Deatte Harem [English], by Ominaeshi (aka Shimapan aka Tachibana Omina)
(60 votes, average: 4.47 out of 5)
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Update ! : This is now available as part of a compilation of the tank, available here!
And that’s not even the best part! Now it as an actual translation!
This was awesome, I hope someone can find and translate the second chapter.
What? There´s a second chapter? We need it NOW XD
Another from Shim-Pan! While I'm hoping for another DOA doujin(very rare!). This is a welcome addition as well.
You are correct Oliver, Ominaeshi is the artist, and Shima-Pan is the name of his drawing circle. Thanks to Cgrascal for finding and translating this, and thanks Oliver for sharing.
I am very disappoint about this work. Most of this chapter can be considered good, highly fappable quality. If not for one thing has been nagging me since the introduction: there is a housewife in it, and by the end, you can considered her husband has been NTR-ed. I have deep hatred for NTR genre, and i make it clear : no guy should deserve to have this happened to him. Normally we see from both victim and perpetrator, this time, the victim was omitted to just a phone call and a mention, but i have to ask: is that make it any less bad ? No, if anything, it just make thing worse. NTR favor wing peoples always said we should look from the perpetrator's and not from the victim's POV, and us normal people who still sane enough reply with a SCREW YOU answer. But this time, the author has conveniently help you do that part, put you in the perpetrator's seat and remove the victim, so now can you say "we don't see him so its okay ?" Fuck NO ! Normally i can tolerate dj and H mangas to a certain point, but once they make in-chapter reference to another person lost his partner to another guy's male part, that makes it a clear NTR situation. I have read the 2 recent DOA Harem and i archived it myself too, but this one is a let down.
tl;dr ver: I delete this with extreme prejudge for it's support on NTR despise its fap quality
Blah republic scum! Long live the NTR Empire! Aside from that this was really good fapping material.
@Dogalek: While it may seem a bit bad, I wouldn’t call it NTR. The wife went onto a dating site, went to meet the guy, and was also VERY aggressive during the entire thing. She was the first to try taking the guy off, the first to propose sex, and the first to actually HAVE sex. From what I gather, it’s possible that the wife wasn’t getting laid by her husband at home, and whenever that happens (and the husband is actually at HOME) then it is the husband’s fault through and through.
Another reason I wouldn’t call it NTR is due to the simple fact that the main character of this had no malice whatsoever. He probably hadn’t even thought he would get sex, much less an all-night foursome with three incredibly hot and varied women. He’s likely not thinking, “This is so hot, stealing a married woman is awesome!” It’s far more likely that his brain is going, “So. Much. Pleasure.” and not worrying about any details.
So in short, it may be cheating, but it’s not NTR, due to the fact that the woman here is the aggressor, and the fact that the male isn’t doing it out of malice or with the intention to “steal” her.
Behold the wonder of Japan, Oliver's glossary reveal they already have word for that kind of cheating, Netori, thats it. Even on your assumption (the husband did something wrong, like not pleasure his wife enough), this is cheating, or netori, and since we see no info on the husband's account whether he at fault or not, i say it border on NTR. The woman's aggressive might just an indicator of her sluttiness, circling dating site, have sex with guy first met while she already married.
And about the male, doing it intentionally or not doesn't matter, in a soccer match, do you think the lost team care if their lost score is intentional or just accidental ? If anything, it being lucky shot just make it even worse because it doesn't matter if other side good enough to deserve it, they just lucky and all. And here we talking about something on much more personal ,emotional level. Your good explanation save him the sin of first night, but when the 2nd time come, he has no excuse anymore, though that not something we likely will see anyway. In short, Netori tag are well deserved, and it would very easy to put NTR tag in as well. Both parties's intentional be damned, the deed is what matter.
actually i was thinking the author is trying to introduce a scenario which includes 3 types of women, a mother (wife in this case), an elder sis (the OL) and a younger sis (the student)..
I guess he tried to go from a usual family incest route to a non-incest one (although he can do a adopted son scenerio but i guess he wanted something diff?)
Hope this can make u feel better.
If the phone call the wife made to the poor bastard husband didn't tip him that something was wrong, then her staying out all night should be enough of a clue. And we don't know that the poor bastard husband isn't doing her. Or that it's even his fault. That's just rationalizing why it might be all right for her to cheat. She could just as easily be a bit of a nympho slut, dishonest on a regular basis, and has gotten away with it in the past. So, "in short" it obviously IS cheating, and well, shit, that's bad enough! ( for me anyway).