A Straight Line To Love chapter 2 [English, and AWESOME], by Gunma Kisaragi

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By Oliver (AKA the Admin) on 79 comments

Enjoy ! ^_^

If you’re into Gunma Kisaragi, how about this new work that I commissioned ? ^_^

The chapter 1 was commissioned from my Lusty Lady Project friends, Lusty Lady 00 for the translation, BlackRussian for the editing, with the big help of Hurp Durp (and, in a much smaller measure, of me) for the proofreading.
The chapter 2 was translated by Biribiri, proofread by Afro Thunda, and re-proofread by HurpDurp.
Thank you so much, guys, congratulations on the good job ! :) :jap:

I share much more stuff by this genius, Cf
My (most of the time, but not always ^^;;) updated list of all his works
And my Gunma Kisaragi TOTAL PACK !

A Straight Line To Love is the new series by Gunma Kisaragi, in which highschoolers have, as alibi for sex, the practice of Seikoudo. Sex made into a sport, for high level competition :shock: The male hero and the girl he has a crush on will become the future stars of the club, while we get to enjoy them, as well as tons of other girls and boys, having sex.

This still isn’t a kickass scenario, but it’s a net improvement against past poor setups (braindead maids ? Fuck-condo ?), I’ve got my hopes high :) (And we also meet the coolest female professor EVER. If there’s a woman I’d have wanted to have sex with, it would have been her, lol)
Graphically, Gunma does his job, and does it fucking well. THOSE GIRL BODIES ! Those curved backs, perfect breasts, arousing faces !!! The boys are good-looking too, the censorship remains definitely low, this was a visual total feast :twisted:
I hope you’ll enjoy it ^_^

(If you didn’t get the chapter 1, I have shared it here. Sorry if my post is a bit messy, I didn’t see time fly, and now I’m posting it in a total rush.

Complete picture galleries : Chapter 1Chapter 2

Here comes the zip link! Help yourselves! ^^
(21 MB, 30 pictures, English)

Or you can also use the Alternative :
Zip Mirror #1 – or – Zip Mirror #2

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HurpDurp
HurpDurp
9 years ago

Oliver, check my email :<

On a related note, those are definitely not the final since Biri didn't even put his credits on it!

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

What ? I thought you told me that was the final version ? Fuck it, I posted it on the internet, I'll just have to post a V2, I'm not removing it.

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
9 years ago

Noooo!!!!!! D:

ImmortalOtaku85
ImmortalOtaku85
9 years ago

Pretty sure this is not the original dialogue if you compare other Gunma Kisaragi works to this one. Typically he doesn't use "LOL" or "soak my biscuit in brown chocolate"… ANYWAY thanks for the share Oliver!

Jasad
Jasad
9 years ago

thx for this Oliver!!

Alexandrine Library
Alexandrine Library
9 years ago

This is what a mangaka is supposed to be. Hail Gunma!!

loplop
9 years ago

I just hope there's not the twist in the thrid chapter like in another recent Seikoudo manga, Gakuen Seikatsu.

Phil
Phil
9 years ago
Reply to  loplop

This series just crossed my mind yesterday and thus I found out the raw chapters 1-4 are available at the galleries of e-hentai. So far so good.

gka
gka
9 years ago
Reply to  loplop

To be fair, that wasn't anywhere near as bad as it could have been. Gakuen Seikatsu was a self-insert gratification parade.

SpectralTime
SpectralTime
9 years ago

*I* just hope that the *girl* doesn't get NTR'd, like she *always* does in Gunma stories. If you're gonna roll harem, role harem, but trying to be "realistic" about it just shocks me out of the experience and makes me feel sorry for her.

Blackwand
Blackwand
9 years ago

Thanks for the post Oliver.

Is it just me or was their speech patterns a little TOO casual and Americanized? Kept throwing me off.

Devilsoul
Devilsoul
9 years ago
Reply to  Blackwand

I was going to post the same, there is no way that's the real translation.

Blackwand
Blackwand
9 years ago
Reply to  Devilsoul

Ah, no wonder I couldn't make it a quarter of the way through before I gave up.

Devspar_Zero
Devspar_Zero
9 years ago

Black bars? Is this a proper translation?

NJMANGA
NJMANGA
9 years ago
Reply to  Devspar_Zero

I think its a april fools joke, page 1 is not edited, and the typesetting got words that can fit on one line split on two lines, its has to be a fake release, the typesetting is done badly herp derp and me may hate each other but he is anal when it comes to stuff like that

LustyLady00
LustyLady00
9 years ago

And I hate to say it Oliver… but the translation is wrong, too

NJMANGA
NJMANGA
9 years ago
Reply to  LustyLady00

He got me believing it was a real release, great april fools joke oliver, you had me believing the release was real, when the real release no typesetter in their right mind set would release that bad typesetting

Njmanga
Njmanga
9 years ago

Great april fools joke, with the bad typesetting, like every other bubble got a word hanging on two lines when is the real release

NJMANGA
NJMANGA
9 years ago

I know this has to be a fake release HurpDurp being anal as he is would never let the release be released like this, especially with the typesetting and page one not being edited properly, I dont think he would let that be released, dude you had me going for a second

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
9 years ago
Reply to  NJMANGA

No way mate. Oliver posted this against my approval! I didn't get to QC it yet as I was busy!

Also, I don't hate you. I don't like that you won't listen to what people say to help you improve the quality of the work, act out by donning a new username to hide who you are and then start an argument with me you can't ever win (FYI; when you do that, use a proxy or TOR or something to, y'know, actually hide this fact) or that you consistently misspell my name, but I don't hate you.

PrinceHeir
PrinceHeir
9 years ago

Wow amazing work :D

Also no April fools prank or anything this year?

Man been hiatus for a month now. Can't wait for Spring Break to catch up with the good stuff
^^

Thanks for the share as always Oliver-san!

Raiden101
Raiden101
9 years ago

HAHAHA! Holy shit, this may have been the best April Fool's Prank yet. Can't believe you got me again this year!

thatguy
thatguy
9 years ago

cant wait for the ntr to come

Anonymous
Anonymous
9 years ago

Been a while since I took interest in Gunma works (last time was Mai Favourite I guess, masterpiece), but… short-haired girl chapter when? :3

seraphimknight
seraphimknight
9 years ago

GG Oliver, ya got me good this time.

furupawa
furupawa
9 years ago

Was looking forward this year april's fool…i love you guys

FailBoatInSpace
FailBoatInSpace
9 years ago

The best part is, either somebody wanted to spread the joke, or just didn't notice.
http://fufufuu.net/m/12152/a-straight-line-to-lov

Classy.

Favorite Apr1st was still the government takedown fake-out. Cacked my pants that year.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago

YESSS !! :D

Anyone to post it on fakku and e-hentai, guys ? ^_^

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
9 years ago

I was considering e-hentai, but didn't wanna name it "A Straight Line To Love chapter 2". Got a better suggestion?

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

"You're gonna hate Oliver for this" may sound a bit too litteral. I don't even know what name you guys came up with, eventually. After you described me how the Japanese expression "felt", I still don't find a proper way to tell it…

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
9 years ago
Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

Lol

Although, why did you need to mention it was a joke in the comments ? Didn't you trust the visitors ? :-/ Could've just said a better version with your proofreading was on the way, something like that.

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
9 years ago

The people at EH don’t into jokes so well. Remember what happened to Krizalid? I don’t want him to end up getting his account banned, too :(

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

He was banned because he posted a picture of Bob Sapp, something like that ?

Ah, no, a more recent wrestler.

Yeah, looks like e-h people are an odd bunch, when you think of it O_o

Oh well, anyway, you wrote that comment in there, so the cat's out of the bag anyway.

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
9 years ago

I removed the “it’s a joke” part. And it’s not like the people coming here will see it on Ehentai anyway. Especially if you delete all our messages to each other here :V

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

I'm deleting our messages on e-hentai ?
I'm positive I didn't understand you this time :D

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
9 years ago

Here as in these ones on IntenseDebate right here. IE: This thing you're reading right now.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

Aaah, sorry for the confusion. I didn't delete any comment of yours, though. And – I just checked in a new tab – there's nothing in the spam folder either.
What would be missing ?

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
9 years ago

…No, I'm telling you to delete all of these

FailBoatInSpace
FailBoatInSpace
9 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

Best. Conversation. EVER.

FailBoatInSpace
FailBoatInSpace
9 years ago

Its like listening to your dad and your uncle argue about the weather or the best route to drive someplace.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago

Kids, we just passed the last place where we could stop, next time you can pee will be in 90 minutes.

@Hurp : anyway, the secret's not a secret anymore, so I may as well leave the discussion :D

LustyLady00
LustyLady00
9 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

"A Straight Line to Hilarity" ?
"A Straight Line to Fail" ?

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago
Reply to  LustyLady00

Fail, evidently. But that was a fun straight line :D

hoccus
hoccus
9 years ago

I may be one of the few weirdos that doesn't find Gunma as awesome as everyone else does. The art is superb but the girls feel empty and just doesn't make me hard lol. Thanks for the shares today Oliver. Happy April Fools day too.

gka
gka
9 years ago

I'm just trying to figure this out – was this an unintentional April Fools joke at first, or an intentional one from the start?

Also, heads up: Aibuka 6 is out.

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
9 years ago
Reply to  gka

It's a rewrite. It's not a real translation.

gka
gka
9 years ago
Reply to  HurpDurp

Clarity!

ImmortalOtaku85
ImmortalOtaku85
9 years ago

http://g.e-hentai.org/g/681436/bf74af53b1/ chapter 1-4 in japanness if you wanna look!

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago

Oh boy, there's now a chapter 4. I'll have to talk to Biribiri about it ! :D

ImmortalOtaku85
ImmortalOtaku85
9 years ago

I thought i read somewhere that you happen to be french or from France so here you go http://g.e-hentai.org/g/684816/5495685b1f/?p=3

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago

Haha, I'll skip, I'm so used to English it'd feel weird to have it in French, but thanks for the link ^^

Seishiro Haga
Seishiro Haga
9 years ago

Looking forward for the proper translation…

Anon alive
Anon alive
9 years ago

This was fucking hilarious. 10/10

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago
Reply to  Anon alive

=)

Ser Maggot
Ser Maggot
9 years ago

Lol, I love this. Keeping it even though it's all rewrite and stuff.

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago
Reply to  Ser Maggot

I did my best ^^
Except for the editing, for this, I strived to make it horrible, but not so bad that you wouldn't have to read a full page to raise serious suspicion.

Who Cares
Who Cares
9 years ago

This one was a lot more subtle then your other april fool gags you did.
Took me several pages to notice that that was not Gunmas writing style.
The nabbed by the feds one was oh joke :p

Jacob
Jacob
9 years ago
Reply to  Who Cares

I was actually looking for the april fool joke before even checking serious posts. (Pretty much the procedure for all websites I visited today.)
I was sure there would be one, and I was surprised to not find it at once. But well, here it was. :)

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago
Reply to  Who Cares

Yeah, but I can't close the website every year, lol ^^

Vortexy
Vortexy
9 years ago

Lol didn't realize it was April fools joke, I just thought it was a horrible and lazy translation

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago
Reply to  Vortexy

In a way this means the joke was a success :D

Alexandrine Library
Alexandrine Library
9 years ago

Fortunately, I had no time to read it when I downloaded; thus, I would read it later.
It was interesting to learn that this edition of Gunma's work is not Gunma's work, simply, and my religion is too conservative, so I may not read rewrites, but only reliably translated porn, and my gurus would consider rewriting Gunma as an unforgivable heresy. That said, I will wait for the reliable translation. I don't intend to be excommunicate, and conscience is always a problem, I dare say. :)

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago

You didn't even read it ? And I poured effort in making it "really" bad, what a pity :D

cincai
cincai
9 years ago
Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago
Reply to  cincai

Errr, was something "wronger" than planned, did I fail to see a mistake ? ^^

Loki
Loki
9 years ago

So when do you plan to post the real translation?

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago
Reply to  Loki

*soon*

Biribiri translated it
Afro Thunda proofread it
HurpDurp is adding a second layer of proofreading while discussing with the other two

I really have no schedule, as I don't feel in any particular hurry. When it's done, it's done, you see the idea :)

WTFantastico
WTFantastico
9 years ago

Why am I asked for a password whenever I try to unzip this manga? I vaguely remember a post about this very topic who knows how long ago, but I don't remember the solution. I'd really like to read this joke. :3

Oliver AKA The Admin
Admin
9 years ago
Reply to  WTFantastico

Rename it to something smaller, it's a bug :)

WTFantastico
WTFantastico
9 years ago

You're a peach, Oli my man. By the by, this is definitely my favorite of your april fool's jokes. I really like how you tailored lines of dialogue to lead into reactions in the proceeding panels. Not just that, but the way you sharply break the immersion, especially with his "GNNYEHYGN!!~" cumming lines, is bloody fantastic. XD

oldbrokenhands
oldbrokenhands
9 years ago

Pulled a Woody Allen, "Tiger Lily" on 'em, nice.

Meow
Meow
9 years ago

So what happened to this? It was in proofreading like 40 days ago, and no news since?

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
9 years ago
Reply to  Meow

Read the comments on the other post.

Meow
Meow
9 years ago

What other post would that be?

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
9 years ago
Reply to  Meow

The one about how this is fake.

Meow
Meow
9 years ago

I’m aware that this is fake, but what happened to the real one is what I’m wondering.

HurpDurp
HurpDurp
9 years ago
Reply to  Meow

And I'm telling you to go read the replies on that post, because the answer is THERE.

hummpa
hummpa
9 years ago

I dont understand about the engineer