r@ndom
r@ndom
12 years ago
Reply to  Besbin

from what little japanese that i could understand, it seems like he plans on writing a threesome but when ideas for the chapter were to include MILF, sis, big boobs and massage therapists… well…. this is the story u get..
However he feels that the transition may not be done as well as he has hoped as he feels there might be many missing links. Oh… and initially he planned on drawing a 20pg story on what they did in the manor but as he had a tight schedule, he dropped the idea.
He writes that he wants to go into gaming industry (im guessing visual novels) but he won't drop the idea of leaving the H-manga industry and hopes to create more interesting scenario.

I didn't translate everything.. juz stuff that i can understand and stuff that i think are relevant to ur curiosity. In case u can't understand a shit tt im saying.. sorry.. im not a native speaker of English.

iceacolyte
iceacolyte
12 years ago
Reply to  Besbin

Thanks for the explanation. I just realized why I can stand some groupsex hentai.
Usually it's when there's no strong relationship for the MCs, or for doujins, I don't know anything about the main story…

Kabuto
Kabuto
12 years ago

To be honest tho, I feel that the MC will go emo even when the guys that did that got arrested and shit.

Judo
Judo
12 years ago

…..the ending RUINED EVERYTHING!!!!
I love the guys artstyle…..but the ending tarnished such talent.

Thanks for the share anyway ^_^………T.T

midnight barber
midnight barber
12 years ago

At least he will find out what sluts they are before he waste his life on them.

iceacolyte
iceacolyte
12 years ago

Was thinking of thumbing up, but.. Even better if he never knew them T_T
But dang.. it's hentai world..

MGJSakazaki
MGJSakazaki
10 years ago
Reply to  iceacolyte

YEAH T-T

Bil
Bil
12 years ago

Am I the only one in the west coast US unable to use Turbobit and Letitbit? I mean, I just ended up D/ling this from depositfiles, but I feel like this might be my provider and not the actual file sharing websites.

iceacolyte
iceacolyte
12 years ago
Reply to  Bil

All of US. Blocked per IP address.

Garuda
Garuda
12 years ago

For me the problem was in three parts. The first was the weakness of the ending. We're just told that they got arrested and some hints about pregnancy. We don't see the arrest, any kind of vengeance or any conclusion at all. The second was the lack of a detailed reaction from the girls and mother at the end. Maybe it had to be done to leave the pregnancy thing at implications but it seemed to be cut off. Lastly the lack of anything with the waitress. She just apparently casually drugs people. Not bringing her into the sex (with the family or the boy) felt wasted.

In its defense the first two problems can be at least somewhat fixed if there's a third part. I will say that the NTR itself did make me bitter, but NTR always does that and it doesn't mean that it's weak so much as not my type (If you're wondering, I read it to continue from the first story and for the art).

Also, this isn't the fault of the writer or the scanner but on my computer the text was slightly too small to read, especially as the sex started and there was a ton of dialog. Having to manually increase the size of every single page gets irritating and soured me more.

widowchaser
widowchaser
12 years ago

Thanks Oliver, and to all the posters here… I know when I've been warned… and I have since moved on…

GuyFarting
GuyFarting
12 years ago
Reply to  widowchaser

Ya, thanks from me too. Hate this mind break, gut wrenching type shit. So im avoiding this one like a plague.

Zazel
Zazel
11 years ago
Reply to  widowchaser

good for you…. when i read the warning my curiosity get the best of me and now i'm really regret not listening the warning ToT

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
11 years ago
Reply to  Zazel

Yeah, why the hell am I making all these efforts if it DRIVES UNWILLING PERSONS into doing precisely what I wanted them against :D

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
11 years ago
Reply to  Zazel

warned, not wanted, sorry

KIRA
KIRA
11 years ago

for mr it was 1 of the best Doujin but its not the bets cuze of the ending but this1 made me sooooo damn HORNYYY i cant stop cuming i read 5 or 6 pages and i am cuming damn this 1 is god only the ENDYNG was a turn off and it was wen i stopt cuming from me yu get 1000 START

Kabuto
Kabuto
12 years ago

Look on the bright side, guys that posted here will probably never treat a like girl like that in real life. I know I won't

princeheir
princeheir
12 years ago

well thanks for the share as always :)

Anon-Visitor
Anon-Visitor
12 years ago

I regret not listening to Oliver's warning and read through the whole thing. This literally made me feel like vomiting. For me, straight up NTR is one thing. I mean even though the feelings of the main male character would be utterly crushed, at least he knows what kind of woman/women he was dealing with and can move on to find someone better. This kind of open ended NTR is definitely the worst kind of NTR that exists. The MC has no idea that this has happened and will soon find out about it in the worst possible fashion. As the women of this genre goes, they will probably leave him for the bastards that drugged them. The possibility of imagining a happy ending is almost non-existent and leaves an even worse aftertaste since the mangaka took the time and effort to establish a tragic yet heart warming back story, only to have it completely destroyed in the matter of a single night. Maybe some will like this kind of material, but to me, this is the absolute WORST way to end even a NTR manga.

I'm still trying to wash away the aftertaste of this manga and have learned my lesson to read the description before actually reading the manga.

aredale79
aredale79
12 years ago

Meh normally I don't have any problem with NTR. I do get angry after reading them, but normally the horrible aftertaste gone after a few minutes. But not this. This is quite heavy even for MTSP's NTR standards. Also not a good idea to read this if you're on high caffeine consumption. I need to detox my system for a few days lol. Anyway thanks for the share. I was hoping this to be a normal/vanilla work from MTSP (when it first came out) but I was proved wrong.

bonez
bonez
12 years ago

but from the dialogue it sounded like they were going to abort it, as in look for a safe place

Zazel
Zazel
11 years ago
Reply to  bonez

i hope the author will make a continuation of this manga….. i want to know what will happen next after they abort it… (and damn it… the possibility for this kind of shit to happen in real life is freaking high)

javtumblr
javtumblr
12 years ago

so is this NTR?
whatever i like it !

Lapan
Lapan
12 years ago

Reading just Vanilla Stories all day would be boring to me. It's just a fantasy anyways, so NTR or bad endings don't bother me.

Then again, that's maybe why i'm in LWB :P

Duderino
Duderino
12 years ago

Hate NTR.

So much.

It's even worse when the art is amazing like this, WHO BECOMES AROUSED BY THIS

jinzo_64
jinzo_64
12 years ago

I really hate NTR!

When i read a Hentai Manga i want to feel excited or almost satisfied with the lecture, but with the NTR stories I feel like an idiot because the females characters just want a cock, meanwhile the male protagonist feel like a shit.

In a Hentai manga you allways want to be the hero, but in NTR the male character it´s just a poor bastard.

jinzo_64
jinzo_64
12 years ago

The NTR stories are the story of my life…

Yes I know… Im a forever alone TTwTT

fanza
fanza
12 years ago

this manga is NTR

but i think in the last page explain about three of them trying to hide something….i guess that thing is AV they make with that bastard…and MC found it..

damn great artist with bad ending…

greg
greg
12 years ago

look on the bright side…they only did it once…not like nagare ippon ….

still NTR really fucked up…i don.t understand why japanese like that stuff

Newb
Newb
12 years ago

This isn't as bad as othe NTR i seen cause at least they were free in the end and the guys that rape them got arrested. I think What made most of us rage was how good the back bone of the story was at the beining. It was romantic and a lil funny for a hentaia nd we all enjoyed but got slammed by the rape. But again like is said at least they were free and went back to him unlike a lot of the other NTR i read where they stay a sex slave.

xRoMaRiOxRus
xRoMaRiOxRus
12 years ago

OMFG this is exactly what I like in hentai manga. Manga about cheating and treason is the best. Second ch. is masterpiece. Who doesn’t know The most of arts of this actor is about cheating.

George XIII
George XIII
12 years ago

I have so many mixed feelings about this manga. It starts out with a very happy harem almost wincest kind of story kind of like mozaiku x sanshimai that works so well and then takes a strange turn to NTR. I don't mind NTR when I have no attachment to the hero and heroines of the story but this manga was so disenchanting, you simply do not put the two in the same story because it makes the audience feel stupid and the characters worthless.

blackmoor91
blackmoor91
12 years ago

At the start i thought : "One of the best stories i have read the last weeks". But the second half was a bit messed up in my opinion. It explains why all of them have feelings for the guy and then the story just changes into "mindbreak". Too bad that this story was wasted at the end. The start would be a 5 Star Story but with the end i couldn´t give it only 1 Star. Hardly wasted talent if you ask me :/

Seishiro Haga
Seishiro Haga
12 years ago

Until page 56? That's like 100 pages left…

ret
ret
12 years ago

sorry guys…..maybe you haye this manga….
but I really love this hehehe…..
the art of MTSP is always the best for me….the amazing art makes up for the story….
so…..i hope there will be more of MTSP works….

Numinor
Numinor
12 years ago

The real NTR starts in my opinion at page 153 last panel "the things we did and the things we said in that place", that means in the next extra which is planed for this summer. I think her phrase implice the typical NTR like complaining about Yuus dick and how great the dicks and the sex with this dudes is. And probably Yuu will see this video (they filmed that for sure too). And in the case in the mansion really happend the typical NTR stuff, then I think they deserved to get pregnant by this dudes (and perhaps the abortion fails/ can't be done and they get unfertile/ bear the children) and Yuu leaves them alone, goes back to his old house (when his gramps dies it would be his own) become a fine man with a good job (and when hes still growing now perhaps he gets a fine dick too and a great technique, which beats the ones of the douchbags), he finds a fine woman as girlfriend and wife, founds a happy and lovely family with a lots of kids. And the Tachibanas have to see this all (they are neighbors) and will regret the night where they did this stuff on their own (the possible extra chapter) bitterly.

T-Bag
T-Bag
12 years ago
Reply to  Numinor

If I ever find the time and talent to continue the story, I will continue it just as you have suggested.

Zazel
Zazel
11 years ago
Reply to  T-Bag

really… you want to follow that route??…. i mean the girl were drugged and all so it is understandable (though heartbreaking)….. a drugged person is really difficult to make their own decision… couldn't you continued it by giving the tachibana and the MC a happy ending (hopefully they were together… just putting this up as a suggestion though

MGJ Sakazaki
MGJ Sakazaki
10 years ago
Reply to  Zazel

But man, after the drugs the girl keep sex with them. Did you get it?

DreyG.Zero
DreyG.Zero
12 years ago

I seriously need to read description from now on, the last mind break part, was endurable, to say the least but not my type of ending. Damn, why do I not do what I'm supposed to. The art was too good, to really mind the description.LOL

Sukiyaki
Sukiyaki
12 years ago

After reading the comments, now I can't make up my mind if I should download this one. Hahaha

ret
ret
12 years ago
Reply to  Sukiyaki

give it a try….It is one of the most beautiful art….the girls are wonderfull…

Oni
Oni
12 years ago
Reply to  Sukiyaki

just stop at page 56 like it's recommended or just download the fisrt part from doujin-moe

T-Bag
T-Bag
12 years ago
Reply to  Sukiyaki

Download it. The art is beautiful. Just be prepared after page 56. Don't read it if you have a weak heart…as I once did.

iceacolyte
iceacolyte
12 years ago
Reply to  Sukiyaki

Oh apparently I'm not the only one feeling like that..

Zazel
Zazel
11 years ago
Reply to  Sukiyaki

if you are the kind of guy who can hold their curiosity and stop at page 56… then download it….. if not, you better not download (or you can download it, extract, delete the zip file, delete page 57 and above, then run Ccleaner and use Ccleaner disc wipe function..

Khrynia
Khrynia
12 years ago

God damn . . .. i didn't thought the after effect was this bad!!
This one give worse after effect than Nagare Ippon works . . . damn

Zolen
Zolen
12 years ago

I think you should warn about PREGNANT!
If they didn't pregnant may be MC will forgive them.
I'm a fan of this artist but I hate bad ending with girl get pregnant. Damn

Thank you Oliver.

mosaic
mosaic
12 years ago

it's one thing to read something bad turns to worst but it's definitely sux when it feels like they've built a sweet vanilla cake in front of you then smash it as they add the cherry on top. XD

hendra_takeda
hendra_takeda
12 years ago

i really …. really hate this story(very shameful)
i don't understand why all of people (men) like NTR
always NTR again
the winner(hero) always woman and bad guy
the loser always good guy
men today have no pride, self-esteem and shame(very loser)
no download …. no read …. no…no…no….no(sorry)

MGJSakazaki
MGJSakazaki
10 years ago
Reply to  hendra_takeda

I think the same ^^ NTR is only shxt!

HimeKami
HimeKami
12 years ago

Because the first half is very heart warming that make the second half does TERRIBLE TERRIBLE damage to the reader.

Even they abort the pregnant, the MC still know about them trough the video. So, this is completely a NTR.

And because the first half draw you into the character so much, you will feel a very strong emotion from the turning point of the story.

Normally I can bear a NTR thing to some point . But this manga is a REAL mind blower.
So, if you not a hardcore type of NTR, you should avoid it at all cost. No matter how good the art it is.

swrdstriker
swrdstriker
12 years ago

Normally I just lurk around without commenting, and normally when you say NTR and mindbreak be warned, I ignore it and read anyways, cause lets face it, they most of the time have amazing art >>. This………this was just bad. I really hope that the mangka decides to atleast come back to this and fix it. But since I'm posting for the first time, might as well say keep up the good work with the post :D

Quartermaster
Quartermaster
12 years ago

THE ONE TIME THAT I DONT READ OLIVERS DESCRIPTION!!! Fuck, Man. With the set up, I was expecting that stupid fucking kid to come stumbling in and get the shit beat out of him to save the women, not this Neto shit…

Shit like that makes me feel like I lost a sliver of my soul…

Boko
Boko
12 years ago

Hmmm, for my part, considering Oliver's warning, I'm left with a pretty good impression, only slightly subdued by what comes after the… good part? What I mean to say is that, after reading the warning and getting the hints of what was about to happen ("OH WE'RE SO GOING TO DO THEM !!"), I just skipped through everything in 10secs or so (probably more like 5), and read the last 2 pages or so to see the conclusion… No harm done, it deserves a 4 at least ! :)

Kabuto
Kabuto
12 years ago
Reply to  Boko

Like for me, even from the beginning there were too much words for my taste so i pretty much just skimmed through the entire thing. I did read Oliver's warning but it wasn't that much of an impact anyways.

IcyRage
IcyRage
12 years ago

Gotta admire that the story is somewhat original and much more complex than the usual NTR storyline. I mean what can the MC do when he finds out? and then the pranacies complicate things. And of course, the girls went back to him, but their feelings may have changed. And the MC cant just get up and leave because he does feel inddepted to the family for taking him in. Sometimes, I wished I had "read" the untranslated version.

Thanks for the warning, but the art was just too tempting.

T-Bag
T-Bag
12 years ago

Thank you Oliver for another great post. I've been following your website since its birth. At first when you uploaded things such as these (e.g. Educating a New Wife), I was utterly disgusted and felt sick for days after fapping to such material.

But now…now I'm happy to say that I too have turned into a monster. It has become a habit of me to seek out sick works such as this one. Your hentai has made be less human yet much stronger. Thank you Oliver. Thank you.

P.S. I'm vanilla-phile at heart so I'm glad you keep it mostly clean! ^^

iceacolyte
iceacolyte
12 years ago
Reply to  T-Bag

I hope I don't turn too less human..
But once in a while I read Alice no Takarabako even though I really hated it at start.
So I know I'm changing too. Dangit.

T-Bag
T-Bag
12 years ago

Yes, you build endurance eventually >:)

Eternity
Eternity
12 years ago

Yo i love your description…This is why i love your site compare to others. Good to get some warning before i read lol. I'm having a hard time dealing with ntr or mindbreak etc altho i can deal with those a lot better then before hehe

Numinor
Numinor
12 years ago

Perhaps somebody can translate from his blog http://karen.saiin.net/~mitosupa/ this entry 2012年02月04日(土)22:56 particularly the stuff to the Tachibanas

Tatanka
Tatanka
12 years ago

i think they are not pregnat , they discuss where to hide the movie ^^

topfpflanze
topfpflanze
12 years ago

and that's why I love hentairules.net Oliver's nice enough to go out of his way to write down his own opinions and feelings about his shares and to give out warnings like these

thanks Oliver