Tomodachi No Tsukurikata chapter 1 [English], by Keke

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By Oliver (AKA the Admin) on 6 comments

Nice idiosyncrasies, but overall negative impression

Honest warning, this is a chapter 1, and a second (apparently final) chapter already exists in Japanese. I’m sharing this chapter 1 without waiting, as I have no idea if the second chapter will be translated too; and if it is, no worries, I’ll share the second chapter too :)
–Update: well, fuck me, a scanlation of the second chapter did come, but it is absolute garbage, horrible English and abominable typesetting. Apologies, but there’s no way I’d be sharing that, I’ll wait to see if a proofread&reedited version ever shows up.

Now, regarding Tomodachi No Tsukurikata, this is the story of a honest but totally dumb girl who had only one friend, a male childhood friend, with whom she has open conversations about life and all, with the boy wondering if he should confess or not – well, the usual. The girl finally makes some friends, the three male otaks of the class.
Needless to say, on the first occasion, they bang her well and proper, something she enjoys a whole lot. The end.

It’s weird, this is not netorare, but if you give me something that stinks of dead fish, I’ll be prone to, still, calling it a dead fish, if you see the idea? Additionally, even though the art is rather good, I must warn you against the full whiteout censorship that disappoints a lot. More than a lot.
So: your call!
It’s been released by Sam, Seanpie and Orla, from Hennojin, thank you!

By the same artist, I also share Aitsu Dake Ga Shitteru Watashi No Subete + Sonogo.

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B99
B99
5 years ago

Geez, that girl had the IQ of a lobotomized rock…”I must absolutely let these guys who i dont even really share interests with bang me, or i will have no friends!”

Seriously, you’d maybe expect an iota of judgement, like male CF actually, oh i dont know, go deeper than just ”oh you made friends? Great! now tell me absolutely nothing about them!”

but i suppose that would get in the way of the sex now would it?

General Hentai
General Hentai
5 years ago
Reply to  B99

You should apologize for insulting lobotomized rocks! ;P

When you consider the amount of internal dialogue written in this story, it’s an atrocious waste, even worse than the white-out censorship. This is far from the only “lonely girl who finds friendship via group sex” story out there, and it’s not uncommon for such stories to have a bittersweet ending. Sadly, such stories often feature a fairly brain-dead “heroine”, but rarely are they as dumb as this girl. There are any number of things that’d have made this story better, especially with all the time taken on dialogue, no matter what outcome the mangaka has in mind (crush the pure boy who she likes and who actually likes her but she’s too clueless to realize that she’s liked by her, thinking herself unworthy of him, or having him come to the rescue and show what love really is). For example, she could be extremely interested in sex, in gangbangs even. Instead of moping about wanting friends, she could be fantasizing about doing it with them, wondering what they would think if she had such fantasies. Likewise, too much of a rush from the otaku scumbags. It’d have been better if the guys had come over to her house at least a couple of times already. Further, you could make them less scumbags by showing that, while they want to bang her, they’re happy as hell to have her as their friend. Most guys that age would love to have a girl who’s an actual friend, no matter that their priority might be sex. Think of the potential if during the “punishment” part of the story, a gangbang DVD that she’d been watching slips out from its hiding place.

Instead the mangaka went this route, making this girl one of the dumbest characters I’ve ever seen.

Battousai124
Battousai124
5 years ago

Second chapter is available in horrible english and with horrible typesetting, going full blown NTR, with video recording bashing the male CF and taking “priority” to the scumbag nerds’ dicks. The video is sent, but male CFs reaction isnt shown.

PrinceHeir
PrinceHeir
5 years ago

BIG BOOBS!

Great work!!