Otomedori [English, 202 pictures], by Carn

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By oliver_the_admin on 57 comments
Great art, fuck yeah ! :D And fuck the scenario -_-

Wheee, a COMPLETE and UNCENSORED hentai manga, yay !

But, eeeew, the scenario will displease a good number of you, out there, on the other side of the internet tubes…

The first story arc (until page 64) is super hardcore. Yandere mind break netorare rape, yeeeeesh. The rest is an alternation (hoping it IS an English word, haha) of vanilla and netorare/mindbreak. The last 11 pages of the manga, starting at page 190, are back into the super hardcore netorare, just to warn the netorare haters to stop reading before the manga ends :o

Unfortunately, or fortunately, despite the slightly rotten scenarii, the drawings are AMAZING, uncensored to boot, deliciously detailed and hardcore, the girls usually take nice positions, they have great faces… So, even with the hard netorare background, I think I’ll still recommend this manga to everyone (the weakest souls will just have to skip the first story arc and the last 11 pages)…
This manga has been translated by Saha, thanks a lot for all the work ! :)

Hey, remember to check the list of ALL of Carn’s works on Hentairules!
(almost up-to-date list, I rely on a kind helper, HurpDurp ;) )

Open the Complete Pictures Gallery (or the backup gallery)

Here comes the zip link! Help yourselves! ^^
(145 MB, 202 pictures, English)

Or you can also use the Alternative :
Zip Mirror #1 – or – Zip Mirror #3

And if 145 MB is too much for you, I remembered to offer you a recompressed version, only 74 MB ;)
MirrorMirror – Mirror – Mirror

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jeb
jeb
12 years ago

Alternation is an English word, but it doesn't mean what you're trying to say, just say it alternates between the two.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
12 years ago
Reply to  jeb

So I'd have to make a sentence with a conjugated verb, no choice ? There is no NOUN for "the fact this is alternating between two statuses" ?

zerol
zerol
12 years ago

fluctuation is the word you are looking for

Anoynomous
Anoynomous
12 years ago

Yeah this one is pretty bad. Reader beware.

katsu
katsu
12 years ago

woah!!! quality is a 12/10! nice find Oliver XD

ladosenta
ladosenta
12 years ago

SUCK, this is kinda NIGHTMARE< i have terrible mixed feeling O.o

Anon
Anon
12 years ago
Reply to  ladosenta

that feeling is call "NTR"

Harco
Harco
12 years ago

Hardcore netorare indeed, although the sheer stupidity of the characters and the complete absence of logic work as a pretty solid "rage retardant" for me these days. Sadly (or luckily, depending on how you feel about netorare) this work seems to have both in abundance. In the end, it's basically just the same generic formula as always, only poured into a slightly different mold than the last NTR manga. I just can't get myself to care anymore and that's a pretty bad thing for a genre that's supposed to trigger some fierce emotions.

As for the art… please don't get mad at me, but I never understood why people are so psyched about Carn's works. I mean, it's nowhere near bad, but I won't call it amazing either. But maybe it just ain't my style.

baka-man
baka-man
12 years ago
Reply to  Harco

It's true that the NTR stories becomes more and more plain lately, but I have to admit one fact fom Carn : To make me hate here the yandere girl, even more than the usual hentai bastard guys, it is still a good performance. Well it's strange to say that from a guy who hates NTR more than anything else,…

Ntr lover
Ntr lover
12 years ago

I loved this so much. It was one of the better NTR stories I have read. The main character getting shinji syndrome, The girl he loved getting mind broken, and turned into a slut thanks to his sister's jealously, and the slutty sister who will do anything for her shinji syndrome brother I loved the first story. Lastly the part where he finds out the truth it was enough to make it one of my top three favorite NTR books I read.

My only complaint was the few non NTR stories in this pack but the rest made up for it. The art was excellent as well Thumbs up for this one

sekairim
sekairim
12 years ago
Reply to  Ntr lover

I'm also one of Ntr fan. if this is ur top 3 Ntr books u read, what the other two?

NekoO
NekoO
12 years ago

Wow ! I ve seen lots of NTR, and usualy i like the story (nowadays storys in hentai is so hard to find srly). But this one … Wow ! This is some heavy hardcore NTR. I ll explain my point.

In most Ntr, is either the girl who is just really stupid, or the guy is a morron or a sissy.
But in most Ntr the manga stop after the thing, so you don't see what is happening after and you assume that the guy has something called "pride" and leave the fuck up.

Yet in this one, seeing the poor guy liying to himself and still getting dvd. I was like awww :( that s not cool. I was expecting him to suicide or kill them every minute, but no the guy is just to nice (or stupid).

Well ty Oliver ! I like Ntr so don't forget us :)

DrtyBird
DrtyBird
12 years ago

When you rage, you win.

Another NTR story that is.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
12 years ago
Reply to  DrtyBird

Well, at least I'm glad all the netorare lovers had their day :)

somedude
somedude
12 years ago

All aboard the raep train, CHOO-CHOO!
See a woman you fancy? DO HER- no questions asked. Police? STDs? Family? None of this stuff exists (well, except the last one if it means gettin' more people in it- poor, poor little girl in the last story, what's gonna happen to her).

To change the tone to something more lighthearted, Papaya Scans is releasing "Yurika's Campus Life", from the authors of My Balls and Yuria 100 Shiki. It's not straight porn, but it's funny, and you've shared their stuff before… http://g.e-hentai.org/g/494965/08f06dd570/

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
12 years ago
Reply to  somedude

I'll take a look, thanks :)

Seishiro Haga
Seishiro Haga
12 years ago

Why Carn, WHY!!?

baka-man
baka-man
12 years ago
Reply to  Seishiro Haga

Well, contrary to Nagare Ippon who switched suddenly from happy sex stories to NTR, it is not really here a surprise from Carn/Magono Tei. He has done this kind of works from a long time. Even his first tankoubon "Dere Nochi Torare" already gave me a bad feeling for the future of his works,…

Guest
Guest
12 years ago
Reply to  baka-man

Yeah, kinda sad really :/ He ended up vaguely in the middle, which left me hoping, but… alas, 'twas not to be.

SoImAnon
SoImAnon
12 years ago

So… I have a really hard time understanding NTR. Not the act, or the motivation behind reading said works; the desire to create a strong emotional response from the reader, even a negative response, is laudable. What confuses me is the form. By way of explanation, how am I supposed to feel bad for the characters if I know nothing about them? Childhood friendship and juvenile promises do not a life long commitment make. Nor am I able to replace the everyman blank-slate nobody of a character with myself (and this is coming from a person who has both cheated on and been cheated on).

It strikes me that the scenario relies heavily on the fact that I actually respond to the obvious attempt at emotional manipulation… I hate it when Hollywood tries (and fails) at emotional manipulation and I fail to see how NTR, with its cardboard cutout characters and silly, contrived reasons for betrayal, would fare any better. I have always believed that Hentai should concern itself chiefly with well-drawn, erotic artwork but that does not excuse the rock stupid plot. This example was so bad I would have been laughing if I was not so shocked at the ineptitude with which the story is rendered…

I do not mind a well developed, interesting and thoughtful NTR story (which I have yet to see..), but this is an example of truly poor writing.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
12 years ago
Reply to  SoImAnon

Blame yourself, you have an iron-clad defense against hentai scenarii :D

Just wondering, if you oppose emotional manipulation, have you watched The Truman Show ? The scene in which we see young truman watched on-screen by his "father", with a moving music, and then the camera zooms out and we see there's actually a piano and a piano player playing that tune…
Did you oppose THAT manipulation ? ;)
(in my eyes, this is one of the very rare genious traits in hollywood productions)

SoImAnon
SoImAnon
12 years ago

The thing is I like most hentai, even works like Great Escape which features cheating heavily. What bothers me about NTR is how relient it is on often clumsy emotional manipulation.

I have seen the Truman Show and am not a fan. As an avid movie watcher, I resist movies that rely too heavily on the not too subtle art of tugging the heartstrings. I think that sincere and natural moments are more effective ala the opening to Up. The opening is simply telling the tale of these two lover and the pain one feels when he loses the other. The beauty of the scene is that in 5 minuets, I care about the protagonist and understand him and sympathize with him. Emotion cannot be forced; it must be engendered within the audience.

In my experience NTR fails precisely because it fails to capture the characters; none are human. The trick to creating a good (and here I say good when I mean effective) NTR scenario is to engender us to a character, which is difficult when the scenario is as dark as an NTR scenario. I think that writing an effective NTR piece requires far more skill than writing vanilla, because in vanilla, the characters start out infinitely more likable. Many NTR scenarios suffer from the dangerous twin delusions that we will (1) necessarily sympathize with the protagonist and (2) find the actions of the second party (that is, the person who cheats and those complicit with the cheating) morally objectionable.

In order to make sure both requirements are fulfilled, the writer give us a nobody in the hopes we inhabit them (that is, given such a blank character, we will assign traits we associate with ourselves to the character) and makes the second party a group of rapists/mindbreak victims/baby eaters etc. so that they are clearly the party at fault.

It just strikes me as an incredibly juvenile way to elicit an emotional response. It lacks craft and subtly, especially when the story is broken down into childhood friend suffers rape and then more rape, but she likes it!

baka-man
baka-man
12 years ago
Reply to  SoImAnon

Try to read the chapter 4 of "Oyomesama HONEYDAYS". There is a very funny attempt to explain the essence of this them, even if it ultimately fails at the end. :)

"I do not mind a well developed, interesting and thoughtful NTR story (which I have yet to see..), but this is an example of truly poor writing. "

Indeed a great challenge, but I will say the eroge "A Profile". A really special case of NTR. Althought the endings make me think, that we can't technically talk about NTR at the end. But the feeling is here,…

catdrag0n
12 years ago

Meh. I've read worse from Carn…. (not that I like it though) :D

This one was REALLY disturbing but compared to some of the last Nagare Ippon's works, I'd almost qualify the first story of "happy ending NTR"…

baka-man
baka-man
12 years ago

""happy ending NTR"

– Well in my case, it is the one of the worst NTR I have ever read. It is really impossible here for me, to give some pity feelings towards the mastermind of story, although "his" horrible past,…

sekairim
sekairim
12 years ago

reading this make me thinking – which one is more scarier? police or a yandere girlfriend?

widowchaser
widowchaser
12 years ago

OK, against my better judgement (and because some of the comments interested me) I read this one… LOL! Once again, I find myself agreeing with Harco- such a formulaic story, with the "sheer stupidity" of the characters really removed it from being rage-worthy. As sensitive as I usually am to this stuff , I spent more time thinking "Aw come on!" or "You gotta be shitting me!" than working up any real rage. If I raged over anything it was the feeling I wasted my time. I mean, how can you work up any sympathy for the male lead? He's a cardboard cutout! No no, it's just too ridiculous. The art was OK, but that is damning with faint praise. I wouldn't DL this type o story anyway, but I'll skip this one as it was a failed attempt, and did not do what it was intended to do….

kalumter
kalumter
12 years ago

i hate this , i feel sorry for him

it nightmare
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qz89
qz89
12 years ago

the story nicely develop, the character also are well made-up, the plot and the flow is good, this is great stuff..thks oliver.. if any by chances can you post "Netorare Anthology", the manga is all about NTR stuff and they have 2 volume..later..

lock on heleon
lock on heleon
12 years ago

ok i read this because i was bored yesterday and man this story is messed up i mean don't get me wrong it not the real plot that screws with you to me its the fact that in all honesty the guy in it is to much of a pussy to stand up to anyone about it i mean god damn its not that this story makes me mad or anything i just think this guy gives all men a bad name

Cold Star
Cold Star
12 years ago

Hard core indeed. Those looking into getting a taste of the NTR are good to read this manga…
Well, excluding the vanilla one, which even out of place, is a nice read.

MHM
MHM
12 years ago

Ewww ….. save for the two "gems" among the steaming pile of ____ (fill in the blanks) – a.k.a. SEISHUN CROUCHING and CHIKAKUTE TOOI KIZUNA, I need to flush my neurons.

Fortunately, there's more than enough on this site to do the job.

From the standard operating procedure of artist like Carn (i.e., NTR), Gods of Vanilla deliver us.

Amen.

Kyres
Kyres
12 years ago

This manga's first few chapters (I think 4?) has an anime now. It just came out in May 25th! Here's the torrent link for those who want it. Happy sharing! : >
http://sukebei.nyaa.eu/?page=torrentinfo&tid=

Ricky
Ricky
12 years ago
Reply to  Kyres

Another NTR animated o/
What is bad can get worse!

Erem
Erem
12 years ago

Oliver just thought you’d like to know. Filegag has malware on it or something akin to malware as my antivirus keep blocking it off

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
12 years ago

Subdesu translated the anime and released it.

But the audio isn't synced correctly so they have to make a v2. :/

Slow torrents and Filefactory downloads make me a sad HurpDurp. I'll reup it to Filevelocity or something when it comes out.

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
12 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

Welp. I posted them, but my post was sent to the trashbin apparently. Why you do this to me, anti-spam plugin?

Edit: Another post I did up above seems to have gotten through! It's only a few posts up, so check it out.

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
12 years ago

And now to post it:

If you wanna download and reup it yourself you can, Oliver. Or you can just copy and paste my links and save yourself some time later on (since I did it the same way you did your last H-anime post) :V

Thumbnails: http://imagetwist.com/wg8zbnkr03lv/Otome_Dori_01_
http://depositfiles.com/files/v6rwwdn4e http://filevelocity.com/ujwj683rx6v0/Otome_Dori_Ehttp://bitshare.com/files/1e44hsa9/Otome_Dori_Enghttp://www.pigsonic.com/u22v1etwa5sv.html

Note that it IS subtitled. They aren't visible in the screenshots for some reason. (Anyone have any idea why that is?)

It seems Subdesu-H now PAYS to get the translations done, so they're actually really good quality. However it seems the QCer does his job really bad or he would've noticed everything was off by about 10 seconds the first time.

inafternooneseesmepostthisandishouldvejustdiditasablogpost

In other news, I figured out what was wrong with mangas I uploaded and how to fix them! So I'll be doing that today. It's pointless for anyone who's downloaded and fapped to them already, but I'm simply doing it for future downloaders (but I'm not redoing the galleries because they work just fine and there's no point for you to right click->save as every single one of them when you can just download it from some file host).

chad001
chad001
12 years ago

Can I request the NTR filtered out,leaving a vanilla-only copy?

Mr. Olorin
Mr. Olorin
11 years ago
Reply to  chad001

yeah, that could be acceptable?

jag
jag
12 years ago

Well this one is so hardcore even in NTR category, let's keep a check shall we:
1. He got videos of his gf until he's broken
2. His sister also got raped
3. both of them got pregnant
4. He fucking married her after all that
5. last blow, 'his' daughter brought to the old guys to be raped
Honestly why didn't he commit suicide already?
I actually like NTR stories when the story doesn't center around the mc, we can see from the perspective of the stealer.

jag
jag
12 years ago
Reply to  jag

opss sorry, the no. 5 got it wrong.

qz89
qz89
12 years ago

jag..nice comment..
as already we know, NTR is dark side of H-manga, it was more scarier then rape,gore,S&M and any similarity to the genre,

NTR not just about to make you boiled in rage or play with your emotion, but also to crush the reality.
Just look at the MC, he was naive and innocent, if you read normal romance manga, you already can imagine the romance, the hurdle and hardship they through together, there is, where NTR came, to crush all this innocent and naivety or any related with pure romance. In other words to crush everything MC held or believe in his "reality", when the "reality" crushed. it's game over.

I do dare to say, the next thing, they will show, MC vomiting blood and collapsed because can't accepting the "reality".

How about the heroine, same, to crush and to break and to control, what always girl dream off, a white wedding dress and happy family, together with her beloved husband and child, of course, NTR will destroy all the dream, all her innocence and naivety also her pure mind.

so beware, you can like this manga and the genre all you wants, just do not let it get into you..

so, how about the stealer, as always they will not be punished, in this genre non of them yet show, where the stealer been killed or captured or punished, they always get away..it it's starting to make the plot boring, so, somebody or anyone can you kill this guy..i don't care, this is karma, the rule of the universe is "the righteous always win" and "bad deed always return to doers".

any comment?

widowchaser
widowchaser
12 years ago

Anybody wanting some payback NTR, might I suggest-

Reward of Blood 1-9 by Hirohisa Onikubo

Two Friends 1-2 by Ryoumoto Hatsumi

Two friends is mild to rough, Reward of Blood is waaaay rougher.. but both have a 'Justice Served' kind of ending.

qz89
qz89
12 years ago
Reply to  widowchaser

thk

qz89
qz89
12 years ago
Reply to  qz89

already see this:
Reward of Blood 1-9 by Hirohisa Onikubo

Anon E Mus
Anon E Mus
11 years ago
Reply to  widowchaser

Unless the villian gets disembowled, I'm thinking it is not enough. Now I can't tell anyone to kill someone, but ladies if you have been, are being, or are about to be raped I couldn't blame you for killing the mother fuckers with extreme prejudice. I have been on the bad end of that kind of thing (not that there really a good end).

Dyowi Peps
Dyowi Peps
12 years ago

Before reading Carn's work, read some of MSTP's work to build some bit of resistance to NTR

qz89
qz89
12 years ago
Reply to  Dyowi Peps

explaination?

T-Bag
T-Bag
12 years ago

I feel like vomiting…but I still fapped :3

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
12 years ago
Reply to  T-Bag

Just lol :D

Vanhyde
Vanhyde
11 years ago

i dont believe i still fapped :v
if i become MC, i'll kill that bastard
f*ck the law

dodi
dodi
11 years ago

man, this this is wrong.. just wrong..
but, hell, i still fapped..

KirinTH
KirinTH
11 years ago

Rageworthy scenario.
Fapworthy drawings.

Resulting in raging while fapping.
MY DICK IS CONFUSED.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
11 years ago
Reply to  KirinTH

Not your dick, your brain. Your dick knows exactly what it wants, and it's getting it :D

Mr. Anon E Mus
Mr. Anon E Mus
11 years ago

Confession Time: NTR pisses me off so much that just reading the about it occurance makes want to break someone's spin with a pipe and skin them alive slowly and treat the wounds so they survive for even writing it. Typing these feelings is supposed to help get rid of them, so far it is not working. God help mankind if I'd actually read it.