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Obedient Girl [English], by Shirioku

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Awww, that one was really interesting ! And sweet ! And censored (argh) ^^;;

This is an odd mix of great and bad (with the great overpowering the bad multiple times). After a what-the-fuckesque intro, the story begins with two virgin otakus enjoying a phone app allowing to control a woman’s mind, and of course it leads them to having sex with the girl each of them has a crush on. I should be already puking at this point, but all along it was treated with lots of humour, funny dialogues, and there’s a really sweet and fine ending that dispelled the bad vibes I got from this story. With, yes, happy sex with love :shock: :D :woot:

I’ll let you guys read it, I think it should prove pleasant for nearly everybody ^_^

Credits are for Wootskie, thank you very much ! :jap:
Also, if someone really develops an app like that, I recommend a selling price of one hundred million dollars. Which should take the app creator at least one week before Bill Gate’s fortune is beaten :D

By the same artist, I also share Wakatsuki Mask Wo Totteyo (“Wakatsuki, Take Off Your Mask”), its sequel Wakatsuki Mask Wo Totteyo (In The Locker), Tachiai (“Observer”) and Hajirai No Puffy Nipple (“Big Puffy Nipples College Teen”, 220 pictures).

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hentairulesVisitor
hentairulesVisitor

Art style looks similar to hentai artist Sugaishi, just saying… though the first few panel make me think of planet of the ape…(run)

MHM
MHM

DAT APP ;)

Tealle
Tealle

The intro is a reference to 2001: A Space Odyssey. I'll admit I never thought I'd see it referrenced in a hentai. It does make some amount of sense here. Kinda. Sorta. Maybe.

And oh yeah, mind control theme concluding in happy, consensual sex? Hells yeah!

Oliver AKA The Admin

Haaaaa, that was it !! I have a vague feeling I ought to have a hinch of a suspicion that could have been something I might have been familiar with… Thanks ! =)

loplop

It just dawned on me this morning about that reference and when I came on here to make a comment about it, I see someone already has. Defiantly not a movie I ever expected to see referenced in ero-manga.

Abetillo
Abetillo

Search for rule 34, Tealle

Tsurugi_Matsuda
Tsurugi_Matsuda

Sorry to correct you Oliver, but the bad part is done in revenge as the story tells us about the bad Otaku being bullied before and "rapes" the bully (the light-haired girl) using the app until it goes poof and got bashed as a result. As for the other one, he is just trying to get his feelings across to her only to find that the love is in fact mutual, and gets the happy end despite his own app going poof as well.

Oliver AKA The Admin

How could I write it without destroying everybody's reading pleasure ? Spoilers are bad.

Also, doing an evil to avenge another evil feels damn good, but doesn't the second evil morally right either.

Tsurugi_Matsuda
Tsurugi_Matsuda

Sometimes, having spoilers is better than having untruths there. The very reason I tagged this "Light and Dark" is precisely for this reason. So maybe next time I might consider using something like this for future minimum-spoiler write-ups. And if you read this, the "second one" seems to do a different kind of "evil" as well, only if you read the middle then you will know what I meant.

widowchaser
widowchaser

Not a big fan of mind control even when it results in a 'good' ending. Still had mixed feelings about this work. Still, thanks for your hard work.

Froody
Froody

Oliver the mangaka is called Shioroku, not Shirioku. That being said this seems to be the only thing he's done. DAMN.

Ehud
Ehud

Great post. Many thanx Oliver.

Masahito_Tenkoji
Masahito_Tenkoji

BTW, there has been TWO MORE NEW CHAPTERS to Obedient Girl, each with new pairings (all unrelated chapters with the only link is the APP itself), it seems that this APP is in fact developed by someone in the story, and introducing NEW functions!